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 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 19, 2005 08:53 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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 Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 19, 2005 08:37 CST
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Ooh, they're starting to get to know each other... This is getting really good, really fast. Thanks, Sue. ^_^
 Reviewed By: serendith_  On: November 19, 2005 07:40 CST
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I remember at some point a some character who was poked with the "curiosity killed the cat" statement they replied with "and satisfaction brought it back" and I wasn't sure if you had ever heard that and figured with a whole new cat character to play with it may or may not come in handy. I also wanted to say that I am actually surprised that the Carl Richardson (hope I am spelling that right) character has survived the last 15 years to only get killed now. I was under the misguided impression that he was going to do something untoward to Gin and give Cain an excuse to rip him a new one. The better to build another plot on? ;) Well I am waiting with baited breath for your next installment of either story and just wanted to give my applause. I don't comment as often anymore because your writing is so consistently good that I am left just sighing. Again, thank you for sharing your works!
 Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 18, 2005 20:46 CST
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This gets more intersting by the moment. I can't wait to read more of it! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Fairia13 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 18, 2005 17:59 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Well, its all but impossible to leave a review, comment, or question. Slightly frustrating, but nothing that can't be solved by plunking my lazy ass down at the computer. I'm glad you haven't decided to quit posting entirely, but I DID have a quick question for you. Remember when in P2 Toga and Sierra had to wait until things were explained to her family? (Stupid question but bear with me.) Well, I was reading P3 (cuz its my favorite and today was my day off) and I was wondering: Did Ryo and Nez ever explain things to her dad? I know hes a secondary character, very minor in the grand scheme of things, but the question bugged me enought to log on (holy piss, right?) and ask. Why? I don't know. I think I ate too much cookie dough. Humor me? Hope things are going well with you and yours. Have a good weekend!
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2005 22:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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 Title: Hmm?
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2005 21:52 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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cute chapter. but im confused as to whether Bas' hair is like dirty blond with a hint of silver. and also he must be pretty goodlookin gto have his suspect fawning over him. if she doesnt be careful she'll be choosing him as a mate like ryo chose his. lol. this should be interesting
 Title: Femme Fatale
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2005 20:53 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It will be worth the wait to read and find out why Sydnie/Kit has to spend her entire life hiding in the shadows, and has to keep running. Bas is turning out to be a very interesting character. Thank you for the fast update and lovely writing. Take care of you.
 Reviewed By: Gin_Hayashi [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2005 20:53 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Yea!!! P5 is up! Its looks fantastic so far and Im sure you continue to make it so. ^.^
 Title: Oops!
Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2005 15:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm...that last review was supposed to go on Desideratum! Why does MM.org always flip you to another story when you sign in?? Argh! Anyway. Apply those comments elsewhere. LoL
 Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2005 15:55 CST
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Wow! I really love where you're going with this story. When I realized what had happened after everyone made their wishes, I actually stood up from my chair and said, "NO!!!" I really hope you come back to this one. Knowing you, it will be another blockbuster!
 Reviewed By: CrimsonDawnDragon  On: November 17, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I was absolutely thrilled when another Purity series showed up, I have read most of your works and was in complete awe. I have throughly enjoyed your stories and look forward to your new chapters. The whole Purity series is awsome and I recommend your stories to any Inuyasha fan. So kudos to you and keep up the awsome work! You are an awsome story teller! BlindSided Ontario, Canada
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2005 15:30 CST
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Poor Bas gets clobbered haha!! Hmm...I wonder who she has to kill in New York! Maybe another "foe" of Cain's, like Richardson! Haha.
 Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2005 15:18 CST
Comment/Review:
*laughs* Poor Bas got hit with bricks... I really like how this is shaping out, Sue. Kit is a really interesting character... Thanks for the update. ^_^
 Reviewed By: DragonHostile17  On: November 17, 2005 11:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I think i saw a movie with that brick thing. some lady knocked a guy upside his head with the bricks in her purse and later when he asked her if she always carried bricks in her purse she said it was because she was building a wall around her garden or something and since couldnt afford to buy them she usually jack the loose ones shed find out and about and cart them home. although i cant for the life of me remember which movie it was. it was pretty funny, i think it had glen close and that guy from "House." any way, FINALLY! we see Bas! i like the whole sydnie/kit thing and the aliases. reminds me of the show.
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