| "Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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is yusuke gonna beat kanaye up? i have no idea what the hell is gonna happen next. that's where you guys come in. you're suppose to update real soon!
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Reviewed By: grapejellybean [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 17:29 CST
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You really have a wonderful story. In the beginning I wasn't sure where you were heading with it, but then things seemed to fall into place. You still have me guessing with each chapter. Are you trying to tease us with the possible combinations with Kagome, but then Kagome could say screw all of you and not be with anyone. The story and characters have depth and I have really enjoyed it. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 02:15 CST
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Please continue writing this story.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 20:22 CST
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this is good stuff! can't wait to see what yusuke does, seriously, what's the pairing? Kag/Yus? Kag/Hiei? Kag/Youko? what? well, update soon please! this is my 6th time reviewing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 22:34 CST
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 13:17 CST
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that wuz so sad! T_T but i luved it! you guys update real quick, faster than any other stories i've read. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 18:06 CST
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wat's gonna happen next? i dunno! that's why i need u guys 2 UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 14:31 CST
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Wow. That was harsh, but really good. I love the conflict. Puh-lease review. The suspense is killing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 10:59 CST
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wtf?!?!?! She better not loose that baby... You'll have one VERY displeased reviewer. This is all Maiko's fault. She put the aphrodisiac in Kag's drink. How can Kameko not realise that THAT is why Kagome & Yusuke slept together? I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 18:19 CST
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...guess Kag couldnt handle a second round... neways, Awesome chappy. Keep goin. Whats Hiei gonna say when he finds out what Kag & Yusuke did? Poor Yusuke, Im sure his demon isnt going to be happy hearing her say Hiei's name.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 18:09 CST
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you guys write the best fics! this story rocks! i've read you're other fics as well! ^_^
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Title: Whoa...
Reviewed By: PMS_Ferret_With_A_Switchblade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God! That just kinda sucks for Yusuke when he wakes up, Huh? Hopefully Kagome can stop thinking about Hiei and start thinking about Yusuke. Please, please, please update soon! This story ROCKS!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good! hope you update soon and not actually next month! =]
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 22:26 CST
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I love the story so far! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :D
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a pretty good start. plz update soon =]
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