| "Just Too Sexy For His Own Good" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: tama-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 22:13 CDT
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Thank you for the stroy!!! Sorry, I haven't been reviewing for each chapter, but this will be a review for the story thus far. It is loved. I love most of your original charaters and loove Kashi's plan of ultimate revenge that will hopefully be used as blackmail later (come on Neji, we know you can come up with something torture/'favor' for Sasuke to endure!). Your original charaters are awesome and I love all of the new clans, though traditional clans and hot men making out don't exactly mix, you make them get along nicely (Neji particlarly). The magic flower that just keeps showing up is also loved and I really hope to get a bottle of concentration to use as revenge on a certain cookie. As a suggestion, think about one of the petals hitting a building, destroying it and Neji and Naruto getting stuck in the rubble cave.....alone...But yeah, I can't wait for your next chapter and will wait for...........eventually. Thank you so much for all your avivd writing and story! -ghosty PS. Dead puppies actually works to get rid of a lot of blushes and assorted horny moments. Thanks again for the 'tip.'
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Title: non stressness stuffness
Reviewed By: Hikaru Mioko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope you not getting anything to stressfull, and im sorry about the ex that sucks. I would say update but i want u to feel better and all that jazz and not stress you out more, cuz yeah thats bad ^^ neways hope things get better for you ja karu
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Title: It's cool
Reviewed By: Tress On: September 08, 2006 19:47 CDT
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Don't worry dear, we all know what it's like to we overwhelmed with life's problems, don't worry about the story I'm sure when you do update it will be a real treat. Cheers Tress Ps. sorry but i was too lazy to sign in
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Title: grrrr
Reviewed By: goodygurrl2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrr update soooon
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 17:18 CDT
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This Story Is SO FUNNY!!! I really Hope You Keep Writing!
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Reviewed By: konoha_kunoichi723 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 07:44 CDT
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um yea i stumbled across this fanfic and heheh *coughs* yea. I really like it so far. um this may sound supid but uh..*blushes* wht's LUBE? and um great job. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Chrys On: May 01, 2006 06:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im absoultly enjoying this fic. Your latest chapter, I never laughed so hard.. gods the sweet revenge of Kakashi..I dont think I wanna get on your badside BWAHAH... keep up the excelent work Chrys
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 18:33 CDT
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Gaspness! You stopped right before we read a sexy chapter about how many times Naruto and Sauske get it on! Super sensitive Sasuke...oohhh....I can just imagine all those drooling fangirls. It's kinda scary because they actually might make a like in the desert. I look forward to this next chapter. Ja!
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Reviewed By: crazy-chick14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVING DA STORY!! KEEP IT UP~ HOPE U UPDATE SOON^-^
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged in) On: April 26, 2006 19:51 CDT
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this story owns big time, please continue writting!
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Reviewed By: me On: April 16, 2006 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious! i'd have loved to have read this earlier, but I wasn't home... Poor, poor, poor Sasuke. I wouldn't wish Kakashi's revenge on any one that's sane, or not scarred deeply. Those that I've given an exception to, step forward, and Kakashi, reveal to them your face, then wreak havoc on this land as you take your revenge! *Laughs in an evil way.*
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Reviewed By: dbc13 On: April 15, 2006 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahah! that chapter is hilarious!!! poor sasuke...
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Title: Thumbs up!
Reviewed By: Kikilo_Lea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 09:57 CDT
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I love the latest chapter! Poor Sasuke.... but, of course, I would be one of the fangirls chasing him. ^^
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Reviewed By: i_kill_faeries_cause_im_evil NSI On: March 08, 2006 05:37 CST
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This is hot! But its most hilaroius. thanx for making a yaoi fic that isnt TOO heavy
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Title: I'm too splexy for my shirt
Reviewed By: Splexi Dragon On: February 02, 2006 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Formalities! blast them all to the hell's nrther regions. *ahem* this was a good fic. wonderful really. i am really looking forward to another chapter. that would be so good...waiting....still waiting....waiting some more....fallen asleep but waiting...growing old...waiting...ok..ok. more narusasu moments and make it more graphic. like...the head of his cock rubbed lazily against the tight muscles of his lover's anus. his breath hitched everytime it almost seemed ready to enter... his lover watched amused at the impatient flexing of that pink pucker he so wanted to breach...but this was a lesson..a test...he would make his lover beg for it before he satisfied his animalistic urges. his lover moaned and writhed beneath him in anticipation knowing that this lesson would only be prolonged if he did not yield..but he couldn't. how could he? deep down he knew that his reluctance to yield hurt his lover...but he could still feel the pented up animalistic fury emanating from the one above him...if only he would let go...if only he could...the sheer power and strength his koi was refraining from ever using would be unleashed...and when that happened...OH GOD....there would be no end...no oblivion...no omega....just that endless pleasure...OR as he watched in animalistic pride as his koi leaned against him as he impaled himself on his thick cock. he felt a dripping wetness on his shoulder and heard a quiet whimper. he gently soothed his love by running gently over the contours of his back. he heard a sigh as he realised his lover was now seated. He gently moved his comforting hands to his lover's face as he gently cupped the smooth skin. his fingers ghosted over the tear trails and gently over the blossom pink lips that were slightly open as his lover drew his breath in a slow and calculating manner. his gaze drifted fom the sweet pinkness and into those sensual, lustful, brilliant eyes he loved so much. he saw a flash of doubt in the depths of those orbs and cringed slightly. he saw the pain behind those deep alluring eyes and in the depths of his heart he promised to diminish those everpresent emotions that enslaved his lover and leave only the one emotion they both needed...his lover then shifted gently and whimpered...it was time...OR...they needed it...they both needed that deep feeling. no sooner were the formalities of clothes discarded they were thrashing on the ground fighting for dominance. after five minutes of struggling they finally settled with his lover looked up at him in submissive anger and contentment. as much as would ordain foreplay they both knew there was no room for it in this dance of dominance. the apologetic look in his eye was the only warning he gave his lover as he placed his cock at the puckered tight entrance of his lover's body before ruthlessly sheathing himself into the scorching heat of his lover's body.He gently stroked the side of his lover's face and watched those beatiful pained expression soften into pure ecstasy... ok, ok, maybe it wasn't graphic i was going for but it would be good to change up the ...ahem...scenes...more emotion and thought exchange rather than pure mind blowing intercourse...not that i mind...lol (private joke)o yeh set gaara and the next dude up. i gatta go now. class time. bye bye! plz make gaara and the other dude happy..together. luv ya dude.
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Reviewed By: death_by_chocolate13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Revenge! muahahaha! erm... sorry about that... please update!
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Reviewed By: DBC13 On: January 22, 2006 07:52 CST
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omg! pls update! poor sasuke is going to be in for it! can't wait!
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Reviewed By: me On: January 22, 2006 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait untill you put up the next chapter! I want to see the new plan at revenge. It's gotta be funny. I loved the latest chapter, and all I've gotta say is, poor, poor, poor Kakashi. Sasuke's going to go through hell, isn't he?
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