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 Title: loving it
Reviewed By: kierasama [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 30, 2011 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just love this story. I have always loved your fanfiction. I have read chronicles and most of the purity series. I think that your take on when hanyou impregnate their mates is a good one.
 Title: CeeCee
Reviewed By: CEE_CEE [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 14, 2010 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Gotta to say Sue, that you amaze me so much with your wonderful Inuyasha stories. This one was so well written, and Taji was just the most adorable thing. I do enjoy stories where Kagome and Inuyasha have a family. Loved the story and very much enjoyed it.
 Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 02, 2009 20:09 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Okay, I'm only on chapter six, but I have to say, the part where Inu says "Yeah, right and I have fleas", and then smacks Miyoga, absolutely has to be the best funny moment I've seen in a fanfic yet! Loved it! First ran into your stories over on fanfiction.net, and favorited them real quick, so when i finally drifted over here, I was ecstatic to see more stories by you here. Please keep up the writing, it's awe inspiring reading your work. Amber
 Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2009 13:05 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent ending!!Well i read all of your stories I am so sad now I don't have anything else to read.I hope you come up with a new creation.
 Reviewed By: coco123 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 13, 2008 23:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love the story!!!!...but i have a question...how is it that they can bring taji to other humans houes's if she has little dog ears and silver hair?
 Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 27, 2008 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was a great story... it was well written like all your others... great job... keep up the good work!!!
 Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 25, 2008 16:24 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
dang... how is it that sess is always so smart??.. the story is great can't wait to see what happens next!!!
 Title: Ressa
Reviewed By: mickiressa [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2007 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This will be my third time reading this fic from start to finish and let me just say it's as good as the first time. I don't know how you do it but I love how you do it. I wish I could update as much as you but my muse tends to take long vacations only after the first few chapters. Thanks for writing something so great that my mother can't stand to listen to me talk anymore about you and your stories. I've read just about all your stories at least twice except for Purity and I'll be getting to that one soon. You are the best and I would marry you if you weren't married and I wasn't a girl J/K... LOL...
 Title: there...are...no (choke)...words!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2007 13:08 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
um...what can i say? supercalifragilisticespialidocious? i can't TELL you how awesome i think this story is! wow! i've read it like 3 times and it just gets better every time! that baby is WAY deep! just goes to show you how far fear and assumptions will get you. i LOVE you as an author. when i start working on my 2 stories: The Truth About Cats and Dog Demons & InuYasha 1/2, PLEASE give your HONEST imput! coming from you, it will be some of my best, most influetial comments (my best choices for help will always be with sueric, the tangerine otaku (met on CCR), Wolf Blossom, terri botta, and Dragon's Lover, Neisha and pardonwink). I tell ya, your writing makes me so addicted...I mean, i'm a SERIOUS tomboy and i feel all schweeeeeet and mushy and, well, FEMININE reading your stories! And, hon, that is saying a LOT! Awesome seems so weak! Wonderful is too tame! Great...no, can't use that either. WOW seems so cliche! All i can say is keep up the good work! you have such an amazing talent! okay, comments...Sesshoumaru, i can TOTALLY see acting that way...REALLY! Homeboy's got CENTURIES of unrequited, self-restrained lust behind that cold, impassive mask of his. He's got a lot on his plate, being the ruler of the Western Lands, and, in times of constant wars, i'd imagine he'd HAVE to be unreadable to keep any potential enemies on their toes. Rin's good for him...Jaken, as well (lol!)--helps him with learnign patience, tolerance, acceptance, compassion...etc. Kagome, this was great, the portrayal of all her insecurities and idiosyncrasies...always wants InuYasha to open up and reveal things to her, but is so scared to do so, herself. MAN, she loves him! Tajiko! I LOVE this baby! Can i be her Godmommy? That girl's been here, b4! such a sweetie! and i just LOVE how she was trying to make her parents reconcile! sometimes the most simple said things can be so profound! Go, Taji! Inuyasha...poor lonely, distraught, torn, introverted/extroverted, fearful, defensive, oxymoron that we all love...he needs hugs on an hourly basis! but, i got the whole Kikyou FINALLY befriending him thing. Poor little angst muffin he is, trippin over his tongue all day, pride, fear, inexperience in social interactions and STILL dealing with abandonment issues. if you only knew the life i've lived, you;d know why i can relate to him, Sango and Kagome so well...i'm glad things turned out the way they did. man, was Kagome ever SERIOUSLY depressed!!!! i was so scared when Taji rejected Kagome and she tried to rake off her flesh in that bathtub...whoo, what a VISUAL! it's a winner, this fic! a-1! -iloveanimecartoons
 Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2007 21:05 EST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
So I realized that I've read Purity, and I read Chronicles, but I didn't read the one inbetween...Torrent. And it was everything I expected from you and that much more. I loved how Kagome and InuYasha were so different yet still the same as you portray them in Purity...maybe having kids so early in your relationship does that. I absolutely positively was IN LOVE with Tajiko. She's the type of character that makes me want to drop everything, get married and have a baby...guess I need a boyfriend first. Anyways, as always superb fic and I commend you!! Keep up the amazing work. Much love, VelvetNight.
 Reviewed By: kitsune-koinu [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 09, 2006 23:04 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
aww!great fic!!!i really liked it!
 Reviewed By: AngelOfMusic [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 09, 2006 19:25 EDT
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ahhh, looking back I realize just how old this story REALLY is...but, sadly, I just got done reading it for the very first time. I know it's pointless to review, but hopefully you still like comments and such...please say you do... well, I must say, after reading ALL of your other Inu/Kag fics (what can I say? I am addicted...) I noticed how very different this was in comparison to the rest of them. It jumped right into the plot, they were "together" by the fourth chapter...usually those sort of things are slow and take time, which I am so used to reading...at first it took a while to get used to but I ended up loving it that much more. For flattery reasons, I feel the need to tell you that rather than sit down at the computer and KILL my neck by reading all 52 chapters of Torrent, I printed it off. Yes, the entire story...size 8 font, 129 pages, hehe...and I must say for all the trees that were sacrificed for the sake of your story, it was totally worth it! Some of the things I wish to comment on, as useless as that may be...first off, probably the most popular topic- Tajiko! I adored this child, i think I actually became attached to the little darling myself...and I absolutely LOVED the was InuYasha called her "baby girl". That was wonderful...can't you just see that? Ah, yes...applause, applause... I also loved the nobility you gave Sesshoumaru when it came to taking the blame for the kiss. I was getting worried, lots of people were making him out to be the bad guy, and then he showed that he really wasn't...that was great. I am amazed at your ability to take somewhat disliked characters and show people WHY they should not be disliked...I always wondered, though, why he prolonged telling them about the flower for as long as he did- why not just tell InuYasha when he was at the castle? I suppose you had your reasons, it WAS more dramatic that way and all...just a thought... as for the "milking" ordeal...*smiles* I about died. How adorable. When you are that much in love that you will drink your partner's milk just so they will stop hurting...that's just beautiful. As I suspected, some people didn't understand that- I was telling my friend about it and she was appalled. I guess it depends on the person, but I saw nothing wrong about that at ALL...in fact, I loved it. I was always curious as to what Taji decided to do with her miko abilities, though...I guess it's just something for me to ponder, and I can just THINK of all the possibilities there! And, of course, there was the monk and the exterminator- I loved them in this fic. In Metamorphosis, I was very annoyed by them- they just seemed to get in the way a lot, to me, I guess...mostly sango and her "oh, it's hard for me too, blah, blah, blah..." I don't mean that in offense, I truly don't, just as a matter of opinion, I wasn't fond of them in that fic, but in this story I was very VERY pleased- they were fun and necessary and I just loved having them in there. I'm sorry, I guess that just sounded mean, that I didn't like your characters in one of your story...I don't know. I'm really sorry. I guess I was trying to point out you did marvelous with those two in this story. Anyway, after I had finished, I was just sad that it was done, and I am SO looking forward to future fics from you...you are truly the most amazing author I have really read from, especially as far as fanfics go. I love your writing style, your stories...ah, everything. PLEASE tell me there is more to come!!! I love it!
 Reviewed By: Tree-lynn [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2006 22:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
i just wanted to tell you that you are an amazing author (although i know youve heard that about a billion times!). But seriously, i tried to read some other fanfics by other authors (after i read like three of yours in a row)and i was practically bored out of my mind!Im afraid i just may not be interested i reading anyones elses fics but yours, so youd better keep them coming!....i would really appreciate it. You really are the best ive found so far!
 Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2006 09:48 EST
Comment/Review:
Actualy crying as i write this, i dont know why! so good, thanks for finishing!
 Title: All good things must come to an end...
Reviewed By: MidnightsKeeper [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2006 23:36 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's over! Noooo! Finishing a good story is a bittersweet thing. You love that you made it to the ending, but it's an ending that part of you never wanted to see come. That's how it is for me anyway. I love your stories so much! Even though it's a repost, this is the first time I've read Torrent and it was so wonderful. You are my most favorite fanfic writer ever. I enjoy reading your stories as much as I enjoy reading Stephen King. And he is my most favorite writer ever. I hopr that we will get more stories from you seeing as how they make so many people happy. They make me happy anyway. Thank you Sueric!!!
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