| "The Next Best Thing" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: red On: April 30, 2002 05:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a very intreasting fic that you have going here, and i would like to see how this is going to end. Hope see more in the near future! |
Reviewed By: heeropika [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2001 00:25 CST
Comment/Review:
This is GOOD! where's the rest! |
Reviewed By: sakura17yume [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2001 10:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Wanted to point out for everyone Sesshoumaru's sword is the Tenseiga not the Tessaiga. That is Inuyasha's sword... |
Reviewed By: Ami Tendo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2001 02:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hoi!! hello?! there's sumthing wrong if u repeated the same chapter... mayb u should sumtimes read ur own work too... and another thing that u mentioned that wasn't rite was dat Inu-Yasha had the Tessaiga... the sword dat Inu-Yasha has is da Tetsusaiga, the Tessaiga is the sword dat Sesshomaru has. mayb u should check ur facts and moke sure about them first... and wat happened to Shippo in the fic?? did he jus disappear or sumthing?? overall though... ur fic was pretty good. hope u continue it but make sure u correct ur errors. |
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