| "Ships in the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An amazing story and a beautiful ending. I do beleave you did set the bar much higher for Love Hina fics not just Tsuruko/Keitaro story. Great job and I hope to read more of your great stories.
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Reviewed By: KALIS45+ On: June 09, 2006 15:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE FACT THTAT YOU CONSTANTLY SHIFT THE POVS IS ANNOYING BUT CAN LIVE WITH I LIKED THE WAY YOU MADE EVERYONE INTO THE SAME AS THE MANGA AND ANIME THIS IS A STORY THAT i CANT WAIT TO BE UPDATED FOR
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Title: Just a funny thought...
Reviewed By: DarkiveDracormia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 18:12 EDT
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I was laughing to myself today, because i just realized that my goal for my love hina fic was to have as many visits as this one! I will personally admit that you've written a much better, more enthrawling plot than my story, which is probably why you've gotten alot more praise! please keep up the good work and review soon!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: DarkiveDracormia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 21:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will always tell a fic writer when they've written something bad. BUT THIS KICKS BUTT!! keep writing, or else ill have no excuse for staying up till midnight!
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Title: Bad Critiques
Reviewed By: Validator On: April 28, 2006 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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[Obligatory praise of hawker] Since I have no useful critiques for you, I'll refrain from trying. Some of these critiques aren't explaining why they feel it shouldn't be how whatever part of the fic they don't like is wrong. Such as Grey Wolf's, you don't say why you feel Keitaro shouldn't react in that way, or whatnot, you just say 'I wouldn't' to paraphrase your argument. However this fic isn't about how you would react in a situation, this is how Keitaro would, and you are hardly close to how Keitaro thinks with the sort of reasoning you gave. Two, there is no such thing as 'fact' as you put it, human emotions is a tricky subject. However, I feel that hawker's characterization of Keitaro is spot on. On another note, how Naru and Motoko reacted, if you read the manga or watch the anime, is spot on to their canon character. So to end this on a happy note, I'm going to send hawker imaginary money so that he dosen't have to work for the rest of his life, and only needs to write spectacular fics for us ^^
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Title: Keep It Going!!
Reviewed By: naughtyvampire2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Suspenseful and entriguing! I love the way you keep the fans guessing with the cliffhangers! What will Toshio say or do since Keitaro is staying with Tsuruko? Has his time away taught him anything? How are the girls doing since Keitaro has left? Do Motoko and Naru feel any remorse on how they treated Keitaro? You are doing a great job and keep on keeping on!
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Title: Grovewolf
Reviewed By: KillerRabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 16:29 EDT
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wow! intrigue, suspense drama and everything else you could ask for.
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Title: Chief Master Sergent
Reviewed By: Tony0521 On: April 18, 2006 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good i am quite amazed with your creativiy i look forward to updates in the future
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Reviewed By: DB Waffles On: April 18, 2006 17:36 EDT
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Wow he is fucked, good chapter, can't wait for the next update!
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Title: Keep the ships sailing!
Reviewed By: Predhack [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 05:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow tis story is great so far. I hope you keep updating it. I usually don't find good stories like this just laying around. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Tury the Master of Mediocrity On: March 31, 2006 03:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I regret that the e-mail I previously sent you may have sounded like I was flaming you. Far from it, Your stories are original, beautiful, and heartwrenching. A Hollywood action blockbuster with a multi-million dollar budget may earn a nod of approval from me, but this FanFiction keeps my heart racing and makes me wish I didn't need to blink! And not just this one either, but I digress. Too many of the greatest fanfictions die out prematurely because of unrecognized greatness. This story is glorius; carry it, and us, to the end. Thank You
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Title: Why should Keitaro come back?
Reviewed By: Grey Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 13:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a awesome updated also we start to see Keitaro and Tsuruko's relationship begin to develop. I honestly don't think Keitaro wants to come back to Hinata Sou I mean they wanted him to leave and he's done it. Besides why should he come back? Hinata Sou is no longer his responsibility. As far as he's concerned they'd be better off without him, and him without them. Also the girls are going to find this phrase coming to mind "You don't know what you have until its gone." They'll realise how important he was to them and most likely regret letting him go so easily. Especially when they remember how badly they treated him. Possibly except Shinobu. By the time they find him how much training will Keitaro have had? Either way I doubt Tsuruko will let any of the girls least of all Motoko harm Keitaro in any way. And also why would Toshio come back? I mean come on! The man was cold and distant towards his own wife and if he really cared why would he wait two weeks to confront Keitaro if he really did he would have come right away. Also if Toshio comes back also again I doubt Tsuruko would allow him to harm Keitaro in any way and she will say somthing like "You will deal with me or not at all!" then indicate the door. In that event Tsuruko will want to talk to Toshio seriously about their relationship which I doubt will end happily for Toshio and I think by this time Tsuruko won't want anything to do with him. It's not an option at the current moment in time but she'd probably prefer Keitaro to Toshio any day of the week. Also I've had a few relationships and I've also seen break ups of marriages in my own family and I can tell you this much there was no excuse for Motoko and Naru to jump to conclusions especially Motoko thats a fact.
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Reviewed By: DB Waffles On: March 21, 2006 21:39 EST
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Hmmmm where is Toshio? good ch cant wait for the rest!
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Reviewed By: DB Waffles On: February 27, 2006 17:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapet I'm very pleased with this story! I also love that you added a new charater Reika Takayashi Good name, also I don't mind the lack of lemon content the story is just really good and I don't think you need it, can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: ItalianMonk On: February 21, 2006 19:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is one of the best fanfics i've read in ages. I really like the plot and all of the twists you've thrown in. I hope you keep up the good work!
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