| "some one to trust" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: SpookyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 21:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a great story. Though I hate cliff-hangers. but that was sort of a good time to make one. I can't wait tell you update again. "I hope that it's very soon" I love your story and I hope that it has a very long ending.
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Reviewed By: djl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 09:24 EST
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and Kagome never have the chance to say what they want to say... that happens all the time anywhere, it becomes annoying after awhile. Anyway good chapter
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Title: priestess
Reviewed By: PLAYIN On: January 13, 2006 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked the story except for the way the grammer is i found it very difficult to follow and ended up having assume that thats what you wanted the reader to see. i dont really like the way you have them talk to each other when they get older it sounded like one of those preppy teenagers that heve no manners and no speaking skills but i do wish that you would go back over the story and revise the mistakes, if you did that then you would have a really happening thing going!!
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Reviewed By: SpookyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 20:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your style of writing is Great. it was a little hard to read the the words sometimes because some of the words were missed spelled. But I still really injoyed it. I hated the fact that when I was done reading I was at the last chapter. taht sucks when I read good stories I always get stuck to them and can't stop tell i'm at the end. Please continue writing. Your good. :)
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Reviewed By: Rikusgirl On: January 11, 2006 21:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE. PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON, I CANT WAIT!
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Reviewed By: djl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 20:30 EST
Comment/Review:
well that was interesting...is there going to be Kikyo bashing? That would be lovely. So Kagome and Inuyasha still go to separate schools or what? They only hang out a few times?
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Title: o my kami that was great
Reviewed By: kags2&kags1 On: January 10, 2006 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls continue cause i luv it
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Reviewed By: djl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 20:03 EST
Comment/Review:
cool... so now they are going to start high school... oh yeah where did the foul language come from? Quite humorous... anyway cannot wait to see what happens in high school...
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Title: ALL
Reviewed By: inuyasha&kagome4eva On: January 09, 2006 19:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really have to work with your spelling but everything else is great!!!!!!!! I really can't wait till you update the story it is really great!!!! And work on that spelling. From, Inuyashakagome4eva
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Title: o my kami that was great
Reviewed By: kags2 On: January 08, 2006 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls continue cause i just luv it ok
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Reviewed By: djl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 18:58 EST
Comment/Review:
that is sad that Kagome and Inuyasha were separated like that... well at least they can still talk to each other... anyway good chapter
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Reviewed By: djl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 12:19 EST
Comment/Review:
good chapter.... at least the bastard is going to jail... Just need to correct spelling errors and everything else is good
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Title: o my kami that was great
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12_21 On: January 07, 2006 00:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls update very soon because i just luv it
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Title: o thats a great story
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 14:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just luv it so far put i got to get back to finish reading the story put please continue i beg og u please thanx
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Title: o my that was great
Reviewed By: kags1 On: January 01, 2006 20:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o pls update because i love this story so pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls update as soon as possbile please thanks.
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