| "High School Diary" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 19:12 CDT
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Love the chapter!!! I feel that Sango and Miroku are going to be together. Don't get me wrong. A goth and a prep being together is a strange, but a good feeling. Hope to update soon!
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Reviewed By: FaBzZ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Its a real good fic.Its weired seeing sango as the goth and miroku as prep and sango not falling for him as easy in other fics I read but thats what I like about this fic its unique!Update a soon as you can!!
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Reviewed By: cami lou who On: June 06, 2006 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, not just, Kagome-Inuyasha, Miroku-Sango, gothic/punk high schoolers, but very original. I really liked it, I read it all in one day. Inthe beggining it was a little rough, but I think it really evened out. Kepp writing, UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: Touchie
Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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so touchie it mad me cry at times plz update some more .this story is has real heart felt emotions. This is great i loved it .I WOULD LOVE AN ENCORE!! YEAH PLZ!!!
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Reviewed By: SesshomarusNekoHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All 10's! Yay! Actually, this story is great! I love it and it's so well written and different. At least it's different to me. ^_^ Keep up the good work and I can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: JtTeE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good, you can actually feel the character's emotions... Only porblem my be the spelling and stuff, but that can be solved easily by reading it over once or twice before you post :D. A very good story! Keep going. Also, it'd be nice if Jay and Sesh got together :D. Are you going to write about their Collage life too?
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Title: High School Diary
Reviewed By: Smirk On: April 24, 2006 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story and I do hope that you continue on with it as soon as possible. :) I understand how busy it is with school work and finding time to write quality stories; so I appreciate your being able to do such a good job on it. Way To go! :D
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 14:09 CDT
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Wow, I am so late for reviewing this story. I'm so sorry. I'm trying to get caught up of the chapters that I haven't read yet. So, Kagome finally expressed her feelings to her mom that she doesn't want her life to be in control and wanting to do things her own way. Also, I felt bad for Miroku that he finally told Sango that he liked her and she rejected him in a painful way. Great chapter of how Sesshomaru told Jaylynn that he loved her and I can't wait of what happens next. Hope things will turn out right for everyone who are in a situation that is waiting to be fixed soon. Please update this story whenever you get the time and chance to like I am right now. I'm working on one of my stories that I haven't done in about three months. So, update as soon as you can!!!!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 23:52 CST
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To the demon thing again, you don't really need it to explain why Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha look the way they do. They could just have silver hair because they have silver hair, or demon heritage could be implied like in A Bus Stop Fairytale. To randomly plop in "you and your brother are part demon" the way you did just seemed akward and jarring. And as for ignoring things that don't happen in real life... works for me. The chapter just seemed kind of there for me. Nothing really happened or got resolved, but that's okay because it set things up for the next chapter. I did like the Jaylynn/Sesshoumaru confrontation though. She wasn't overly angry, but she still had a spine. I did see Sesshoumaru loving her thing coming though. Because that's the only reason for writing in a random close childhood friend, other than having them die to bring the drama (like in My Girl), or having them be the villain (like in Hush), but this didn't seem like that kind of story. Is she going to dangle the possibility of a romantic relationship in front of Sesshoumaru to make him play nice with Inuyasha? Because that'd be kind of funny. And are Miroku and the band girl... Kakera(?) going to start going out and piss Sango off even more? Because that too, would be funny. And poor Inuyasha, Sango's meddling to keeping him from having any pain will end up keeping him from being happy. That's not really funny, but it makes me laugh anyway.
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 23:49 CST
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I can't wait till you update again I love the way the story is going
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Reviewed By: inuhanyou fan On: March 20, 2006 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really a great story. i like the way you incorperated inuyasha's 'bad ass' attitude in the story. but 1 thing is with the demon blood thing just because they were demons doesnt meen they hav white hair and growl. The growling is inu-youkai but other than that i luv this story
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Reviewed By: randomHime On: March 13, 2006 08:43 CST
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Arigato for the story. Update PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *puppy eyes* Pweahs? Thanks
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have just got to update!!! like immediately! This is sure as hell gonna b a twist if Kags will b staying in the same house with Inuyasha!!! Bring on the lemon soon!! LOL. I really loved it..your amazing!!
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Title: Still Great!
Reviewed By: Mahiru/krity On: March 11, 2006 19:47 CST
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OOO update soon please!! you get a green paperclip of excellence for your story lol (why? because i like the colo9ur green and paperclips are the only remotely interesting thing on my desk right now!):P
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Title: Lord and warrior of all things orange
Reviewed By: LadyOrange On: March 11, 2006 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aside from the flambouyant use of colorful language (which, come to think of it merely adds to the characters personality) this fanfic faaaaaaaallls................ INCREDIBLY HIGH IN MY RATING BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now you muuuuuuuuuust write another chapter!!!!!!!!! LadyOrange, please leave a message after the beep. (BEEEEEEEEEEEP!)
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