| "Mirai He" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 16:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: silver1992 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. Actually i love all of your stories. You're very talented. Update soon.
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Title: teddy-bear05
Reviewed By: Hieiluver05 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Update soon/ great so far.
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 11:01 CST
Comment/Review:
heh. i luv the Chunnin exam thing. but have you read the part about the fight with Yoroi and Sasuke for the prelimanary exams? How is Sasuke gonna win that if the move he uses to save his life was from Rock Lee. In your story he didnt fight rock lee so how is Sasuke going to use that move he learned from him? well, I can wait to see how you put that in here. LATERZ
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Reviewed By: little mouse1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
i like the story
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Reviewed By: ChaosChiq [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A little bit confusing though....How did it go from the team 7 people finding Kagome to all of the four taking that test thingy?
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Title: Ch.5
Reviewed By: Darkness Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I Love where your story is going update soon please!! ~D.M~
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 19:20 CST
Comment/Review:
it's really good! kags so smart! update soon!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 20:06 CST
Comment/Review:
why is chapter 4 a repeat of chapter3? update soon though, it's really good!
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Reviewed By: Darkness Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 05:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE I ALREAD YLOVE WHERE THIS STORY IS GOING!!PLEASE make this story A Sasuke/Kagome pairing if you were not going to alredy!!!!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 21:55 CST
Comment/Review:
it was good but u need to have the sentences closer...^^ update soon
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Title: IM SRY I JUS CANT BE BOTHERED REVIEWING AGAIN WHEN IT JUST KEEPS ON CUTTING IT!~!!!
Reviewed By: lilcar12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 03:13 CST
Comment/Review:
>>>THIS IS THE LAST REVIEW IM DOING AND IM SORRY IF IT DOESN'T SHOW
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Title: hey~!~! MY OTHER REVIEW WAS CUT OFF!~!!
Reviewed By: lilcar12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>>>Well here ish the other part of the review
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Reviewed By: lilcar12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 03:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey it was kinda short but i like the spacing ^-^ (it doesn't confuse me like other stories >.
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 09:18 CST
Comment/Review:
What's going on? Where's the story?
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