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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 20:11 CST
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Can I just say I should be studying and OMG WOW! This is like reading a novel or something! PLEASE HURRRY AND UPDATE! I HAVE TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I AM OBSESSED!
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Reviewed By: RiskDraka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is great, as is the story, I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: angelickag On: February 10, 2006 18:10 CST
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i loooooooove this story!!! it's so cute, please update soon
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Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: February 09, 2006 21:12 CST
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I knew that it would be sessy because you wrote, "This Keiji...." HA i feel smart
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Title: I'm in love with this story
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: February 09, 2006 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While the site I've previously read this on seems, again, to be down for the count, I'm grateful to find this treasure here. Every chapter of this story sinks deeper and deeper into my heart, to the point where I know by its end it will sure come spilling out my eyes. Each scene is delicately sweet in its awareness of both Kagome's surroundings and her emotions, and I love how you often weave the two together into metaphors that bridge the colors spanning sense and feeling. I hope, as this story progresses, Keiji comes to realize that hope isn't only afforded to those suffering from physical ailments, because surely, Kagome is not the only one suffering or he wouldn't be a ghost. Regardless of how this story ends, whether bitter or sweet, because of your skill, introspection, and emotive description, I know I'll love it. Amazing job.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 19:27 CST
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Ohhh, its Sesshoumaru! That floral silk gave it away! I wonder if he haunts her out of guilt for what he did to her in the past? It's a really good story, and I wonder if she will ever see him, or just figure out who he is. And if we'll find out how he died, etc. Looking forward to your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this!!!!!!!!Please update soon Iknow it is Sessh I wonder though did he search for her or did he just find her sent and followed hmmmm I love this please update soon!
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Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight {not signed in} On: February 09, 2006 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, so good. Please update soon, I can't wait until she realises that Sesshy was really Keiji. Please!!! ~Kat
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Reviewed By: celesvictoria On: February 09, 2006 11:08 CST
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Wow. Just wow. Your writing is getting better and better. I'm being drawn in more and more and I am so sad when the chapter ends. I hope you continue to write, I'm so excited to see how Kagome reacts when she sees Sesshomaru!
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Reviewed By: iloveyourstory On: February 02, 2006 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is so so so so so so so so so so awesome i absolutly love love love love love love love love love love love love love it!!!!! i can not wait till the next chapter your writing style is awesome to i have not read something so well written in quite awhile.
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Reviewed By: celesvictoria007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 23:38 CST
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I think you have a fantastic beginning here. Your style of storytelling is captivating and entirely too interesting for my own good. :) I hope that you will continue to write and update often as I am looking forward to seeing what happens next. Cheers.
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Reviewed By: Ashra On: January 24, 2006 12:16 CST
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...im more inclined to inu/kag than sess/kag...i'll like to know why inuyasha left just like that.... pls update soon. Ashra Ab
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Reviewed By: bricks435 On: January 23, 2006 11:55 CST
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it was great! I liked it that kagome didnt loose all her spirit and another is there now. I am really interested who it is. inu or sess?! who knows?! ^^ Love to see the next chapter.
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Title: Blind
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I TOTALLY LOVE IT! I, too, am overly emotional right now... is it Sessho? If not ... I don't really care. I just want it to be from her past... but I'm WISHING it's Sesshomaru... *hint hint nudge nudge nudge wink wink* REAL GOOD! Please update!
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Reviewed By: Ashra Ab (cant log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it was pretty good!! maybe im just way too emotional right now, but it was so sad when inuyasha left... but anyway, this looks like a great story, lets see who is the ghost. :D
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