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 Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2008 03:35 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20June08 /bestauarfiction2nd.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
 Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Blaccwolf123  On: July 01, 2008 02:24 PDT
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Hey dont feel bad.I'm glad your still writing this story, you've been writing it for 2 years that is really amazing.You have a life to live.Taking time out of your day to write a story for strangers is really cool.Thats why you remain my favorite author.Your stories are the main reason I still read fanfics.Great chapter and Sessh is an asshole, LOL calling his own kid a mudblood. unbelievable. your loyal fan, -Blaccwolf123-
 Reviewed By: peachzykeen  On: June 24, 2008 17:01 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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ah ur back from the dead! well i guess i can't really complain about the long bouts between updates I'm not really that current with my own..hehe...anyways tho OMG HOW COULD SESSHY SAY THAT?!...yet again not like i didn't see it comming...sesshy needs to find rin and make up....and how could Kagome not see what is so painfully right in her face? and that goes for Kikyo as well...her more even...anyways amazing story update soon i can't wait and please...give kikyo a few iq points..this is just painful.
 Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 24, 2008 11:04 PDT
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I know I've said this before but I really do love Kagejiro. But as I have mentioned smartass is my achilles heel. (Although I don't think I could handle...maybe in doses...) I must say even with all the serious issues/points in this chapter 'Jiro makes the stuff we have all known for chapters seem hilarious. I'm still trying to decide which is funnier, the beginning of the chapter or the end. (I think I'm leaning to toward the latter but it's still a big tie.) And I didn't foresee Kagome's attack. Guess they look more alike than I thought. I figured he looked similar to Sess and Yash but still different enough to realise they were not the same (like InuYasha and Sesshomaru are). Either I'm wrong in my assumption or I have to dock Kagome points for not remembering a guy she had mind blowing sex with. Which is it?
 Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~  On: June 24, 2008 09:56 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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man, kagejiro is so awesome... and scary. i luv his dark humor and his adoration of all things alcoholic!! lol so great. and damn, if kagome finds out everything.. O.o well, i'll just say i bet it'll be quite an explosion. congrats on your nominations. i hope you win, and i look forward to the next chap. good luck with finding a place to settle. take care and thanks for writing when you can. *hugs*
 Title: home home in the rain, where the beer makes the mariners ok (lol back to seattle for me)
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 24, 2008 00:23 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Understandably life happens, not to mention that a good story takes time. If anyone's complainging at your (other then yourself) then send this new hunky sounding bad ass to what was it "knock in their skulls". He's quiet an interesting fellow.
 Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2008 22:42 PDT
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"Kahmayha-mayha wave" = soooo frickin funny! great chapter!!
 Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2008 17:28 PDT
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:shakes head: Your poor dog boys are really clueless. I think if poor Sess had looked up "bad things to say to your baby mama" he couldn't have found worse things to say to Rin. Similarly, Inu just really needs to come clean to Kagome. His double and triple lies are going to catch him like that train wreck that was discussed earlier. Finally, I really like 'Jiro. I like him a lot. He completely cracks me up. Thanks for writing.
 Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline)  On: June 23, 2008 15:21 PDT
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"Dog demon is a popular breed. Want to know why?" That pretty much sums up why I love your story.
 Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2008 11:59 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That chapter was great fun and a pleasure to read. Thanks so much for updating :) I think the scene between Rin and Sesshomaru was my personal favourite. The way his demeanor shifted so radically in such a short amount of time was interesting because you wrote it very real. I'd love to see a reconciliation between them somewhere down the road or even just a meeting between Sesshomaru and Kenren. Hopefully life becomes a little less hectic for you once you're all settled in. All the best (and congrats on the award wins!)
 Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2008 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
is she just that stupid? i mean, c'mon! it's sooooooo obvious!!!! and kagome. and what's gonna happen with sess? and rin and their son? ooh. more soon please. pretty please.
 Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2008 11:36 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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is she just that stupid? i mean, c'mon! it's sooooooo obvious!!!! and kagome. and what's gonna happen with sess? and rin and their son? ooh. more soon please. pretty please.
 Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2008 07:43 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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haha..."this sesshomaru never got acne". That line had me rolling on my floor like a psychopath. And Miroku just doesn't stop with the cool one liners ("That's Mr.Lucifer..."), lol. Though Sesshomaru's reaction to Rin's news kind of sucked (what a dick!) the update was awesome. I must say I especially love Jak...under all that glamour he's a clever little genius. One question though: will that guy from Japan (Sota's father) come into the picture any time soon? Till next update! ~Amber
 Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2008 07:03 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
:happy dance: A new chapter! Woot! Okay, first of all, Sesshoumaru is stupid and poor Rin is going to do something equally stupid. Inuyasha needs to just come clean before he gets pounded on by Kagome. Kagome really does need to open her eyes and Kikyo needs to be slapped silly. Jiro is worse than Inuyasha ever thought about being. The scene with him and Jak is some funny stuff. I knew it was going to boil over! It leaves me to wonder how much longer you will torment all our lovable friends before you let the cat out of the bag completely. Inuyasha and Kagome are in for some hell when everything comes to light. Kikyo is going to s8@t a brick. And I know you said something about Kagome's dad coming back. That should be wonderful (note the scarsasm). Well, thank you so much for the new chapter. It was well worth the wait.
 Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2008 01:33 PDT
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too many good lines this is just one I picked up "For a college town, this place blows. Where are the college sluts willing to bare all?" GREAT chapter!!!
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