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| "Levitas Fragosus" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 12:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh! What happened to Ed! Please update soon, I need to see what happens!
| Title: Oh...my...god...
Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...That was so incredibly sad, but so good. You really managed to capture the emotion perfectly. As dark as it is, I was happy to read this because it focused so much on what I love the most about FMA: the relationship between Ed and Al. The love they have for each other, in my opinion, added more to the anime and manga than anything else, and I think you described flawlessly the way Edward would have reacted had that really happened. Thank god it didn't, I love those two characters too much, but this is definatley a well-written what-if story. And poor Roy, as if he didn't have enough guilt to deal with. Please update this story, it's so good.
| Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 21:05 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG! How in the world could you kill Al?!
| Reviewed By: cryo On: February 10, 2006 11:43 CST
Comment/Review:
;_; Poor Ed. I like the angle that Roy would be upset over Al's death too, he really does care about the kids...it makes sense. But still, so sad! And I have no trouble at all picturing Ed being crazed at Al's death. Question is, where is he now...I sincerely hope they're watching him.
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