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| "Better Things than You" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 16:46 CST
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Based on your other reviews, I thinks its safe to say for everyone that this story is very intriguing indeed! I felt my heart grip when InuYasha and Kikyo trodded down the staircase... I love it so much, please continue your story. Till then~ ^_^
| Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 10:57 CST
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Interesting. Please keep writing. Duels became illegal before the early 1700s in England. If Miroku and Inuyasha duel and it becomes known or if one of them is killed, they or the survivor will have to leave the country to avoid prison and/or execution. I'm a fan of Regency novels and I find your story fun to read. I hope Kagome lets her anger sustain her as she does in the manga and she leaves London (as she runs back through the well in the manga) to get a grip on herself and prove that she is emotionally stronger than any one else (as she is in the manga since they all look to her for comfort and support) and she returns to London with her head held high...and possibly a Mr. Wolf with blue eyes noticing her kindness and beauty ~_^. Miroku is fairly in-character as the protective big brother in your story too. He always tells Inuyasha what's what when the hanyou messes up with Kagome in the manga. I hope he was being sarcastic when he told Inuyasha that Kikyou was better than Kagome. That did not come across quite right to me. But good job with your story and I look forward to reading another chapter.
| Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 18:37 CST
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Aw poor Kagome. Very interesting story , I like it so far. Can't wait for more, please update soon!!
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