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Title: That was excellente!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had a fantasy quite a few times when they actually did switch bodies, but yours was funnier! It was shocking to find a story like this but when i saw the description i immediately fell into the story! I loved it! It was exciting at how you made it work. This is indeed one of my "many" favorites!
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Title: Magnificent
Reviewed By: Chimeara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I need to give u congrats... this is one of the VERY few fics that kept my whole attention up untill it finished and DIDNT leave me wanting a sequel.... uasually i get bored halfway through or i think the ending was too soon but this fic was PERFECT!!!! and i've never seen anyone else use the switching bodies as perfectly as you did.... congrats once again and definately 10/10
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Reviewed By: LittleSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 12:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i loved it!...the end was soooo cute. and the one thing i always wanted to say...ha! that nuraku finally got his ass kicked!!!!!
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 18:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm amazed that you don't get more reviews. Your fics are so good! This fic could have been very confusing, what with each character being in the other's body, but you did a great job of making clear who was who. The italics were a great idea for that. I really liked the period of time when IY and Kagome kept the switch secret from everyone else (except Kaede). Seeing them try to play the role of each other was funny but also a bit touching (like in the grocery store). I also liked how they each saw things from the other's perspective (like the humans vs. demon senses). I found the scene when IY was changing clothes and Kagome had to go to the bathroom hilarious, as was IY's conversation with Miroku about exploring Kagome's body's "other properties." Hee! I also liked the little lemon in the hot springs. Very nicely done. I liked the dreams as a way of getting IY and Kagome to understand and acknowledge their feelings for each other. Again, very nicely done. Once again, there are some spelling and grammar mistakes, so if you ever want to work with a beta reader, I'd be more than happy to help out.
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Title: Ok, so I'm addicted
Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aye, I'm addicted to your stories, I really am. You seem to have mastered, not only the personalities of the characters and their situations, but the love, romance, and action as well. I loved this story and you did such a brilliant job having them explore their new found bodies. I have seen other attempts at this, but you captured this perfectly. Their protectiveness and the DREAMS-that was a great detail-I thought it brought a great deal of depth to the story. The whole thing was sweet and sexy and the epilogue was wonderful. I loved their sweet little family and even more so that Sess and Rin were ablet to raise a family with full and hanyou youkai alike. Such a perfectly wonderful story. You really are a fantastic writer and I find myself sulking that you haven't produced thousands of these stories since it is not very often that I find fics and authors that I absolutely adore. Yay! Thanks bunches!
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Reviewed By: inuanimegirl On: July 08, 2006 23:36 EDT
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that was the best story ever!!!!
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Reviewed By: gentle_whispers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 01:52 EDT
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honestly, i signed in just so i could review, LOL. i totally love your stories! and i can't believe what meanies people are being by not REVIEWING! anyways, keep up the awesome writing! you've got a great thing going here! =)
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 03:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful. Good job. Hope to see more of your work.
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Reviewed By: The Assasin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 21:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story kept me captivated from the very begining...i truly have not seen any thing like that and if i do it'll have to be REALLY gud to get a review. N e wayz...i really loved this story Ja ne, ~$~Th3 A55a51n~$~ aka ~$$~Aunt13 Ca$h~$$~
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 06:46 EST
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Hey! I enjoyed your story very much. Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 16:32 EST
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LOVE!!!! Kag and Inu are so cute, they are probably my favorite anime couple, well one of them anyways xD my favorite part of the story was when both Kag and Inu had to go on a washroom adventure lol well written story, I would have ripped out kikyou's hair, that scum!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 20:52 EST
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I think this is the best Kagome and Inuyasha fic I have read. It's easy to keep straight that their switched and I liked the way you dealt with "personal" functions. I've actually read and enjoyed most of your stuff but reviewing on MM is such a hassle for me that I've been silent. Anyways, I always look forward to getting an alert for one of your stories.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 18:38 EST
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aw me so cute! I am gonna keep my beady eye on you! *pulls bead (in eye shape) out of pocket and sticks it on you with blu-tac* there!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 09:11 EST
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i really liked this story. good job.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 01:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it you are my absoutly my favorite author to being mean to anyone else out there. i love all your stories. and commented on most of them. :D this one takes the cake. but i am sure one of your future stories will knock into second. as you seem to be writing from exlence to perfection. :D write more stories. ~Cricket42
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