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"FAKE in Love: Act XVII, Murder and Mayhem" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ]
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 Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 13, 2006 14:14 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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As always I absolutely love your work. The channerler is totally brilliant.
 Reviewed By: BigD17VBall [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 13, 2006 13:15 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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You are awesome!! You have a very creative mind and I can't wait for your next part in the series to come out. I think I've read all of your acts more than twice each. Thank you for your writing and please continue to express Ryo and Dee in the most thrilling and naughty ways. ^-^
 Reviewed By: rj1ofakind  On: March 13, 2006 11:06 EST
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Overall Rating: 8 of 10
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I love that you capture Dee and Ryo so well. And you torture them so well. PLease write more.
 Reviewed By: urshurak  On: March 13, 2006 05:28 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I'm a big fan of your "Fake in Love"-Arc; I have all of them archived on my HD to be able to read them when there should be no internet connection; I like your style of writing and the stories are awesome! There are very few good Fake-stories, yours are the best!!!! One of your good features is that you update with a whole story every time, this is really great!!! And I like the bickering of Rose and Dee *lol*; I don't mind if it takes a long time to update, just please don't stop!!!!
 Reviewed By: Chaaaiii  On: March 12, 2006 18:12 EST
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Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I LOVE your stories and your writing style. It's very easy to follow, and everything you write seems to just flow naturally. You're very creative, and it seems like you have endless ideas! Although I did notice that it seemed like you were a little unispired for this fic, am I right? But none-the-less, it was awesome and I enjoyed it. So keep writing!
 Reviewed By: Stara  On: March 12, 2006 15:14 EST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your Fake series. It's just keeps getting better. I'm really impressed with your OC's as well. Tim is a great character and his relationship with JJ is really enjoyable. I'm glad JJ gets a little love! I think you have captured the characters well, they seem very in-character to me. Thanks for all the hard fanfic work!
 Reviewed By: tldobbie  On: March 12, 2006 01:57 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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All 10's and i'm not kidding. This has to be the most amazing series of Fake fics i have read and i have read quite a few! You have Ryo and Dee down to a "t". I don't think i could pick a favorite...but i do tend to reread Act3 the most out of any of them. I was so glad to see another story up and as usually you do not dissappoint!! So keep writing!!
 Title: All Acts XD
Reviewed By: Jit ^__^  On: March 11, 2006 14:31 EST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just have to hand it to ya I love all the Acts you've written ^__^ very detailed, great plots, and really keeps my interest ^__^ I rarely read any stories but yours are the only ones that I have kept reading because the stories keep my attention but I just wanted to tell you that I really appreciate all of your hard work you put into your stories and that you more than one chapter ^__^ but I thank you for writing and I hope that I get to see more of your work. Very talented, better than I am, I couldn't write to save my life and yours is the best I have read so far ^__^. Thank you again for writing all of the Fake Acts ^__^ CHOW Jit ^__^
 Reviewed By: AnimeLore [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2006 13:07 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your work, and i'm sorry if i havent really had a chance to review before this. You write Dee and Ryo so well that you're one of the few FAKE fic authors I look forward to reading. Please keep it up and I hope to get the next part of FAKE in Love soon! :-D ~Lore
 Reviewed By: riva  On: March 10, 2006 03:01 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I love your stories. Every so often I go back to reread them all. I really like the blend of humor and action that every one of them has. Thank you for another very well-written, very entertaining act.
 Reviewed By: Diagnosis  On: March 09, 2006 23:10 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Oh please. Serial killers equal love in my book, particularly when they don't expect to get killed. I love it when they find themselves staring down the barrel of a gun and get that milisecond to go, "Oh shit." and BAM. Makes my day, which is why I took time to re-read that one portion in your last act with Dee stuck to the pipe and Ryo with the gun. I've been reading your Fanfiction for the past four months or so now. Being the shy (
 Title: maylee
Reviewed By: maylee [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2006 20:40 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for another amazing chapter in you Fake in Love series. This is my all-time favorite fanfiction series. I love all the chapters that you've written, but my favorite scne has to be from Act 2, chapter two: Well, I'm off to Carol's," he grinned wickedly at Dee. "Wait till I tell her you punched Ryo, she's gonna kill you!" "You tell that story in context you little shit!" Dee bellowed. I laughed so hard the first I read that, I thought I was going to die. It still makes me laugh. Thank you again for writing and posting such wonderful stories. Oh, and if you're taking suggestions for short one-shots, a cute little side story realting to Diana and Drake's relationship or J.J. and Tim's realtionship would be nice. I love Dee and Ryo, but you've really fleshed out the minor characters so well, that I wouldn't mind reading a little more about them. Thanks again!
 Title: They're all awesome! ^^
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in)  On: March 09, 2006 19:37 EST
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I do utterly adore all of the Acts, and every time I get the little e-mail saying you updated I get this huge grin on my face ^^ I'm always reminded why I feel in love with the series as I read your stories, because you capture them so well. Once again, SO much love to the Grumpy Demon! ^^
 Reviewed By: whiteguineapig25 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2006 17:44 EST
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I like how you can countine to come up with stories for your series. Have you tried another fanfic site to post your stories on because on this one, people just do not like to review people's stories. And as for your question about our favorite act I honestly have to say that I don't have one. I love every one of your stories and can not pick out a favorite.
 Reviewed By: SweetRinoa [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2006 13:21 EST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I Just came across your stories a few days ago and i could not finish them fast enough. I can't wait to read more of your writing. :)
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