| "Kagome's Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: PP On: June 14, 2006 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you a perfect score because this is what the story has been up to this point, perfect. I love the way that you had Kouga and InuYasha work together, trying to save her. Then InuYasha swallowed his pride and went to Sesshoumaru for help. I loved the mating scene, not too graphic but found myself laughing out loud at Kagome barking like a dog. That was funny. The nice twist of Kagome killing Kikyo was very well thought out, I could tell. It seemed fitting that her reincarnation would be the one to take her out instead of InuYasha. I love how Kouga and his pack worked hard in the battle with the others. And his promise that he made to Kagome. At least if anything ever did happen to InuYasha she would be cared for. The knowledge of Sango getting hurt then Miroku showing respect was a great touch also. Then to have him and Shippou heal her and even give her the ablity to be able to have children back was a nice touch, the best part of the chapter was when Shippou, even though he was tired still did his best to help and didn't give up. I can't wait to see where this story goes to next. You have captured everything so perfectly, weaving the tale together with love. I hope you update soon. Instead of reading just the updates I find myself reading the entire story, in case I missed something from before. I hope you continue to write this story. Much love Narakulover77 aka PP
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how Miroku's love for Sango (along with Shippos' help) help heal Sango she will now be able to have his children. This chapter was great keep up the good work can't wait till the next chapter.
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Title: Non-Sexual Healing
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol--I made a very bad joke with my title. Ah, the use of one's love and self to help heal a loved one. I love serious Miroku--there's so much more to him than a pervert, yet sadly most authors only focus on that aspect of him. And he's right--Shippo does need to learn about the dangers of the world in which he lives. Well done, Snowfall and I look forward to reading more of this story and Torn *wink wink*
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Reviewed By: neko youkai. cat demoness On: June 09, 2006 01:56 CDT
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i love your story. simply beautiful. as much as i support inu/kag stories, there's a lot to be said for sango/miroku. i love their fluff. especially since it always ends with miroku getting a good beating. keep up the good work. you are phenominal. :)
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is getting better and better,keep up the good work. please update soon
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: freakyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this was wonderful!!!! omg plz update as soon as u can i enjoyed every min of it !
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-obsessed167 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goddamn...I don't ever remember feeling so emotional in 20 minutes before. I was almost crying when I read the scene with Kagome dying, but then I was jumping for joy when Sesshomaru brought her back with Tensaiga. Then I was freaking out when Kikyou came. But then again, I laughed when that bitch was killed by Kagome. This was a well written story and I took immense pleasure in reading it. Please update soon.
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Title: DING DONG! THE WITCH IS DEAD!!
Reviewed By: Kaname_Inu_fan On: May 20, 2006 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! The bitch is dead once again! I never liked Kikyo (gomen to all those Kikyo fans out there). She was a real bitch to everyone around her. I'm glad Kagome killed her! YES!! Update as soon as you can! I want to see how the Higarashi family takes the news! Does Kagome's grandfather try to purify Inuyasha with one of his old ofudas? I need to read this!! Ja ne! ~Kaname~
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: May 07, 2006 22:26 CDT
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ah no! kikyou... she has the worst timing dammit!
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: May 07, 2006 22:12 CDT
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sesshoumaru's line of a human in chains was vaguely sexual... eh. does no one NOT want kagome? eh...
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: May 07, 2006 22:07 CDT
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damn their cryptic speech! damn it! i love it, damn it!
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: May 07, 2006 22:00 CDT
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great last line at the end of chapter three. it really sums up miroku and sango's relationship quite well.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for kill Kikyou,(yes I hate her). This Chapter I just love it. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Darkness of the Oubliette On: April 24, 2006 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the writing style and originality. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: star555555528(not signed in) On: April 22, 2006 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story!!!
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