| "Black Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: namita [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 18:37 CDT
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amazing keep it up and update soon can't wait
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Reviewed By: aisho [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 16:33 CDT
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Thank you Esyla, I thought I was the only one who felt like I was missing something while reading particular sections/chapters of this story. Like the chapters were out of order and not yet ment to be seen. Aisaki, I do however still find this a facinating story and wish to read more. Perhapse you could put some sort of small explination as to what's happened at the begining of the next story to help all of your intrigued yet confused fans. Hope to see more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: esyla On: May 15, 2006 18:09 CDT
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i really like this story so far. but the part with the party and the tennis court confused me alot. it seemed to almost be a part of a different story. but i do really like the way this one is going so far. you are doing some great things with the charaters. supper cool story and you totally have to continue or i will be forced to come to your house and make you continue.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: november lynn On: May 14, 2006 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!!! write more soon please? it's getting very good and I want to know what happens.
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Title: Nam
Reviewed By: namita [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 18:14 CDT
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It's really good. It's simple but still expresses the point. I like the way you leave the cliffhangers, it makes the reader want o come back for more. I really enjoy it. Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: April 26, 2006 04:03 CDT
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Does Tomoyo know that her boyfriend and his friend kidnapped Sakura? Wonder how she reacts, if she ever finds out. Wonder if the teachers/principal knows that Sakura doesn't talk much? That teacher sure doesn't, although it would be interesting to have the principal go by the classroom, only to see how that teacher handle her students, even allowing them to make fun of one of their classmates. Wonder what he/she would do, especially if the student has friends or family has money. If Tomoyo finds out some students are or will bother Sakura, she will stand up to her. Please update ASAP This is really great.
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Reviewed By: blah498y22 On: April 23, 2006 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is looking good hope to see a new chapter up soon plzzzzzzzzzzz thanks xxx
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Title: Me Again!
Reviewed By: aisho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 13:32 CDT
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I still love this story and am dying to find out what happens next. Withdrawl sets in hard and fast and the sheer longing is (I'm shure I can vouch for everyone)driving me insane. I understand you have a life but please find some time for us, the dying - to read your stories. Keep up the good work!
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: november lynn On: April 19, 2006 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more it's starting to get real good.^-^
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Reviewed By: kiki-koki On: April 12, 2006 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's originality is quite low since Sakura and Syaoran are usually connected to wings. Although I find it twisted that it is Syaoran which has wings. This has many good morals to like there are good people in this world and bad to so we have to be careful.forgive me all who disagree with my ratings. Please do better and send an update soon. Thank you
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: almosthere13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey....you posted this also on fanfiction.net! lol. Cool...i like ur story! keep writing! Its really good!
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Reviewed By: almosthere13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey....you posted this also on fanfiction.net! lol. Cool...i like ur story! keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Kel-z On: March 27, 2006 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good! please write more, i want to know what happens so badly!!
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Title: MORE ! MORE ! MORE !
Reviewed By: Madison JH On: March 27, 2006 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Breathtakingly extraordinary. I just read all four chapters and I can't wait for the next one. This story is simply riveting. It is very unique, totally captivating and amazing. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!
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Title: AMAzinG!!
Reviewed By: RunninOUTofTym [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING!! that is all i can say!! please update soon!! i am going to die!! *dies
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