| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] |
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Title: update? please?
Reviewed By: jc On: April 24, 2007 12:13 CDT
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*big puppy dog eyes* hey KOLU, i've tried to be a quiet, patient fan (okay, maybe not quiet or patient, but i am a big fan of your story), but its been over a month since you updated, and i NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO EVERYONE! Please update!
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Reviewed By: unknownpancakes On: April 22, 2007 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story kicks butt! i love the plot and the origionality of the whole package..i would love to read more of it if you updated a little faster, i'm dying to know what happens next. keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: inuluvr02 On: April 14, 2007 12:03 CDT
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Oh my gosh!!! This is an amazing story! I never, in my wildest dreams, would have thought of the gang plot for InuYasha. If you couldn't tell already, I really love your story. I hope you continue them quickly. But, have no worries, I'll be patient.
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Title: i've got some questions
Reviewed By: jc On: April 12, 2007 19:42 CDT
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I'm really excited for the next chapter, please update soon! While I patiently (yeah right) wait for the next chapter, I was wondering if anyone could clear up a few things for me? 1. Who is Akago's 2nd in command, Gatenmaru (Ch 4) or Gan (Ch 16)? 2. Gan is human, right? It just says that s/he "appeared to be human" (Ch 16). 3. What color is Gan's hair? Chapters 28 & 32 say blonde, but Ch 20 says that s/he has "black tresses". 4. In the intro (shaded area w/ summary) to Ch 4 there was supposed to be a new character named Shichi'nintai, did you decide not to use that insanely hard to spell name or did I miss the character? So yeah, please update before I look even deeper into this story (like I'm not a loser enough already ;)). In the meantime will someone please answer my questions? Thanks. (must stop typing now, or people will know that I am KOLU's stalker, lol.)
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 17:38 CDT
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asshoel you really need to update, so i can figure out who lived and who died, because this chapter was totally mind blowing. you have to be the best author i've ever had teh honor of reading their storys, so please update^_^ pweese
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Reviewed By: miley On: March 25, 2007 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.best chapter ever.you definiantly put your all into that one.but your such a good writer i honestly think you can do better.even though that seems highly unlikey since this one was so good.but you can do it.cant wait till the next chapter and next story in the series.update soon.
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: March 20, 2007 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey... AWESOME FRICKEN STORY AND CHAPTER....plz plz plz update ASAP!!!!!! damn... i juss wanna say ur a talented writer.. awesome job...(waitin for da last chapter update ASAP!!)
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: March 20, 2007 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey... AWESOME FRICKEN STORY AND CHAPTER....plz plz plz update ASAP!!!!!! damn... i juss wanna say ur a talented writer.. awesome job...(waitin for da last chapter update ASAP!!)
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 19:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
yes! i am so proud, i almost died in suspense. the fighting scene was freaking genius. i love action! i am so glad they finally got kagome out of that death trap, she would have suffocated. you're a great action writer. i'll read your series as long as you keep making them.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best fighting and tense scene I'v ever read. And the whole transformation thing and how you did the detals on what they look like, brilliant. Now if only Naraku died in a painful and slow death, then that would be very nice. Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace.
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Title: laying down the law
Reviewed By: sky2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank God!!!!!!! I fell in love with this the moment I started to read it! I mean if it just ended I would cry FOREVER!!! Um I really do want to know what happened to Kags dad though are you going to metion that ! well thanx for the great read I cant wait foe the next chap!!!:)
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Reviewed By: jc On: March 20, 2007 13:41 CDT
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This is my favorite fanfiction of all time! I love your characters (Gan is my personal favorite) and plot. Please keep it up, and I'll be sure to read your future works as well (hints at sequels). Thanks for sharing your story!
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Title: Awesome Story
Reviewed By: BabyJane On: March 20, 2007 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh. This story is so great. I really love it!!!! Keep it going. Can't wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: @__@ On: March 20, 2007 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You finally updated! I can't wait for the end! A series? series?!?! Have i told you that I love you? No i mean seriously!! Write more please
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Reviewed By: July93 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 03:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHHHH!!! Love the story! Please update soon! AND YES! It is going to be a series!!!
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