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Title: holy poopie!
Reviewed By: shayner21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with this storyline. I really wish you would update it cause I want to know how they react when they're thinking straight. Sigh.
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Reviewed By: k On: January 11, 2009 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i truly enjoyed your stories concept and originality. however ur grammar needs a little fixing up but can easily be corrected. i noticed u haven't updated in a long while and was wondering if u had abandoned it. i certainly hope u haven't because i have truly becom curious as to where u would be heading with this. thnks for allowing me the pleasure of reading ur fanfic.
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Reviewed By: Naonet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...HOT!!! That's all I can really say to be honest, but either way I absolutly love it and hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Acacia_Jules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 03:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm going to need new panties. That was soooooooooo hot. Damn. I can't wait to read their reactions to having mated. *snicker* You simply must update! Damn you! I wish I could write lemons like this. I get too shy and end up skipping over it, or it comes out all cheesy....
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Title: plez
Reviewed By: sapphire0eyes0love On: September 04, 2007 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just read this and i must say. this story is really good^_^ and the suspense is just killing me. i have no idea what is going to happen! so please update soon! ppppllllleeeeeeeaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeee!!
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Reviewed By: Korune On: October 14, 2006 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I finally just got around to reading all of this fic... And I absolutely love it! I've read many of your other stories, and I really enjoy your style of writing. Though, yeah, the ' instead of " took a little getting used to, but it sure does make you all kinds of unique! Very well done lemon btw... I just can't wait to see what your muses decide to come up with next though... I've been left to ponder on many a thing, like: will Sess and Inu be at each other's throats in their rational states of mind in the aftermath of it all? Or will love blossom instantly? Considering you say this should be angsty, I seriously doubt that they'll get along so early now! **evil grin** I so like a struggling couple better anyways... Oh, but the BIG question in MY mind... Will Naraku get his hands on our dear Inu and ::ahem:: punish him? **even bigger evil grin** K, call me sick or whatever, but still... =P Oh, and mucho praise and gratitude for the challenge by Tryst/Punishment of the Inu for inspiring such wonderful work from amist your muses! Also, congrats on the nominee!! You soooo deserve it, in my humble opinion! Keep up the good work! Your stories never fail to feed my inner evil yaoi obsessed squirrel of doom! **pets said squirrel on head as it twitches its tail in a decidedly evil content manner** He's gonna get hungry again soon... And I know you won't disappoint. At least, not on purpose. ^_~ Welp. I think I'll stop here, or I'm liable to go on forever as I've done on many an occasion, driving people to points of insanity so much, that they mutilate themselves... So, c'ya and hope for more from you on this fic soon!
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Title: *applause*
Reviewed By: vampirepuppet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good lemon! hope u can gather the next chapter soon, i want more! great work.
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Reviewed By: Horong [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! After the 1st chapter I thought:"Wow!!" Loved it, baby! Everything was so alive that I no longer think about the original story in the manga! Now you get me to think more creatively! Inuyasha as Naraku's son, cool!! Wonder who is his mother though.... Going to read your next chapters... NOW!!!
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh so invigorating! The whole concept of the story is so evil and strange it just begs to be read and 'lived' trough doing so! The imagery is so vivid and the colors of your world so stark that it has the effect of a flame to a moth. I hope you bring more of it to us needy readers soon! I am rearing to see the Reactions on the morning after!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 17:51 CDT
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I love it!! What will the bishounens's reactions be when they return to their rational state? What will the parents reactions be? And yummy, thanks for the lemon ^-^ it was fulfilling!!
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Title: I Take the Morining Afters Gonna be Fun...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 14, 2006 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I havent reviewed, I got a new computer and had to find everything again ^^' OMG I cant wait to read the next chapter >< I wanna seee their reactions XD I kinda have an idea but there are so many senarios running threw my mind right now it isent funny, like Sesshomaru's mom walking in O.o' That'd be an interesting mothers day lol j/k Please update and make them stop ><
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: May 13, 2006 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehehehehe. I love the new chapter. Very naughty. I loves it. Can't wait to find out how pissed Naraku is gonna be.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've finally stopped being lazy and decided to review this story. What can I say? I loved it. The interaction between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru in this chapter was every bit as violent and lustful as one would expect between two people who otherwise wouldn't look twice at each other. Your writing is very descriptive, and helped me visualize everything as it was happening. Can't wait for the next update.
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Title: bad!? Good!!!!
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: May 12, 2006 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. Well, I have figured out something... But you know what that is. I have a few things to get ready for and I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed this fic immensely. LOL. Poor inu. Likes pain I guess. That works. Look at who his father is... Tryst.
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: May 07, 2006 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome new chapter. Update again soon please
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