| "'Till Death Do Us Part" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!
great story i really liked it alot, and thanks for reviewing my story it made me so happy. i can't wait for more chappies on your story. i'm loke so stuck on my story hehe ;). well e-mail me when you update at mousey7891@hotmail.com or you can just e-mail me or something well keep up the awesome writing.
~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Saiya-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 12:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my it was sooooooooo sad!!!!! You'll have to update soooooooon ppppppplllllleeeeeaaaaaaassssssseeeeeee! Cliffy evil!!!! Anyways,I do say, please add more.
Cheers,
~``~Cherry~``~ |
Reviewed By: jewelsunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 00:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
!!!!! MANDERS !!! This is your friend speaken !!! if u do not write the next chapter then I am going to kick your butt over e-mail ! lol !! you should seriously write the next chapter ! Now start writeing that chapter !! talk to u later !!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
julia
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nova-chan-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I have to say: it's colorful, suspenseful, funny, creative, and well-written. Even though, I'm not the DBZ fan I was a year or so ago, it reminds me of just how in love with Vegeta I was. I hope that you put some more up!
-NoV |
Reviewed By: jewelsunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 20:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
The chp. was sort but it was kool. I got a lil' confused on the color deal but I'm always confused so lol!!!! If no one else writes a comment then I will have to write 13 of them !!! lol !! Well gotta run....... BYE!!!!
Julia |
Reviewed By: jewelsunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
OK !!! Me again !!! HURRY-UP and write that next chp.!!!! ok? lol... Well what should i say?? I've already added a comment 2 times... so just scroll up and read one of those... well gotta run !!!
bye !
§ julia § |
Reviewed By: Riona 029 On: May 31, 2002 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great cliffy! Eviiil or what? Please add more. |
Reviewed By: Jewelsunicorn On: May 27, 2002 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a kool,interesting story ! Not very creative with the names,but creative with the character personalities. It is very hard to lose intrest in the story. I hope more chp. are published soon.!!! |
Reviewed By: Nick On: May 27, 2002 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeease add more. I'm begging here! I wanna know what Veggie's secret is!!
P.s I think you're story's great! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 05:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
these marrying jokes are cracking me up. lol Can't wait for the next chapters! |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Saiya-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2002 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hey,Princess, Likeys likeys! hehehe.'Twas a nice chap!More updates, Please!(Yours is much better than mine!)See Ya!
~Cherry~;) |
Reviewed By: Keruseyu_sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2002 19:56 CST
Comment/Review:
i really like ur story plz get the next chap up soon!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: March 08, 2002 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very ausome!!! Add more soon!! |
Reviewed By: Mel On: March 07, 2002 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Umm... Where should I start. Very nice Manders, very nice. The style very good, I read lots & this is above most. Spelling/Grammer seems fine. I only reason the 'enjoyment' is a 7 is b/c, well, ya know I'm not really into DBZ, so I can't really comment on the 'originality/creativity.' etc. But, overall, from just reading it, it seems like it can have a lot of protentional. And, by the way, techenly, what you've written, you do own. Fan-Fic is short for Fantasy Fiction. Meaning, it's not true, so people reading it *should* know that & you really don't have in say all that every chapter. You wrote it based on something else, so it's copyrighted to you. OK, I'm done now.
Laters,
~Angel |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh, evil cliffy! Please add more soon! |
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