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Title: Orgasmic
Reviewed By: swngdcr On: March 25, 2006 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Original! I like the story line a lot. Sasuke = hot. I would prolly have an orgasm too if I saw him like that singing. Very entertaining. Especially the friendship between Kiba and Naruto. And Hinata! Kiba is too cute around Hinata. My question is if Sasuke saw Naruto in the audience at all... Probably not cuz of the lighting. But I'm very interested in first reactions. Will sparks fly? I love the writing. I have this huge pet peeve about grammar so be glad that I'm not ripping you on grammar. It was very well written and I'm looking forward to another chapter!
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Title: WHY YES DO PLEASE SO!
Reviewed By: Kyuubi No Kitsune On: March 23, 2006 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DO POST THE NEXT! This is a great story, and I can't wait to see what Sasuke-kun does when Naruto-kun confesses *giggles* ja ne
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Title: YESH
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
YESH, I do in fact think you should post the next one. I think this is such a fun idea, I really can't wait to see how things turn out for our favorite kitsune! ^^
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