| "Heart of the Stars" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: azzera On: May 18, 2007 05:15 CDT
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Hey you were saying in another chapter that you wished that writers of crossovers would update more, well you could also update more often! By the way, you may want to read what you write before you post it, there are a few mistakes that look to be just from typing. Also when are you going to get to them traveling? Plus, what happened with Sesshomaru training her? I have an idea, by the way, could he maybe have adopted her while he was training her? Just a thought. I love the story! I love crossovers with Kingdom Hearts with Inuyasha, and the pairings with Kagome and Riku! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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noooooooooooooooooo!!! why did it end so soon!!! please up date!sooon!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 17:26 CDT
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What is this could it be...oh my god...yes it just might be...Oh My God its an UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kirara stared at Kagome as if she had just grown a second head then zipped over to Riku when Kagomes face turned into a even more evil look. She looked almost demonic when he thoughts turned from Kairi to her revenge on Inuyasha First I'm make him reproduce A-sexually then I'll eat his liver and make him eat the fungus off my grandfathers feet and after that I'll cut off his penis and use it as a party hat while I taunt Kikiyo with it and I'll make him sing London bridge is coming down! Oh! Yes That's good MUHAHAHAHAHA! (Star: That entire thing I came up with in my U.s. History class we had to find a creative way to get rid of Indians…I won) lONG BUT VERY FUNNY
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Reviewed By: renee582 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad u updated i really like your story & would u mind tellimg me what story u were reading about sess & kags?
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Title: hey could've been a typo
Reviewed By: shiroi hana lover of hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BUT RIKU WAS HOTT HOTT HOTT HOTT!! that song sanctuary is addictive!!!!!! goood ficky please update! p.s. ur totally right but that fight scene was to cool!!!
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Title: What!?
Reviewed By: ? On: April 14, 2006 15:01 CDT
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Then why did during beginning Roxas and Namine appear w/out other!?
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Reviewed By: ebit333 On: April 13, 2006 16:46 CDT
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This is really good! I love kingdom hearts inuyasha xovers, But there aren't many of them(crys silently) Oh well I also really want to get the kingdom hearts 2 game but my evil brother sold our play station 2 EVIL....write more!!
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Reviewed By: crystal lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amusing story you've got here...would have given an overall full rating if there weren't so many grammatical errors...but all in all i like what you've written...
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Reviewed By: monkey gurl15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 17:57 CDT
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i think there is something wrong with chapter two. i'm only getting a couple of paragraphs, which is really sad because i like your story. maybe somethings wrong on my end. i'm not sure though. do you think you could check it out, please?
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Title: Umm...
Reviewed By: Nutty7Brat~ On: April 11, 2006 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm... I had beat the game too. One who fighting along side with Sora is actally Roxa, the boy from the beginning... Riku is actally staying on island with Kairi (?) Gee! Look like you haven't pay attietion (?) at the game! Well... Roxa and Riku DO kinda look like... ^^' Sorry If You Think This Is A Flame Thingy... KEEP UP YOUR GOOD WORK!!!
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Reviewed By: renee582 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool fic i really enjoy reading it plz update soon
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Title: hey! *poke* ^_^
Reviewed By: shiroi hana lover of hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
somebody needs to update ne? and make longer chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: darksorrowfulshadodws On: April 05, 2006 18:15 CDT
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please please please please please update this fic i am on a kingdom hearts high right now i can't get enough of it and the sad thing is that i dont have the game nor the console, no i have a stupid xbox anyways please update now! i love this pairing and i love the character espeically riku he is very very sexy in the deep dive scene or as people know the not so secret secret ending well update now please!
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies (not logged in) On: March 31, 2006 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, dude! Looks like I'm the first reviewer. Neat! Anyway, awesome chapter. I love Kingdom Hearts. Riku's hot too! ^_^ Update soon, PUH-WEASE!!!! L8ER, DUDE!
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