| "Of Might And Magic" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eather Kag kurama.... OR.... hie kagome....
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Reviewed By: Elemental_dea (not logged in) On: December 26, 2006 13:29 CST
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please write some new chapters soon!!!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 07:51 CST
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Wow this is so good!!!I've already added it to my favorites list! I'll be watching for an update! So plz update asap
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okey, I fucking love this story, but some of the chapters are not in the right order. (dont have to listen if you dont wanna) Update when ever ya want.
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Reviewed By: kawaii-miko On: November 17, 2006 03:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this cant wait for some kurama and kag and the dark tournorment way cool idears u hade update soon
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Reviewed By: kiki/inuchick On: November 07, 2006 08:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this storie is so awesome you so need to update soon because i'm very curious and'PLEASE' DO NOT PUT SANGO WITH KUWABARA' well anyway nice story so please update soon peace shawty
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 12:27 CST
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Can't wait to see what you have in mind from here! I'm a huge Hiei/Kagome fan, so I'm glad you're going the Kurama/Kagome/Hiei route. I take it you're going to do a whole tournament, right? Looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: mommamars [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UGGG!!!! i like both stories!!!!! you should jump from one to another
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 00:02 CDT
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Update soon. Can't wait to read Yusuke's reaction to Kagome and the rest being Youkai. What the Dark tournament consist of and if Inuyasha and Kikyou show up.
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Reviewed By: KnightHonor15 On: June 16, 2006 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is good but please don't make it so that..... I don't know, that they all are the greatest and win immediatly at the Dark Tournament or something. Give them some time to become used and adjusted to their powers and that the boys or who ever the girls fall in love with don't fall in love with so fast. That takes it away from the story line too fast. Am I getting the picture that it's a Kagome/Kurama but a Youko/Hiei?????? Freaky.............. and definetly doesn't fit. Sorry but I don't see any of the characters, especially Youko being gay. He seems to be more of a ladies man. Try to relax more with your writing style. You seem stiff and almost as if your rushing to get things on paper or in this case, typed. Take your time. If you don't update soon enough, that's fine. Just take your time, think it out and write the way you want to, not the way people expect. I really do like your story but concentrate more on the storyline than the description of the weapons, outfits, and blahhity.
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Reviewed By: Earth Angel On: June 14, 2006 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the Hot pink idea for Kagome. But hurry up with the update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: May 24, 2006 09:11 CDT
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hmmm? so a threesome huh? nice chapter. keep it up
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 15:42 CDT
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Lol. I really loved it! Great work! Update asap please!
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR (not logged in) On: May 14, 2006 11:18 CDT
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i like the new chapter, but it seemed to ake forever to get throug the descriptions. i really like where the plot is going though. please update soon, cuz you left it at a very interesting cliffhanger.
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