| "Strangers Like Me" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Title: COMMENTS :D
Reviewed By: -Miyako- On: April 01, 2007 21:15 CDT
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Your starting over? D: Gah! I'll still just keep reading. XD Because I LOVE YOU. Okay that was weird. :D
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Title: oh, yah
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 20:43 CDT
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Oh, I am REALLY hoping tthat this is an April fools joke XD
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 20:10 CDT
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I won't chew you out, because I am working on a story of my own and don't even want to post it till I am done (not a one-shot but very short *runs from Ed*). Just update when you can and remember that sometimes your worst critic is yourself. =)
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Title: D=
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 16:33 CDT
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WARNING: here coms a spazz, if you'v ever seen one. I'm apologising in advance for language -_-Oh. My. Fucking. God, WOMAN! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!?!?! *Chews butt out* I will post ten reviews for everychapter if I have to! PLEASE DON'T START OVER... *is redused to pitiful mumbling heap* I, personally, HATE the first few chapters of everystory- I'm usually taking it to fast. If you start over again, I'll...I'll.. I'LL THROW SOMETHING WORSE THAN A POINTY OBJECT! I'LL THROW ARMSTRONG! *Cue menacing pink sparklies* Anyways, I promise, on my life, that I'll review every chapter. Okay, maybe not on MY life, but on my sister's, M'kay? ;)
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Reviewed By: kk fangirl On: April 01, 2007 16:29 CDT
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jeez, you can't stick with one can ya'? Ah, well, the thing is u r trying. Anyway, if you have writers block, email me and I'll help because I love you that much...and I want to READ the story...not peices...yea, so I chewed ur butt out.
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Title: ^^ yayersoosies
Reviewed By: WD (Kiki) On: March 29, 2007 21:16 CDT
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Oh! That was a lovely first chapter! sorry that I havn't reviewed in a while...D= But you are very talented with your story. I have to say, the length differed alot, so much that you should seriously think about splitting the first chapter into two, and the second chapter being the third instead. I love the plot,it's going along well! *hands you flowers* you earned tulips ^^ okay, Update soon, ya hear??
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Title: on chapter 1...
Reviewed By: Britni Fullmetal Otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was reaaaaaaally good!! I gasped when I read "ouborous" on Taya and couldn't stop laughing when it said "OH NO! What if they start kissing?!" Haha! But then I let out a sigh of relief too when you said that she wasn't a homonculi. *phew* Now I'm gonna read the second chappie! wahoo!!
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Title: New Chapter
Reviewed By: kara-chana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 04:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a while I was afraid you were going to drop the story, but you didn't! I love this and NEED for you to update! Both this and your new one!! Love ya- Kara-chan
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 03:56 CST
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I don't think I can add to the reviews already posted except to say that this is a great story. It is added to favorites.
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Title: Kudos!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: snappyclappyboom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! this is amazing! it is so much better than my story!!! i love it! plz update! i should 2 but i've been so worried what with my cousin being in the hospital... u r awesome! and makii also is my inspiration even though i don't know her too well!
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Title: Oh...My..God
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this! you did an exelent job on the first chapter, really good. I'll totally be waiting (And reviewing) on the next chapter. By The Way... *eats your fan* I feel better. updating helped alot. ALOT oO;;
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: MistedVines [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh....I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!! When you started over again I didn't realize how much better you we're going to make it! Kudos and update soon!!
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Title: WHEEE
Reviewed By: NSI(Makii On: January 05, 2007 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME OMG THIS IS BETTER THAN MY STORY ANYDAY! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EE HURRY UP BEKAH I LURVE YOU AND..Kakashi is flirting with Al to get an apple. Al's freaking. Yeah.... See ya later ^-^ (P.s. My phone line won't be installed until tuesday now, and I've already started chapter 26, and wrote down the plans for the next few chapters. Operation::Boarding School?? will be a 6 part chapter series. ^-^ Love ya)
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Reviewed By: kara-chana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o WOW, that's all I can say is...WOW...
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Title: erk! *dies*
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 16:50 CST
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I.Need.to.read.your.FANFICTION!! *collapses*losing...motivation...light, growing...dimmer.UPDATE! I'll review every chapter! (well, I'll try.) JUST PLEASE UPDATE!
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