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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 05:34 PDT
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I just wanted to steal this review so that I could brag about being your 800th reviewer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD do you understand just how amazing your story is? to aquire this many reviews? :P well sure I know there are some stories with over 1000 reviews, but all of ours are made with love :P *heart* well done 800 my love~
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Title: OMG, this is amazing! ^^
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 01:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all I have to start by telling you that this fic is nothing short of amazing. I can feel the emotions of all the characters as you write and describe them. The love scenes are nothing short of beautiful and intimate. You convey the thoughts and feelings of the characters so well. I am very impressed by your talent and I hope you continue writing more beautiful stories such as this one, which still has more! ^^ I'm SO happy!!! ^^ I thought everything was perfect about your story with only one thing I could suggest for you to work on, which could probably be solved by a good beta, namely the grammar that you use throughout the fic. Your spelling is excellent but the grammar could use a little work. Other than that, your story is flawless. I can't wait to your next chapter since you left us on such a delicious cliffy with Inuyasha finally remembering! Took that dogboy long enough! hehe I anxiously await your next update and keep up the good work! ^^
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: animegurl_06 On: July 04, 2006 23:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG PLZ UPDATE SOON I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!! I LOVE THIS STORY...
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 22:18 PDT
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So, Inu finally remembered, huh? Personally I say Kagome needs to make him suffer. He should have told that b*tch Paris that he was w/Kagome. Now he realizes how much of an idiot he was its time for him to grovel- maybe for a few weeks or months.
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Title: WOOT WOOT
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 20:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYAYYAYAAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAyAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA!!!!!!!!!!! OKAY I AM SMILING TO THE POINT WHERE MY CHEEKS HURT!!!!!! THAT WAS BEYOND BRILLIANT!!!MY HEART WAS THUMPING SO HARD!!!! yayayayay!! GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!! I LOVE YOU SOOOOO MUCH RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! !OH SHOOT ITS LATE AND I HAVE TO CLOCK OUT BUT I SWEAR TO YOU THAT THIS CHAPTER HAD ME JUMPING OUT OF MY SEAT AND SCREAMING LIKE AN IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I THOGUHT YOU WERE A GREAT WRITER BEFORE BUT THIS HAS PASSED GREAT AND HIT STRAIGHT INTO BEST SELLER IF THIS WAS A BOOK!! YOU ARE THE MOST BRILLIANT AND EXCELLENT AND AMAZING AUTHOR!!!!!! YOUR SKILLS KICK BUTT!!!....SHOOT I STILL HAVE TO GO BUT I SO NEED TO TELL YOU HOW AWESOME AND AWESOME THIS STORY IS!!!!! THIS CHATPER WAS SOOOOOOO....EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! HEHEHEHEHLOLOLOLOHAHAHAHAHAYAYAYAYAYAYAWOOOHOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! OKAY NOW I AM SERIOUSLY GOING BUT I SOOO CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! !YOU ARE JUST PLAIN AMAZING AND BRILLIANT TWO THUMBS UP!!!!!!!!! FIVE STAR!! BEST SELLER!!!!! STORY OF THE YEAR!!! BEST EVERYWHERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 19:00 PDT
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Wonderful I have so far read all but one of your stories.... looking forward to more of this one
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Title: and he's back...
Reviewed By: Yasha-boy aka terry On: July 04, 2006 14:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all hell women find time to have it all come back to him! i mean now he thinks everything is his felt. i would still be upset that she give up like that. will ya know you have to update or meanha have a lose it. mark and sura are still reading so know we all have ya back. 7OO in 9O something reviews says alot sweet heart so keep doin' what ya doing ok. and thank you for those kind words ya mailed to meanha bout my last review. i was just speaking the truth, love really isn't hard people make it hard love really doesn't have to hurt but people make it hurt. there's a poem that meanha did that went something like that you should tell her to sent it to you. yes us men can be slow or bakas at times but you guys can be too. we're not the best and i'll be the first man to say that women are at times alot better then us! some of y'all can put up with the most painful things and still keep love in your hearts and i'm happy to know women like that are out there. no matter what other man tells you, know that you're our back bone. if we didn't have you we couldn't live. sometimes we get teird and want to give up on everything aswell. and need our woman to hold our hand and say "baby it's gonna be alright cuz i'm with you all the way" or to let US cry in YOUR arms were we feel safe, cared and loved for. i know you it can be hard to think men like that are real anymore but we are. so please don't give up OR in to soon in believe that we're not. i wish that girls out there who do think and feel the way kagome did (and i know some of y'all are reading this fic!) understand how men in inuyasha's place would feel. if we all took time to do that love itself wouldn't hurt so much if at all. meanha once told me that "love is a living being. who get hurt more then anybody else. we use it and its name, we give it only to leave it to cry in tears later, beat it tell there's almost nothing laft but cry again when it hard to come by again. yet...some how through all the pain love itself feels. it never stops giving, it never stops careing, or holding on, and most of all IT never in IT'S life stops loving and helping you pickup the rest of your heart when it has fallin' into the deepest of darkness. so for once why can't people just love 'love' itself and know that IT'S not the one who hurts you people are. and if it can forgive them why can we too and move on even with the tears?" i get close to tears myself when i think of how true her words are. and it hurts me to know that alot of people don't think that way or even take the time to. well now you see why i and everyone else loves her so much. with out in our lives somehow we wouldn't know what to do. I hope you too take those words to heart in fact I pray that all you're reviews do too. well i'm stop now i know you just about sick of me. so update soon or as meanha aka LW says "NOW" and have fun well doing k beautiful.^_^
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Title: YAH!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 12:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still mad at kags. know she may still do something supid! but...HE'S BACK!!!!!! My InuYasha's back you've made me so happy! I love it and I still want to see him kick sessy ass!-.- Oh my what will happen now? I can wait to see(read) the look on Kagome's face when she see he remember's her!!!! Terry want to review now so I'll talk to ya later. LOVED IT UPDATE OR I'LL GET YOU!!!!! mwah
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 23:42 PDT
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GWAAAAAAAAAAAAARGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!! ZOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE OR I WILL DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! (THE KEY!THEKEEEEEEY!!!!!) : D LOVE
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Reviewed By: Lilly McFadden On: July 03, 2006 22:08 PDT
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Oh - you have totally left us hanging in suspense! Great chapter! I loved the ending. And I really liked the interaction between Sess and Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 20:35 PDT
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OMG YAY ::does an insane happy dance:: I'm sooo damn happy that Inuyasha finally remembered! Can't wait for the next chapter!! I know it takes time to write and get inspiration... but PLEASE update within a week!
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster being a lazy ass On: July 03, 2006 19:47 PDT
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OMGOMGOMGOMOMGOMGMGOMGOGOGOMGOMOGMOGOGM!!!!!!!!!*cant catch breath* OMG!!!! I love it i cant wait for the next chapter, damn i need to stop typing so damn fast, i mean adrenalin is racing through me right now cuz my mom will be home soon and i wanted to finish this chapter but she called and said she was on her way, and i still had to clean the house!!! bad me bad bad BAD me!!!!! oh well i got half of what she told me to do done, just not the outside XD my horse took a shit in the drive way and my mom wanted me to clean that , the house, AND the stuff from the horse trailor before she got home!!! talk about help me!!!!!! lol, at least its semi done, she cant yell at me! *races around the house like a chicken with its head cut off and tries to hide before she gets here* (no really thats what i've ben doing!!!!) damn im tired X_X.
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Title: noooooooo
Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 12:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noo please don't stop here i'm crying just don't please come back today please please please i'm begging you and last but not least PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: inashosetai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 11:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my freakin god! I am like... CRYING!!! GODS this was just a sad chapter!!! I mean... I was just so angry at Sango for speaking like that, and I kept berating Kagome in my mind for not... like... reasoning with Inuyasha or something! Most of all, I was just plain frustrated at everything! But it was a good thing Miroku told Inuyasha where Kagome was, 'cause I swear I would've been steaming at Sango for a while if not for Miroku's help. Sigh... Such a sad but great story...! I hope Kagome will not suddenly throw Inuyasha out of her life. I'm really hoping that wouldn't happen, and I am hoping that you could update before July ends. I really wanna read the next chapter to this wonderful story. Hahaha. I remember steaming when I read all the chapters up to 53 and found out this story wasn't finished yet. And then you updated the story. Hahaha. I hope you're gonna finish it though. Another thing. I think you might want to know that in the story, you made Akio a boy AND a girl. Or maybe there was an Aiko in the story? But anyway, it was during the part where Inuyasha had brought food for Kagome. Yeah... Akio (or Aiko?) was a HER, so I got confused. You might wanna check it out. I may have not read the names right, but checking it out couldn't hurt any, right? Well, this is all. I'm hoping the next chapter will be as great as all of the others! See you next time!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 10:39 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank God you made inuyasha remember. I was getting a little bit irrated that he thought Sess was the one boyfriend that forgot,man. Well I hope you update real soon.
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