| "Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ] |
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Reviewed By: mirim87 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 20:46 PDT
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Nooooooo. You can't end it with that. You're making my heart break w/ Kagome's. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: elly19 On: June 06, 2006 20:40 PDT
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That was soooooo good! I wonder what is going to happen next! Can't wait for the next chapter!! You rock!!!
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Reviewed By: elly19 On: June 06, 2006 20:40 PDT
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That was soooooo good! I wonder what is going to happen next! Can't wait for the next chapter!! You rock!!!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 16:23 PDT
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omgosh! You can't end it like that!! Poor Kagome... I hope Sango and Miroku can cheer her up. Maybe they will remember too!! :o) That would be exciting! I wonder what Inuyasha thought of Kagome's comment of meeting him again... I guess we'll see what happens. Thanks for the consistent updates!!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: June 06, 2006 16:12 PDT
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whoa haha i totally didn't realize i was holding my breath til the end. great great chapter but ew for kikyo!! booo update soooon please!
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Reviewed By: brazen thought On: June 06, 2006 12:15 PDT
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I am so with Kagome on this one. How could Inuyasha say that to her. I really hate Kikyo!! Inuyasha better not do anything stupid with that shallow bitch. Where is Seshoumaru when he is needed!? He better supersnoop his ass off on Inuyasha and Kikyo's supposed "date", and if he has to maim either one of them so be it! Man I'm feeling vicious today.
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: June 06, 2006 12:04 PDT
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amazing chapter. I thought I would've cried but I didn't. I surprised myself. How in the world could Inuyasha call Kikyo a warm... whatever the else he said... I want to smack him myself. I am so mad at him for thinking that way about Kagome and Hojo.. I mean come on. This is a really good chapter... I was listening to my Pink CD and the song 'Who Knew?' is an amazing song and I thought of this story... You should listen to it... You can use it if you want.. I think it would be perfect... Well got to go, I'm on my uncles computer because my interent is down..
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 11:57 PDT
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oh how i hate you my love T____T she should have just up and told him damnit! update!
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Reviewed By: kittycat925 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 10:56 PDT
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That stupid, stupid, STUPID idiot...going out with Kikyo. What is going to happen next...I hope he remembers soon! Please update when you can!!!
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Title: Noooooo
Reviewed By: Neko-Star On: June 06, 2006 10:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No this can't end like this. Kagome and Inuyasha have to get back together. Inuyasha has to remember what happened or he may lose everything that he has. Please don't let Kagome leave Inuyasha. Its both their faults that this started. Inuyasha with him about to go out with Kikyo (can't believe she is back) and him saying some things when Kagome was just about to walk away. Kagome for acting cold towards Inuyasha cause he can't remember anything and for her calling Inuyasha a half-breed cause she knows that hurts his feelings. I just hope they get back together and soon cause this was the saddess chapter so far that I have read. I know Inuyasha are going to feel the pain of being apart from each other. Please write another chapter soon or I will go crazy not having it to read. I really need to know what happens after they left each other. Please chappie real soon maybe even today. Hope to see it cause I will be checking for it. LOL
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 10:11 PDT
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Noooo!!!Why did Inuyasha act like such a jerk? He and Kagome were supposed to talk, not fight. Please, please, please, please don't have him dating Kikyo because of this. And what is Kagome going to do now? Is she going to stay or leave? Will Inuyasha remember soon? Man, this is so bad.
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Title: Shit!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 08:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is one fucked up bitch! Hello people he can't recall who she really is!! so when she starts to say supid shit like she just did, what do YOU think HE'S gonna think! And we all know when inuyasha feels hurt he can do some fucked up things. But every little thing is not his felt! She seen he liked her she also knows that he and koga didn't like one other...so why act the way she did! I mean did she hear a word her mom said at all!! I'm sick of everything always being his felt in her eyes! he don't remember....his felt, he's mad another man give her a hug when he LIKES her...his felt again, he heard her tell hojo some hurtful things and went off on her...once again his felt. come on thats so not right! If kags gets to be a bitch to him and called him the one thing that hurts him the most(half-breed) then I say he gets to be a motherfucker right back! now that i got that off my back....Hey girly ya know ya gotta UPDATE but most of all get well soon!!!....then make a book and call me, then UPDATE SOME MORE!!^.~ lov yas mwah!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 07:16 PDT
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OMG my heart jsut broke with them... i can't believe it could be so good so fast adn end so quickly... wow.. i am stunned as sual! Great chapter! Keep up the great work and updates and all that jazz!
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Reviewed By: AznxPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 06:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!! HOW COULD YOU!!! YOUR AN EVIL PERSON! ='( Awe you broke them up how sad... well at least it adds tension to the story lol Great story by the way and sorry i never reviewed b4 this O_o'
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 00:32 PDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!KAGOME IM GOING TO KICK YOUR SORRY A$$!!!!!!!!! I wasn't supposed to be crying in this chapter, it was supposed to be nice, oh well, Inuyasha deseved the slap even though he shouldn't have had to get it... great story, keep it up:) god i cant find anything else to say but that anymore X_X how pathetic am I... dont answer that lol.
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