| "Vampires call" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Title: Chapter 1 - Epilogue
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 23:00 CDT
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Well, from the moment I started to read this I knew it was going to be extremely unique and seductive. I was right! hehe Heero and Duo are my favourite GW pairing. I couldn't stop reading it and actually read the entire story today. The world you created was vivid and expressive and it made your story all the more pleasing to read. The only part that bothered me was that quite a few times it seems that Heero had to make decisions against another's will with people like Duo, but it fit with your story. Quite a harsh story but it was a nice change of pace. I do hope you continue to write fiction in the future.
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Reviewed By: Dragonborncrystal On: June 07, 2006 17:26 CDT
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Yay! An update! Thanks for that! It's really good.
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: June 07, 2006 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sveet.... That was cute, ha. Couch. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: dragonborn_crystal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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well, there's not much for me to say. This is really good and I want to read more, so please update soon. I've got it bookmarked so i'll know, but i want to know what happens next. It's really good though, well done
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 23:54 CDT
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I had hoped that Heero would be more accepting, the damn jerk!! considering all he took away from Duo to have him. Duo is the same, he just has an extra tenant that even he didn't acknowledge... Damn he didn't have to kick him.. the baka Yet, I understand that he may think that Dotty may have something to do with the change in Duo. But stillll err!! I just wanna pull Heero aside and ask him 'have you hit your head or somethin?'
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Reviewed By: ip On: June 02, 2006 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is neat! I've never read a story like this one before. V original. I love stories about vampires. What is Duo anyway? Why can't Heero just accept him the way he is? I hope you udapte soon, 'cause you almost made me cry! I cry so easily...
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 08:28 CDT
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Mhmm...Ohhh....Heero's gunna get a talkin' tooo! Hee hee. Anyway, I like this chapter. I don't know Heero's logic for throwing the man he loves out, and frankly Scarlet, I don't give a damn, but I am eager to know what heppens with it. It shows a more skeptical side to Heero's personality, and that is bad for a vampire. (Or it is as for all the vampire stories I have read) So anyway, CONTINUE! I must know what heppens! Lol. That is my cookie review for you, so I must take my leave! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 30, 2006 06:48 CDT
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Well that was random 0.0 Yeah unforseen plot twists! Wait a second... o.0 Nevermind, update soon and I'll see if I'm right (for once)
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Title: vampires call
Reviewed By: kjfreire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit I just love a good vampire story and so far this is one. I like a vampire that is more or less human in their interactions with others. This fic is very well written the story line flows well and the chapters seem to be well thought out not just thrown together. Keep them coming see you next chapter
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 22, 2006 07:12 CDT
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ACK! DUO! LIVE!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 19:00 CDT
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Bitch 'Lena! Yay! I have seen fewer and fewer of these over the years, and I love them. It is surprising to me that no one really likes to writes a bitch 'Lena. It's so fun to read. Anyway, I am wondering what is happening with the whole ZechsxTriez thing. The locket that she held made me think of some poison that could be put in the blood and harm a vampire when they drink it. SO I am thinking that maybe the commands in the mind had just been a ploy to make Triez feel safer? Maybe? No? That's just what I think. You might have had Dorothy stupider than what I thought and that was the extent of her cleverness. But...well....We shall see. I am eager to see what Heero will do now. He is not going to be a happy Elder, and I personally want to see Relena's role for this! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 19, 2006 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dorothy in her best role: A crazy power hungry psyhcopath! Who has some sort of power over Relena 0.0 I'm having a hard time believing that those complusions of Zechsys was all she had. I can't wait to see what's up her/you sleeve. Unless you're wearing a T-shirt 0.0 Oh dear. ACK! NO! DUO!
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Reviewed By: Codan On: May 18, 2006 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Psycho Dorothy!
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 13, 2006 10:04 CDT
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That was cute ^-^ Hopefully it doesn't get much more sappy than that (sap and blood don't mix well. Sticky.) I want to cuddle Quatre now. UPDATE!
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Title: Cool. Update
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 10, 2006 07:16 CDT
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Yay update! I love this fic, I do, really. It's not TOO vampy, just enough to satify the reader. TOO much vamp just gets annoying0,0 but this is good. Yay! Hell raising. ::Purrs:: I'm leaning toward memories being blocked personally. Or he accepts the situation and doesn't like it. Maybe I'm just a Duo sadist 0.o Oh dear. Should I go get tharpy for that? "Doctor, I like tortureing imaginary braided bishes. Would you call that scizo or sadism?" oh crap I'm both. I imagine people and torture them. ;-; Oh well so did Edgar Allen Poe and look at him, dying in a gutter from drinking too much. This could end badly. (UPDATE!)
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Reviewed By: Codan On: May 06, 2006 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great yes fantastic!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 22:46 CDT
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I also demand that hell be raised. I know that Duo was all mushy mushy before e was claimed and there were sertain decrees stating this and that. But now...Shinigami must be raised. It is just so unfair that all this shit had happened to Duo and he just lays there and takes it. I refuse to believe it. There must be some blood shed on his part. (Not literally...well...maybe....) This is a good story, and I really have nothing to say against it. It moves swiftly through the years, so you don't get a good sence of how long it has been for Heero or any one of the other vampires, but then again lot of writers like Rice and Hamilton do that aswell. That would be just too much book and not enough action if they wrote out every year. I enjoyed this, and I look forward to the next instalation. Ja!
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Title: Alright...
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 05, 2006 17:59 CDT
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Alright, so he was claimed, but for the lvoe of it at least let hell be raised? Please? I demand a risen hell! Yeah, I'm pushy. Wheee vamps!
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Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: May 02, 2006 16:46 CDT
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Oh you have to keep going with this. How is Duo going to trully take being in this nearly new century. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: kjfreire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have created a extremely fun read. I like the fact that you let Duo remember his past so he can give Heero hell for his overhanded ways. I will be looking forward to the next installment. Kat
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Reviewed By: Codan On: May 02, 2006 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definetely one of the best vampire GWing fics I've ever read. Actually scratch that, this is one of the best fics of any sort I've ever read. It's sharp and brilliant and you've kept all the characters really IC. Now how the hell are you supposed to make Duo like Heero?!
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 02, 2006 07:03 CDT
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Oh yay update ^_^ Tis good, I think I might just have been going through Duo withdrawal. He is rather addicting isn't he (it's the hair!)? Now that's he's awake... DOn't make him ive in TOO easily would you? Please? Vamp stories aren't fun without a bit of a fight. They just use thier mind powers and BOOM story over and done with. Now what? Have a nice day ^_^
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 01, 2006 20:35 CDT
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Wow 0.0 Kay... not you BEST but still good ::nod:: Don't rush so much, well...rush to UPDATE, but the whole plot... ::nod:: (and I talk like I know anything! Ignore the crazy Pyro.) It's good, I like it much. Update? Please. AHHH! Quatre reminds me of Nana T-T don't dismember Quatre please.
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Reviewed By: JB On: April 28, 2006 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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It's a pretty good start, I rather enjoy vampire fics and 1x2 is my favorite pairing. The story is a bit rushed, though. I think you could expand the scenes a bit more, add more detail in the sections to draw them out so it's not quite so fast paced.
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Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course, leave off like that at the end of the very first chapter. You know, you're not very nice Kirallie (*raspberries her displeasure*). I know there are vamp fics out there but I don't go out of my way to read them so that is why I can happily put a 10 in the Originality department. As usual, your writing is impeccable and so is your imagination. You do realize you just gave me another story to drool over right? Yep, you are so not very nice (*nods wisely*). Keep up the wonderful writing and update soon. Also, you might want to check the Hidden status of this, it isn't listed in the open archive, I had to get here through my email link. Otherwise, have fun and update soon!
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