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"Lemon Twist" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ]
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 Reviewed By: nelson bannaba [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 05, 2007 01:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really enjoy how you write a story. Never fails to draw me in. I did enjoy the sexiness, as usual, but I don't know if it was the title description (stardust, so romantic), the Lionele Richie greatest hits album I've been listening to tonight, or simply the way the story opened up (gently), but I was in the mood for romance and this story served it up. Lovely stuff! Nice details too, like Inuyasha not wanting others to see her neck. *sigh* Rather nice way to spend a late summer night.
 Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2007 03:51 CDT
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*grins lecherously* dear god, i think i about had a heart attack when Sango and Miroku showed up. If they would have caught them, that would be eeriely embarrassing. Great story, i eagerly await the next one. Keep up the excellent work!
 Title: Star Dust
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2007 20:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
And nine months later... Seriously, great first time fic.
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2007 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, I liked this, very cute, and very nice!
 Title: From Reiycheru/litele_one/LittleFoxglove . . . Jeez, I gotta pick one name and stick with it . . .
Reviewed By: I am Foxglove [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 20, 2007 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
[His] *is highly amused and snickering delightedly behind the back of her hand* Fan - tas - tique! *claps* Bravo, Feni, well done indeed! What a great new addition to the Sess/Rin treasure chest! This totally hits the spot; tender, sexy, and wonderfully playful - hmmm, that's got to be the result of Springtime's effects on all those rampant plotbunnies you got crammed up in that hutch over there. I can only imagine the glompage you must've received from one Tomo-chan for this little gem. =D And OMG, Sesshomaru in this. He is so freakin' hot with all those sexy lil one-liners! =D Well, who knew he had it in him! XD *points to quote* "I intend to conquer you before dawn, so prepare to have your walls breached." *chortles delightedly* Where the heck did you come up with that one?! That is definitely going down in the big book of Fluffy-Sama's Fanfiction Triumphs. Smooth, man. Smooth. Rin never stood a chance. =D
 Title: His
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 07, 2007 09:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is just perfect. Not only is the characterization excellent but you've put your knowledge of the period to good use. I'll bet those interfering old biddies are going to go into spastic shock come breakfast.
 Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 05, 2007 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved it! i even liked how rin was so skitish and innocent lol the last sentence was the best though 'flower arranging in a male demons room' lol ;-)
 Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 03, 2007 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your story/artwork has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open April 1, 2007 - April 30, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
 Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 28, 2007 06:49 CDT
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hey, that so good it was downright illegal hehe. I loved it so much i had to stop myself from squealing (thinking about poor rin, yay) so the boss doesn't come over to ask me what's up :)) LOVELY
 Reviewed By: rosymouse [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 28, 2007 05:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I will not read smutletts while my partner is away! I will not read smutletts while my partner is away! I will not read smutletts while my partner is away! I think I need fresh underwear! Damn! You just keep getting better
 Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 26, 2007 11:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can completely see Rin's first time being like this. She would be completely clueless because she just didn't have anyone to talk to her about it. Sess would suddenly realize that he had something wonderful beside him. And they would both understand that there would be consequences. Great Job!
 Reviewed By: la623 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 25, 2007 21:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was lovely. I loved how Rin was all shy, buried under the covers...
 Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 25, 2007 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was your best chapter yet! Very hot, keep up the awesome work!~ B reading U!
 Reviewed By: BrownRecluse [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 20, 2007 09:45 CDT
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"Darkness" has to be my favorite piece in this collection so far, for sheer, poetic beauty!
 Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 17, 2007 10:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sigh* what a nice peice... poor guy, you had him in tight bind there for a second, being caught with his pants down and all... I'd really like to see that fanart, but I can't find it anywhere. Could you forward me a URL?
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