| "Spirit Magic" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Reviewed By: Mehi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 16:35 CDT
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attack of the memories....wow...
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf88 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 21:59 CST
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so you need a proof reader? i could do that if you like
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Reviewed By: WolfDaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 14:06 CST
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Hey are you planning on continuing this? It's pretty good, though your spelling and grammar could use some work. I'd like to see where you're planning on taking it though.
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Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 19:05 CDT
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*sigh* you have given up...pity...
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Reviewed By: Silver Kitsune Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good! I think Genkai should be the D.A.D.A teacher.
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Reviewed By: demonic war goddess On: August 01, 2006 20:03 CDT
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this is a pretty good story so far. about the DADA professer, maybe you should bring lupin back. he was a good teacher and a lot of fun. i'm suprised at the sorting though, i would have thought that they would have been in griffindor to better protect harry or at least put hiei in slytherin. he would fit in so well with his attitude. and what about the classes? will the spirit detectives have the same classes sense there all sixth years? you would think that they would so they can talk about the things they need to with the group sense they can't in there common rooms. there in different houses so they wouldn't know the passwods to get to the others if something happens and they need to talk.^^
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Reviewed By: Tasukisfoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its pretty good so far. pretty funny too! im kinda dissapointed you haven't included harry, ron, or hermione yet.... please update soon!!
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Title: Spirit Magic
Reviewed By: kagfan12 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok the only reason I put a 9 on overall rating is cuz. u need to finish the story it's really good so far and i hope u finish it. I love the fact that no one got seperated into Slythrin and I personally thought that Kurama and Hiei should of been put into Griffindor but I know u probrally have ur reasons and just know that as long as u keep writing than I'll keep reviewing by the was all the animals sound addorable. I don't really have any sugesstions on the next chapter or any thing and I think u should go with whatever u had planned. (write ur own ideas don't listen to other people unless ur desprate for ideas) Keep the story goin and please don't wait too long to update. I look foward to the next chapter TTYL ~~Jules~~
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix(did not sign in) On: June 29, 2006 08:05 CDT
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strange i want to know who it was. i liked this. plese add more soon.
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Title: Review for the chapter 7!
Reviewed By: Flaylda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv this chappie ^-^! i fully agree with Yusuke Kurama and Kuwabara's houses, but Hiei's... he's really a Slytherin-being, i think... too bad there's none a Slytherin in them... update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: proudyusukefan On: June 27, 2006 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. Yusuke's kitty Akuma sounds adorable. im looking foward to an update
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Title: How cool the chapter 6 is!
Reviewed By: Flaylda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love Kuwabara's "You can sit next to me!" Your writing style is improving, too... I LOVE THIS FANFIC! I can't wait to know which dorm they're in... Hiei will surely make a great Slytherin, while Yusuke and Kurama will play good Gryffindors, and Kuwabara as a pity Hufflepuff!!! I DESPERATELY NEED TO READ CHAPTER 7!!!
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix(did not sign in) On: June 23, 2006 18:26 CDT
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i want to know more about the new girl. i liked this. please add more soon.
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Title: My review!
Reviewed By: Flaylda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO COOL! And interesting as well! I need to read the next chappies! Can't wait to read how you make Yusuke and friends meet with Harry... please update soon! I'm really really really counting on the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix(did not sign in) On: June 21, 2006 14:24 CDT
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they are finally on there way to school. i liked this. please add more soon.
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Reviewed By: Darkness Child [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story. Your plot line is all you and I really cannot wait until you update again. And the pets names mean Akuma: demon or evil spirit, Tsuki: either luck or to lunge or stab, and Kaitou: is either smart/ intelligent or theif. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 13:15 CDT
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so you brought in Kuwabara interesting. i liked this. please add more soon.
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix(did not sign in) On: June 05, 2006 14:19 CDT
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i liked this. i can not wait for them to get to the school. please add more soon.
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Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 23:07 CDT
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woah man, thats rok'in. write some more please, for my entertainments sake.
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 18:09 CDT
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ya hiei got a dragon. i liked this. please add more soon.
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