| "The commitment to Commitment" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sonic_The_Titan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nic, Ive only read the 1st two chapters so far. But this is great. I likehow Shadow was all happy and he made fun of Sonic. Also I like the whole Tails getting joked at by Sonic. I'll read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Triple D On: August 20, 2006 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHE its MEEE...DDD..really cool fanfic...i just rated u above avger cause i didn't know what to say..but really cool fan..u let kids have that deep of a kiss..u perv..XD
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: Shadow Killer On: July 26, 2006 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes this was alot better with humer and such. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Darkeiya On: July 24, 2006 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lookin' good, dude. Lookin' good. I can certainly picture it all happening in my head... and so far they seem to be In-Character (though they have their OOC moments...).
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Title: Superb
Reviewed By: Lori-Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rocks. All my fave couples are together and even Shadow is falling for someone. So cute. Love all the fluffiness. Oh, and Finola sounds awsome too. Anyway, think you're all great at writing. MORE PLEASE, SOON. LOL.
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Title: happy birthday Star
Reviewed By: i.am.someone On: July 13, 2006 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good good so far keep it up oh and Star is it ya birthday because i read your profile and whatever and it said ya birthday was the 13th of July and its the 13th today (i think lol) sooooooooo HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..... but anyway back to the story like i said keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Lucidangel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm its not that i don't like your story i think a lot of stuff is well done i think some things just need to be a little more believable. like, Amy and sonic rolling on the floor kissing; its really hard to take seriously. (if you're going for something gag-like thats ok tho) its wierd to imagine the ME on Rouge's finger lol. but once again it isn't that i don't like your story i just think it needs some work. otherwise good job and keep writing.
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 16:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
yep update asap
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Reviewed By: i.am.someone On: June 19, 2006 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is kool so far is all i can say so that is all i am goin to say oh yeah and update soon
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Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: June 15, 2006 17:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like editing stuff. lol I just wish I could've gotten this done sooner...Busy bees and all that...lol Summer vaca! WHOO! lol SonAmyness and Crailsness and Knuxougeness is AWESOME! Heh. I wonder what everyone's reaction will be...But it was inviteable after all. Everyone knows it's SonAmy 4eva! lol
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Reviewed By: Dark side of ULF 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fic so far. i can't wait till the next chapter!
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Title: oookaaay....
Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: June 10, 2006 15:45 CDT
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So you let Amy get her hands on ch 4 huh? lol She now pwns ur soul, FYI... lol You poor boi...lol Beware the Amy...BEWARE! Well, I liked this ch before, but I gotta say that Shadow's more IC in the edited version. So, update soon! BYEZ! ~_^
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Title: SWEET YOU GUYS ARE THE BEST
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
YEP SHADOW NEEDS LUV TOO BUT THIS IS KICKS ASS!!
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Reviewed By: luv shadow 14* On: June 09, 2006 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i must say, i edited this better than i planned it's still a little touchy, but at least it's better than before... lol ok, i'm gonna go back to my book somone's trying to kill the hardy boys! nooooooo lol ~luv shadow 14~ ;)
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: lUV sHADOW 14* i KNOW... IT'S COOL On: June 09, 2006 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK... WHY DID I GIVE IT AN 7, YOU MIGHT ASK? I'LL TELL YOU WHY. AS MUCH AS I LIKE THIS STORY AND WORKING ON IT WITH YOU, I FIND SOME FLAW IN THIS PARTICULAR CHAPTER. FIRST: SHADOW (EVEN THOUGH I KNOW I HAVE MADE THIS MISTAKE, I'VE LEARNED FROM EXPERIENCE) DOESN'T LOVE ON FIRST SIGHT, WHEREAS, TAKE AMY FOR EXAMPLE. SHE LOVED SONIC THE FIRST TIME SHE SAW HIM. SECOND: FILONA JUST POPS UP OUT OF NOWHERE AND TRIES TO KILL SHADOW FOR NO APPARENT REASON. DUDE, YA GOTTA HAVE A MOTIVE. IT'S CRUCIAL TO HAVE A MOTIVE FOR KILLING SOMEONE. YOU DON'T JUST WAKE UP ONE DAY AND SAY "OH, I FEEL LIKE KILLING SOMEONE BECAUSE I FEEL LIKE IT." IT DOESN'T WORK THAT WAY. IT MAY SEEM LIKE I'M OVERLY CRITICAL, BUT IT'S FOR YOUR OWN GOOD AND TALENT THAT I DO THIS, SO BEAR WITH ME. THIRD: SHADOW DOESN'T REALLY HAVE A HORRIBLY, "OH MY GOSH I THINK I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STRANGER" PERSONA. HE'S MORE THE TYPE THAT HATES A PERSON RIGHT WHEN HE SEES THEM, AND THEN MAYBE, MAYBE WILL GROW TO LIKE THEM DOWN THE LINE. LOVE, HELL, LIKE, DOESN'T HAPPEN WITH SHADOW UPON FIRST GLANCE. TRUST ME, I KNOW. AND ANOTHER THING, TRY TO MAKE SHADOW JUST A TAD BIT MORE SHADOW. YOU DID A BETTER JOB THIS CHAPTER, BUT I'M STILL NOT BUYING HIS CHARACTER SO MUCH. IT'S HARD FOR ME TO LOOK AT HIM IN THIS CHAPTER AND ACTUALLY BELIEVE THAT HE'S SHADOW, YA KNOW? OTHER THAN THAT, I'D SAY YOU'VE DONE A FAIRLY DECENT JOB ON THIS STORY SO FAR. IT'S COMING ALONG NICELY. KEEP UP THE WORK. ~LUV SHADOW 14~ ;)
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