| "Under the Blood Red Sun" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Title: Stupid stupid computer!! argh
Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 21:56 CDT
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Title: Spiders
Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 11, 2006 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pfft. Real names please. Kagome, where on earth did you get Kori from? You know Ces, the Yasha means Forest Spirit? So it's actually still a real name! Yay for you! What does Kori mean though? Wait, I don't need you to tell me because I've got a Japanese/English Dictionary right here with me! But I'm too lazy to look it up, so I'll do it later. Like when I'm insanely bored and watching spiders crawl across my ceiling. I actually did that yesterday. It was rather fun. Keep writing the story, I've run out of things to read now! Grrrr! Now, I must WRITE!
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 11, 2006 23:43 CDT
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You know what? At first I thought his horse Ryu was a cow. Maybe he planned on really marrying one? Who knows, but Sesshomaru can be a funny guy... When he wants to be. I love him, he's so cool. Sighs... Ah the borderline bad guys. Sesshomaru, Itachi, they're great. You're right, I do have a thing for them. Teehee... I've got school tommorrow you know, and it sucks. I've got to type a whole lot. And I don't want to. Whatever. Keep writing your story, I've got a feeling it's going to be quite good!
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 11, 2006 23:34 CDT
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I love the title, that's what made me really want to read it. I assume you gave this one a bit more thought, hm? It's good too, even though the story line, isn't exactly original, it's still good! Keep it up! A question though, how is it you can post three chapters for the same story in one friggin' day? That's so fast it's crazy. You're crazy, and so am I. Phsycotic... Teehee... Love you!
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u know whats kool? your stories
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing(not signed in) On: June 11, 2006 16:19 CDT
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hmmmmmm, very interesting... The plot is fresh for once~ (all the other fanfics I come across are always so cliche) I love it! Keep it up, you're on my favorites!
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Reviewed By: iwuvit On: June 10, 2006 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its only a suggestion but could you like use another one of your magic powder gags?
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Reviewed By: Bloodbrother [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 21:37 CDT
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oh well i dont mind variety i just liked that one this is still gettin good though so i dont care as long as u eventually go back to the others, keep it up man :)
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: June 10, 2006 08:08 CDT
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WOW!!!!!!!!! Cool, update soon! I love it!
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Reviewed By: Bloodbrother [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 15:49 CDT
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its got a good plot i like ....... man i just wish you would finish one story at a time, perhaps 'for one reason or another' i realy like that one
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: June 09, 2006 15:25 CDT
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seems cool... is this an inu kag fanfic????? Kagome is the heir right??? Arg... please update soon!!!!!!!!!
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