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Reviewed By: Patchcat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2009 22:32 CST
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Only up to chapter three, but I felt the need to drop a line. I have to admit, I'm not usually a fan of Mpreg stories, mainly because the premise is usually pretty nonsensical. However! Your twist is actually very well thought out and completely reasonable, which makes me want to know how you're going to handle Dee's physical changes and that will, most likely, keep me reading. I look forward to seeing what you have planned.
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Title: *Puppy Dog Eyes*
Reviewed By: HintaZaraki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I love it! I love it! I could say this for forever! I love this fanfiction! You have no idea how many times I laughed at the reactions from Ted hilarious. I expected him to be the one doing that. Dee is pregnant! I love that! I love a dominant Ryo every once in a while! Overall 5*
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Reviewed By: blackorcid On: August 19, 2008 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the first FAKE fic i've ever read, i love MPREG fics and i think this too is one of the best. it made it really beleveable and it was really in depth. poor jj but i honestly beleve he HAD to have seen it coming. i like the way rose and dee have formed a bond over this and how rose seems have taken on areally protective role of dee considering they hated eachother in a manner of speaking. its nice how bikky is included i love the fact you've done it because pregnancy isnt just between two people it includes the whole family. this is a brillent fic and your writing still is unbelevely in depth and your very good at making situations sound realistic do u do research before u write because its so beleveable even with the station and the precedures and pregnancy... its all just soo cool your fics are brillent please write more soon
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Reviewed By: jireland [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story!! It made male pregency believable. Thank you for deciding to write this fic. I can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: kotay3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, happy that everyone too the news so well. Felt kinda sorry for JJ but seriously he should have seen it comming( well, maybe not the prgenency part...)Good that he got Drake to suppor him. A drunk Ryo is a really funny Ryo, he needs to let go of his controll at times and just go with the flow^^ Awesome chapters!
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 11:24 CST
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I'm glad everyone took the news well. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just adore this story!!!! Please continue!!!
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Reviewed By: It's A Secret *smiles* On: January 01, 2007 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this fic is one of the best fics I have ever read. It's funny and loving and it makes me feel warm inside(in a happy way). It's a awesome fic and to tell ya the truth, I don't really read/particularily like yaoi fics but when I read this, I was blown away. It's that good and I hope you update soon because I can't wait to read the rest. Keep up the fantastic work.
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Reviewed By: kotay3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is the best FAKE fic I've ever had the pleasure to read.( read it throug in one go before reviewing)It's wellwritten and has beautiful charactizations. I love the way yar developping he charachters without making them ooc, and well, a dominant Randy is always hot^^ The proposal was one of the sweetest and most romantic ever! Looking forward to the next update!
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Title: AHHHH!!
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 23:08 CST
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STUPID SITE!!!!!!! It just deleted my WHOLE review!!!!! *cries* Now I have to rewrite it...>< Oh well...from the beginning then. *ahem* FINALLY I'M REVIEWING! Holy crap, sorry for the wait! I've been so fucking busy. With college and work I've hardly had any time on the comp except for algebra work..ICK! And when I have free time, my dad's on here doing his Ebay shit. GAHHHHHHH! Well I finally have a moment since it's real late lol. OH-MY-FUCKING-GOD that was the best Dee/Ryo proposal I have ever read. I nearly cried I was so happy for them!! ^___^ I hope the wedding's soon. Can't wait to read it. Oh I loved the 'coupons' btw. Adorable!!! I want some of those too!! LOL Another great chapter as usual. I'm so sorry I didn't review sooner. I will try harder though, k? I can't wait to read about what happens next!!! Keep up the excellent work FAKEmpregnator!!!!!!!
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Title: Breathtaking
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY I'M REVIEWING! Holy crap, sorry for the wait! I've been so fucking busy >
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Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 13:57 CST
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*smiles* as usual it has made me even more interested. I wonder how they are going to get through this!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, u have blown me away with this story. Everything is so detailed. I LOVE it! Settling sounds so painful T_T...I'm so glad Dee got through with it and had Ryo for support ^^. Btw, the ring for Dee sounds gorgeous. I can't wait to read about his reaction...which will be soon right?? I hope so. Anyway, love how Ryo is getting REALLY protective over Dee. He almost beat the crap out of JJ! I almost felt sorry for JJ....notice how I said almost LOL. Three chapters to read took me a bit, with college and work, but I did it and I am thrilled. U have me hooked u know. I'm gonna have to stick with this story til the very end =P! Excellent work as usual FAKEmpregnator. I can't wait as usual til the next update! Good luck with ur writing!!!!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was a quick update! Made my day =P! So Dee and Ryo get to go home. Good for them ^^. And Dee quit smoking?! Amazing...lol. So Ryo is going to have his way with Dee soon? Can't wait to read that!! Another great chapter as usual. U never disappoint. As usual, I can't wait til the next chapter! *is excited* Hope u get to update again soon!!!! Until the next chapter, Ja Ne!! ^_^
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Title: Perfect!
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter from one of my favorite FAKE fanfic authors! I'm so happy u updated! I've been waiting for this!!! lol Diana seems so curious about their sex life but hey, who isn't? ^^ So far so good with them. I hope everything turns out ok in LA. But Ryo will be there to take care of Dee no matter what ^_^. They are so in love it makes me smile while reading this! I hope there will be a lemon soon. I loved ur last one! As I've said before, u write so well and with emotion. It keeps me addicted to ur story =P. Well, keep up the great work! I can't wait til the next chapter! I'm so excited! Hope u update soon! Ja ne and good luck FAKEmpregnator!!!!!
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