| "Altered Perceptions" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: - On: June 11, 2025 10:54 PDT
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This might be a century too late, but I'm so glad to find old fics
again... and I'm so glad to find yours. This fic is a delicious
10/10. Intense, and raw yet delicate in sexual tensions at the same
time. I thoroughly enjoyed seeing Aoshi slowly losing it even
though the circumstances are concerning. Wherever you are now, I
hope you're doing really well in life!
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Title: back again
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 21:01 PDT
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I don't know how the IRZB got into my review but it did somehow. That was for the spam filter.
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 20:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I told you just how beautiful your writing is? I can't seem to stress that enough!!! IRZBAwesome update! I love this story and take care of you.
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Title: great story!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: bluewaters14 On: August 31, 2006 10:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I praise you for writing such a wonderful fanfic. When I read the story i felt like i was watching a movie or something. Your style of writing is pretty good but i advice you to improve it a little maybe one day you can be a great writer. I did not find any flaw in your writing but since this is only my opinion i can't say that your grammar and spelling is perfect. I didn't give a high rating on your originality since i read romance novels i can find similarities in your story and in romance novels (sorry). I certainly enjoyed reading your fic so i gave you a high score on your overall rating. I look forward to reading your next stories in the future. Keep on writing.
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Reviewed By: RabidAnimeGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 23:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great story! I've never been a fan of Aoshi and Misao, but after reading your story, I think I am!
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Reviewed By: aznboi408 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 14:08 PDT
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Aoshi is the man!!!
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Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 23:01 PDT
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I just got back from Yellowstone National Park and came home to an update for chapter 4 from you and it just made my evening! That was an AWESOME lemon and I love how Aoshi treats Misao, so gentle and so honest. Thank you for the update and take care!
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Reviewed By: Lea stidham On: July 26, 2006 10:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i love it!!! please update soooooon!!!!
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Title: Altering Perceptions
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 22:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read everything that you have written so far and let me tell you that you are a very prolific writer. I love all of your one-shots and I especially love the beginning of this story alot! I have never heard of 'W Juliet' before, but with your writing I am going to go buy this manga now. I do own some of the 'Sensual Phrase' mangas and just fell in love with all of the characters. Your writing enhanced them a great deal! I am so looking forward to more of your writing because I just can't seem to get enough of it. Good writing and writers like you are soo hard to find. Take care of you! Christal
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 08:59 PDT
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Wow, Aoshi-sama!!! I can't wait to read more. Misao really made points, twice. Go Misao-chan!! Great chapter, my dear. Keep going! A big hug from Brazil, Lere
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: treehuggingbran7 On: July 09, 2006 21:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did an excellent job! I wasn't quite sure if you had mentioned that it was your first A/M or not, but in any case you did phenomenal. I really liked how you expressed Aoshi's care and concern for Misao. I couldn't tell if Misao was in love with him in this story or not- if you could clarify that in the next chapter that would be awesome! I'm really excited to see what is next, so please hurry and update while your new fan awaits for the next installation!Again, CONGRATS on a wonderful fic!
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Reviewed By: animedemon91 (not signed in) On: July 07, 2006 14:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Finally, an interesting AoshixMisao fic~! Thank you for the good plot, and please keep updating! ^^
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Reviewed By: Naolin-san On: June 29, 2006 00:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. It's hard sifting through the fanfics to find good ones, I'm glad I found it. It's a good read, and there's a nice plot.
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