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Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: Phoenix7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a relief to learn that Kagome is alright. Naraku's gonna pay for endangering her like that, and I loved how Sesshomaru scared the living daylights out of Kouga after he threatened Inuyasha (Kouga is sooooooo thick sometimes.....). Also, Eri reaaaaaaalllllly got what was coming to her when she saw Inuyasha and Kagome "in the act". Serves her right for trying to mess with the love that Inuyasha and Kagome have for each other. Kagome should give her a nice solid Sango-style slap. Keep the good stuff coming.
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Reviewed By: Me On: October 01, 2006 17:34 EDT
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Uh... good grief. What a lemon! Jeez. I'm going to start heading those warnings. T_T
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Reviewed By: crc31789 On: October 01, 2006 17:16 EDT
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Us poor women and our hormones... -_-' *pats Sango on the back and looks pitingly at Rin* I can't imagine living five hundred years in the past and going through a menstrual cycle. Miserable enough these days and these days we have pads and pain killers and /comfort food/... Anyway, enough of the embarassing feminine talk. Thanks for updating. It took me a while to get around to reading this, there's already another chapter--but that's a good thing, now I have another to read. :D I like this story a lot and I'm so glad that Kagome is alright!
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Reviewed By: adea neri On: October 01, 2006 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay nnother cappy
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Title: Part Three
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: September 30, 2006 17:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... and now for part three of the review!! Hooray!! Woot!! Woot!! Why haven't anyone said anything in defense of Inuyasha? Kouga is so over arrogant. It'll be is downfall. Sighs.. they can explain all they want to. but there is limited space and comprenshion in Kouga tiny brain. (Not a big fan of Kouga currently..) Did Kagome also scream? And did she actually crawl her way to the Well House? When I read the at least he landed on his butt and not his head.. reminded me of your icon that you have the "ouch" one that I had to giggle. That was a touching scene them slumping to the floor of the Well House to hold each other close. I had to roll my eyes at Kouga's selfishness. Thank you so much!! Thank you!! For not having Kouga go through the Well. I find it tends to ruin the intergety of the story when the writer allows the other characters to go through the Well. Inuyasha's and Kagome's childern yes.. I can see this.. because they are part of both Inuyasha and Kagome. Thank you for maintain the realisim of the story! This is an Awesome story!! Will the Well also help protect Inuyasha and Kagome from Kouga? Is Kouga going to find out if he can break the bond? Thank you Miroku for pointing out that because of Kouga's selfish actions he has caused great hurt to Kagome when he attacked Inuyasha. Geez everyone accuses Inuyasha of reacting without thinking and yet Kouga is hundred times worse.. though in this you have kept everyone so masterfully in character!! So it was Rin's presence that caused Sesshoumaru's hand to stay. Rin is a good influence on him. I like her being with Sesshoumaru. Question will Sesshoumaru have a love interest in future? Oh dear.. Kagome going stir crazy in three days.. I wonder what our favourite very restless and active Hanyou is going through? Oh man. Inuyasha is refusing Kagome!! Shocker!! I am stunned! How can he do that? That is some control he has! I wonder did she try pleading with him? Does she wonder if he doesn't want to touch her anymore? I can see him being all mother-hen-ish and telling Kagome she needs to rest and heal. Perhaps Kagome should be very thankful he doesn't have another "home remedy" for her to drink. lol! Will they discuss what happened when Inuyasha went back? and Will Kagome find out it was Kouga's fault they expericenced that awful pain? What does Kagome have plotted out for the oblivious Hanyou? Nyummy stuff filled with tasty Nibbles.. Inuyasha was keeping himself busy with moving things for Jii-chan (and hearing the endless stories and history behind the items..) Inuyasha catching Kagome's scent on the wind would make him go into mother-hen mode.. chuckles poor Inu won't know what hit him.. Oh NO!! Eri is coming over!! That brazen wench!! That girl is saying falsities through the teeth isn't she!! GRR1!! Oh and Eri has Kagome's prescription! Is she really that free towards males?? Does that mean she has been around? High hopes about Inuyasha hmm, I can't wait to see him shoot her down in a blaze of embarrassment! What is Kagome reading? Kagome ignoring him! lol!! He Hates that!! Angry at him, no but frustrated yes.. Poor Inuyasha!! Yes!! Kagome going after Inuyasha with a vengence! Life will never be dull for those two!! Lol!! Kagome knows his weaknesses. lol!! Is cheering in the background! I love how Inuyasha expresses his approval! I love your love scenes, they are all so hot and perfect! Eri watched them!! Ergh! At least that hit her nicely! Though if Eri Saw Inuyasha's ears and fangs the troubles she is going to cause for Kagome!! Will she tell the school board Kagome wasn't injured/sick that she has been having sex? Will she start nasty rumours about Kagome? into beasts? Will guys hit on Kagome because they'll think "easy"? I can see negative effects from this as well. MAybe Inuyasha can re-inforce that Eri should keep her mouth shut. I also loved the ending!! Please Keep up the most excellent work!! Thank you for sharing this with us!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Title: part two
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: September 30, 2006 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome work!! Awesome Story!! Literary Goddess Awesome!!! And now here we go.. the second part to my review. The concerns I have is about Kagome and school. How is she going to be treated by peers, teachers and staff. How are they going to look upon her? Will slander, honour, reputation and character destruction be in store? Again I am concerned this is going to have a negative after effect on them. I am hoping not.. I can't wait to see the look on the jeweler's face when present with a shard to craft into a ring. Will Kagome go the tradtional type of ring or will she want a ring that has the stone inside the band so no sides/ridges to catch on clothing/ bowstrings/ arrows? Ohh the foreshadowing on the papers! I wonder how they will smooth over that crinkle.. I wonder what the idea is that Inuyasha has in store for Kagome and the wedding bands. smiles happily, Kagome will love it. But I am happy he did tell someone what was bothering him. Yay!! You reminded us and Inuyasha of the diamonds! Thank you for having Mama keep her head in the situation and multi-task. Inuyahsa going to fuedal era without Kagome since the bonding.. oh dear. hope it works. Inuyasha is going to let the others know Kagome is okay, that is great to hear. Inuyahsa is certainly wanting Kagome to heal properly. Going to tell the others she needs a week to heal and get the stitches out of her arm. Inuyasha again taking on guilt that isn't his fault for. Kudos to Mama for telling Inuyasha it isn't his fault and Kagome doesn't blame him. This is really great!! I love how you use those gifted talents of yours to draw and paint these masterful and lively stories!! Bravo!!! Bravissimo!! Whoot!! Woot!! Sweet lord!! That is what happens when they are seperated??!!! Holy..!! This will add a twist in the way things will be done!! Thank goodness they found out Now and not during a battle!! Is the seperattion pain from the years seperating them? or the distance? I think my heart jumped in my chest with Inuyasha and KAgome's!! That was a shockingly delicious twist to add!! The Well allowed them the connection!! I love that!! The Well does have it's own essence! That certainly is an new idea, new touch to add into the story. Exciting!! Gets better and better with every read I make!! Kagome certainly is having alot of excitment in the past few days with training and the attack then the hospital and Eri.. now the heart wrenching pain of the seperation. Question what did Kagome mean by it's not permanent? Again that Tree is something specail and so often forgotten in other writers stories. I love how you include it into your stories! and remind us of it's importance to the characters. Sesshoumaru acted fast to his brothers distress and that was awesome! Cool that Sesshouamru waited for Inuyasha to collect himself before he spoke. ( the others would have attacked him with questions without hestistion..) In the section where Inuyasha thought it had to be the Well that made him feel like this.. what was it that he had meant by that? Did Inuyasha hear the others coming and how did they know to come? I really love how you have Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru talking with and to each other! Awesome and exhillerating work!! Such a Talent!! Kudos!! Bravo! Woot!! Will Sesshoumaru be able to discuss more about the bond when they both come back? Wow! Inuyasha needs to be in contact with the Well for the connection? And there goes Shippou doing what he does best.. whining.. Great characterization! Kaede was actually very polite in the way she worded her question! Damn that Kouga!! argh!! I can't wait for someone to seriously kick his miserable butt!! Please can someone re-arrange that wolf's attitude! I swear that idiot has more hair than brains. I am very amazed that Miroku was able to lift and carry Inuyasha to the Well and in. Kagome must be going through even worse pain than Inuyasha. Huh? Is puzzled.. Why haven't the others gone to defend Inuyasha from the wolf?
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: September 30, 2006 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot!! Woot!! HOORAY!!! Another excellently presented chapter from the Literary Goddess!! Just when I needed some inspirations... Thank you! I like the chapter title, giggles very nice! Everyone loves that Sacred Tree! chuckles. It brings so much to people who need or are in search of insight. I really like that! Oh, Nice!! I like that also! Sesshoumaru doing a sweep of the village's surrounding area. Cool! Sesshoumaru is really uneasy about the assassin, isn't he? Besides the fact that Naraku sent him, is Sesshoumaru worried that more will be sent? Sesshoumaru's lands are also in danger? And is NAraku really planning on using the Inu no Taisho home for his new home? Did he just make an unpleasant observation about himself and his "desire" to have Tessaiga? Yep. He did! Wow!!Sesshoumaru seems to be a self discovery mode right now and he is not liking some of the things he is learning. Poor Kagome.. Everyone is out to get her and the shards. Would it work- to leave most of the shards that they have collected on her side of the well leaving one or two for travel purposes? Oh dear.. thankfully Inuyasha isn't around to know of that bit of information. He might have had asked his brother to revive the assassin just so he could kill him again. I really did like how Sesshoumaru made sure there was no body to ressurrect or find afterwards. (That assassin didn't have any close family did he?) Yes, wait for Kagome and Inuyasha- they will tell him what that Assassin said. Maybe put more clues together! And the part with Inuyasha and Kagome in the backseat.. rubbing each other hands.. I got the silly image of Kagome rubbing Inuyasha's hand then Inuyasha going my turn... back and forth. Very cute and very tender. Souta was being very mature and behaved with regards to his sister and Inuyasha. Thank you for this.. I can't say how many stories I read where the writer thought it was cute/funny to have Souta be same, if not worse, than Shippou is to either of them. But you have him respectful, caring and teasing when it is needed. Excellent work! I am really very much enjoying the story! Kagome seemed to have forgotten the blood loss she suffered even if it is being swiftly replenished. Good for Inuyasha to swoop her up and into the house. You again perfectly captured Inuyasha's personality and character magnificantly! Hooray!! Bravo! When he says too much he always gets silent afterwards. "He never thought in his entire life he would be in the predicament he was currently in." That is so true for Inuyasha. He always thought he would be alone or had to change from one extreme to another to fit in. And there is another shining example of the engima that is Kagome (you have captured her brillantly as well..) that she comforts Inuyasha. Inuyasha protects Kagome even from her "friends" I love his protective nature!! (Though I wonder if Kagome will find out what Eri really thinks of her.) Kagome must be extra ticked at Eri.. Kagome is waiting patiently for Inuyasha to be comfortable with the marriage issue and Eri goes and makes him feel pressured into it. ANd kudos to Kagome for explaining it as best she could.. (grumbles.. is not an western tradition.. is just really ignorant and shallow people who "poach" others loves.) Though I am trying to figure out why is Kagome crying at this point.. And Inuyasha taking the guilt upon himself for even though it isn't any of his fault. chuckles.. They do know Inuyasha's love of Ramen. Mama was also waiting for Inuyasha to speak to her, was she not? Just like with Kagome.. Mama knows when Inuyasha needs to talk and needs a gentle nudge to start. Yay! For Mama to get Inuyasha to talk about what he overheard at the hospital and the reason why he is now pushing for the marriage to go through. Oh dear.. I fear that something negative might come up from this.. It might backlash them. With Jii-chan, with school they might get super nasty at Kagome and even call her names. Even expell her.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 11:49 EDT
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loL.. Damn Woman, Damn Right! LOved it! Now Eri's gonna leave them alone!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 29, 2006 22:44 EDT
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kouga really is just asking to be skinned. yeah, let's not ask anything and just attack inuyasha in front of his pack, real bright. i can't wait to see how he reacts when kagome and inuyasha come back. and poor sesshie...sudden;y realizing he has a soft spot. he just as to accept it. i think he's learning to deal with things just as much as inu and kags are. and eri. damn that girl is trouble. she and kouga should meet up, both are dense as door posts. at least she got the message...sort of. until she decides the fangs and ears are hot and she wants a piece of the puppy anyway. will she make kagome's trips to school hell? is inuyasha gonna see if totosi can make rings from his fangs? totosai will enjoy pulling those out! if the rings have a piece of inuyahsa and a piece of kagome (say a drop of blood or hair or something, i doubt she'd give up a tooth)would it make it easier for them to be separated by the well and time or would it still be as though the one simply no longer exists? ahh so many questions! i can't wait for what you come up with next!
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Title: need new chapter!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so love this. Eri is a ho and should be put in her place by Kagome or Inu. I can't wait to find out how Kagome ring will turn out. How long before you have them go back to the past or at least Inuyasha? there are so many questions that new answers. plz update soon.
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Title: Part Three
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: September 19, 2006 23:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here you go Literary Goddess!! Part Three!! Bravissimo!! And Whoot!!! I am so enjoying this story and how you add these extra little "loose ends" into the story at just the right time!! Like with Eri! Perfectly presented and intergrated!! That was a great way to discharge Kagome from teh hospital so she can cuddle in her own bed with her favourite koinu-chan. Nice realism with the instructions about Kagome's stitches and what to do in regards to washing.. I wonder if Inuyasha will make it his personnal responsiblity to see that Kagome doesn't get her stitches wet by washing her himself? Eri batted her eyes at Inuyasha.. humph.. I wonder if Inuyasha just rolled his in response. Oh Inuyasha! That soooo incredibly Inuyasha-ish.. speak without thinking!! and nice learning spurt there for Souta! I wonder about all the questions that will arise from this slip of the tongue?? Will Inuyasha have the Talk with Souta too? Loved how Souta comforted Inuyasha about Eri. Very touching! I enjoy their interactions! Heehee!! I think Inuyasha will definitely approve of Kagome not wearing a bra while her cuts heal. snickers.. Possible Inuyasha will love Kagome wearing traditional clothing for the time being.. He will really appreciate it... I wonder if he'll show Kagome how much he appreciates it. He must dream of KAgome in traditional clothes of his time. I like the discussion of getting married sooner. Though it makes it rushed for them I can see their need for it. Youkai understand the mating and they are a no touch but humans require that visible identity for understanding. Sighs... sad really.. But they want to be claimed in every way possible for the world to see. What is up with Sango and her attitude? .. oaky... I am thinking.. possible PMS-ing going on. Poor Miroku. He is acting decently and he gets this. Oh that drives me up the wall.. Kouga calling Inuyash mutt and other insults. He STILL blames Inuyasha for Kagome getting injured. Baka. Needs his butt kicked big time by both Kagome and Inuyasha. And it was like pulling hens teeth to get Kouga to talk. Nice. You kept him so perfectly in character. Very arrogant and self centered! I liked the ending to the chapter! Very good! I can't wait to read more!! Please keep up the most excellent work!! Thank you for sharing this with us!!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 23:20 EDT
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Good job as usual. I always enjoy your stories. I always thought that Inuyasha could make a good living in the future with his diamond shards. At least they will pay for the ring and to repay Mama for all the supplies and ramen she must have purchased over the years
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Reviewed By: adea neri On: September 19, 2006 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
im always looking out for an update. so glad for one. LOVE this fanfic. can wait to read more.
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Title: Part two
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: September 19, 2006 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... here you go... Part two!! I love the way you draw us the reader into the story and merge us smoothly with the character and the situation so that we are a part and can expericence the same as the character .. to let us into the minds of the characters as they struggle and love! I really commend you on this!! Bravissimo!! Bravissimo!! Well, Kikyou now knows Kagome is SOOO Not helpless and Powerless because of her love and love-making with Inuyasha. Thank you, this Kikyou needed that placed in fron tof her face. Nice Kikyou let it slip her thoughts and hidden feelings about Inuyasha's demon body and youkai as well as her still low opinion of Kagome. "But if she purified his youki, it would make him human, and therefore acceptable" Ohhh I can see that coming back on Kikyou ten fold! Inuyasha I wonder if he'll find out this.. Nice come back from Kaede!! Though I wonder if Kikyou actually heard the words or even registered them. I don't believe it!! Yes!! Kaede has stood up to her sister about Inuyasha and Kagome and their relationship!! Alright!! HOORAY!! I liked that little tidbit.. Kikyou would have had sighed if she breathed! funny.. I bow to you!! That was exquistely pulled off!! I loved Kaede's postion and how she stayed firm in her standing. What riches you write into Kaede!! Nice how Kikyou and her nuturing of Onigumo made her resent/hate Inuyasha and Kagome. Is she twisting the situation to make herself out to be the infallible one?? How was the issue Onigumo Inuyasha's and Kagome's fault? Very bad pun.. but Kikyou needs to do some serious soul searching.. Did Kikyou back down a little too easily here or am I mistaken. But I did like that she will not force Kohaku to face something he is not ready to. I appluad her for that!! Literary Goddess this is Awesome!! This is an epic story and so filled with every emoition imaginable!! I love the fresh and unique approach you used. Oh my!!! So Very Sesshoumaru!! I guess he "Beamed" himself up... LOL!! Oh my!! Inuyasha in a Cafeteria!! this should be entertaining! Yeah!! His tummy growled I was hoping for that!! So Inuyasha likes the surgical hat.. I bet he looks adorable in it!! I wonder if Inuyasha or Souta will mention this to Mama and Kagome... Maybe they could find something similiar for Inuyasha to wear while at the shrine. Noodles!! I should have guessed!! That was funny!! and so Very Inuyasha-ish!! Inuyasha does show his love and appreciation for his noodles the best way!! lol!! Oh no!! Kagome's meddlesome friends! And Souta.. that was so little brother-ish! I love this!! What is Eri doing!!?? She is giving Inuyasha unwanted touches. He won't know how to react. Oh.. ick!! I can't believe Eri said that!! I hope Kagome finds out and let's Eri have it! I can see the wheels turning in Inuyasha's head about the marriage bit. Is it me or does Eri sound like she has had sex. I wonder if Eri is going to learn the hard way from Inuyasha that he won't go for her? Love to see her face when Inuyasha in true Inuyasha fashion tells her what he thinks. Oh! Loved Inuyasha's explaination to why Kagome woke up! Very ingenous of him! Smart puupy!! Nice .. real nice of Eri! That was truly uncalled for! Or was she trying to make Kagome seem unfavourable, pathetic and worthless so Inuyasha would coming swooning to Eri's arms? Poor Inuyasha.. he must feel rather uncomfortable right now.. he has closed himself off. Wonder what Kagome will say when she can speak to him... Nice Eri was certainly very obivious about it. I wonder if Kagome caught that as well or just Mama... it is funny in a way that Inuyasha is "hiding" behind Mama. Sighs.. nope Kagome completely missed it. I did like how Ayumi tried to stress on Eri Kagome and Inuyasha' relationship. I like that girl.. she's the only one of the group who isn't seemingly manipulative of Kagome. I am so pleased that Inuyasha did that and said that in front of everyone. So sweet and also I think was to emphasize how badly Eri was.
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: September 19, 2006 19:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes!! Another spectacular chapter from my Literary Goddess!! This is great!! Whoot! Whoot!! Bravo!! I love the grabber that started the chapter! Action!! Intrigue!! Coolies!! I enjoyed it!! Being pulled right in from teh start!! Very well executed!! I can just hear Inuyasha right now! I swear he could probably put sailors to shame with his language! lol!! It makes him perfect! I can see that Inuyasha if ingored will resort to using force to have protect Kagome. I love that about him and you have pulled this off marvellouslly!! I love a protective Inuyasha! Oh my his markings started to show!! What is that nurse doing to make him sooo very ticked off with her? I had to laugh when Souta went to Inuyasha's side and waited to get a hold of Inuyasha's hand when he was waving it around!! I can just picture it in my head!! Thank you!! I am really enjoy this story very much!! Grrr I wanted to whack that dumb arrogant nurse with the medical chart over the head!! Pets Inuyasha on the head and rubs an ear.. VERY Good Boy!! You tell that nurse!! What is the matter with the nurse. If she gives Kagome another shot.. she could cause her to OD! Inuyasha must feel very ticked at having humans ignoring him again. Was Inuyasha baring his fangs at that nurse as well? I laughed again even though it is a pretty intense scene.. now the nurse was waving her arms!! Too funny!! I love your writings and your stories!! Have I mentioned that yet? Well I am now!! Kudos!! I love the way you paint the scenes and bring them to life!! I am soo Happy that the Doctor took Inuyasha serious and went to the chart. What Luck the nurse that had adminstered the injection had come in!! Just question.. the time frame? The nurse gave the shot during the night or close to sunrise? Just a little confused there the way Inuyasha was explaining. Yes the Doctor he checked the logs! Yes!! The nurse is going to get the dressing down!! That was awesome!! Hooray for Inuyasha!! Yes you expressed Inuyasha intelligence beautifully!! So many think he is a caveman in intelligence, grunt or whack something with a stick, but you You show his intelligence perfectly and exquistely!! Thank you, thank you so much for not dismissing him!! whew.. Kagome is okay. I was little worried as she slept through the whole episode. But the Doctor and Inuyasha both made me assured she was okay. Poor Inuyasha praised up and chastized at the same time! lol!! I loved that as well!! What a brillant blend of seasonings you add to the story to create this masterpiece! I was actually pleasantly surprised that Inuyasha's stomach didn't rumble or announce itself during this!! poor Inu he must be rather hungry... I wonder why Inuyasha's barrier never appeared? And now the meeting with Kikyou and Sesshoumaru with Kaede. I let my head drop onto my desk.. Kikyou is still so caught up in her own arrogance that it isn't going to end favourably for her... again. Thank you Sesshoumaru for asking Kikyou and pointing out what we have all been wondering.. If she wanted to Kill Naraku why didn't she when she had so many chances and why did she aid Naraku in becoming so much stronger and cause that much more destruction and heartache. Kikyou.. smooth.. real smooth.. avoided answering their questions properly. But I do really commend Kikyou for Finally accepting/taking responsiblity for the creation of the monster that is Naraku. Awesome that you had Kaede speak those words about denying the others their right to their vengence. They all have rights to avenge. Sweet shot by Sesshoumaru!! Yes!! Finally!! Pointing out to Kikyou that her sister is powerful. Again you have capture perfectly each character! Kikyou does tend to have been so "pampered(?)" so looked up to by all others that it played a huge part in her arrogance. Kudos!! and Bravo!! Thank you for keeping everyone in character, for making them mature and for creating those wonderful and delightful new characters like Myoujou!
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