| "Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 12:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as always, the please update soon thing... ¬¬ eri's a bitch... can't believe she did that... O.oº
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 18, 2006 21:43 EDT
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can i smack kaouga upside the head please. honestly, inuyasha let kagome get hurt. what would kouga do, keep her in a cave? she's gonna fight, she's gonna get hurt. she's stubborn like that. he seems so determined to be a part of their business even though he can't be her mate. very determined to know where they went. and i almost died when inuyasha muttered about eri wanted to fuck his brains out in front of souta. that girl is just asking for it. and sango. at finrst i was really thinking that maybe she wasn't emotionally ready for the next step in her and miroku's relationship but i have to agree with miroku. if i tried something and got hit, i would't try again either! and man does she have trust issues with inuyasha even after her talk with sesshomaru. is he gonna come back to tell them what's up and get nailed by her royal moodiness? can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: crc31789@hotmail.com On: September 17, 2006 22:39 EDT
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*sighs with relief* It's a good thing Souta was there with Inuyasha. And it's a REALLY good thing Inuyasha's blade is so rusty looking when untransformed. Very nicely written scene. *wrinkles nose* Inuyasha had to give her his blood through is mouth. Ewww. It's gotta be extremely unpleasant to drink blood. "The bag was full of /diamonds/" heh heh heh. She almost fainted. It would be really hard to explain where they got so many /diamonds/ from. Hopefully no one will ever find out that they have them... I find that I'm very interested in Kaede and Sesshomaru meeting. Any encounters they have catch my attention. I just think they're interesting characters to have in the same place, conversing. Woot. Even more of an interesting, unexpected encounter--Kaede and Sesshomaru going to see Kikyou. How's that going to turn out? We'll just have to wait and see... Dun dun dun. Heh. ^^" Nice chapter. Took me seven days to notice you'd updated but I'm happy to see that you did. I like this story. I've been reading so many other stories though that I had to skim back and think really hard to remember the specifics of this one. T_T
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Title: OMG WOW OMG!
Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, okay this is going to sound weird but i just spent about a days worth of reading nothing but the whole fanfic from the beginging. I must compliment you on how well you write and hope that you continue with the story as soon as possible. So far this whole thing has left me on the edge waiting so read the next chapter. I think I am addicted to to fanfic that you are writing and absolutely waiting for more. Please please, cont. with the story, its killing me not knowing what is going to happpen next. The way you tell this story, makes it extreamly believible, I honestly believe that this should be an episode in Inu-Yasha!! I am so addicted to your fanfics!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 12, 2006 08:19 EDT
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I think you did an excellent job with Inuyasha after Kagome was injured. You have laid enough groundwork in previous chapters to make every one of this actions and reaction seen completely normal. Excellent job. Thanks for sharing!
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Title: Great work!
Reviewed By: Phoenix7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories just keep getting better and better. Naraku's really in for a world of hurt when he decides to finally show his sorry, cowardly self, since he thinks that Kagome's powers are gone (You wish, Naraku....), and he's in even more trouble now that Sesshomaru and Kouga have finally made peace with Inuyasha and his companions. I really liked the romance scenes between Inuyasha and Kagome, and Sesshomaru's lessons that he gave to both Inuyasha and Kagome regarding their telepathic bond was incredible. If they can learn to control it effectively, then Naraku won't stand a chance of fooling them with those illusions of his. I hope to see more exciting chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 14:30 EDT
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Hm, sorry I haven't updated in a long time but i've been busy. So I just read your last chapter it's really good. Will Kagome have any side affects to being given so much hanyou blood? Like turning into a hanyou? lol. Update soon!!
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Title: .. Part Three
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: September 08, 2006 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... hee hee hee.. embarrassed. well. looks like I have a three parter going.. so here is the final part to my review. I lved and laughed at the final scene with Kagome hogging the bed after Inuyasha left to go to the washroom. adn when she woke up he explained it to her. Funny how she blushed and got all embarrassed about going to the washroom. Did Inuyasha sort of use his powers/talent with the nurse when she gave Kagome the painkillers when Kagome started to move in pain? And the meeting with Kaede, Sesshoumaru adn Kikyou... I wonder how that will go.. I look forward to it! Please Keep up the most wonderful and excellent work!! I love it!! Thank you for sharing this story with us and for posting it! You Totally Rock!!
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Title: Part two
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: September 08, 2006 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in amazement Literary Goddess!! I love this story and your writings!! And now for Part Two of the Review : Almost as if he has to see it to believe it that his little brother took out and single-handedly killed the famed Assassin to Youkai and Humans. I liked how Sesshoumaru investigated the terrain and the attack patterns. So Cool, Very Cool!! Will the arrows be gathered up and see if they are re-usable. I liked the description of the body when Sesshoumaru went to check the Assassin out. And his thoughts of the difference between the methods/ways Inuyasha (Hanyou) and Inuyasha (Youkai) would take care of the threat to Kagome! Very amazing!! I really love how you have written about Sesshoumaru's inner thoughts! I loved how Sesshoumaru used his poison on the body.. kind of like a Take That after the fact. Made me chuckle. I love the cliffies that you have included in this chapter for us!! Well the scene back in the hospital with Mama and Kagome that was great!! With her pulling the blanket up so touching! I wonder what is going to happen now that they have a hold of Kagome's blood with Inuyasha's blood merged in her? What kind of tests will they want to pull or do to examine her blood? At least Kagome, heh, has some proof now of illness. She has unique blood. Hope the hospital doesn't see the strange qualities in her blood as something to "cure". And Inuyasha in doctor scrubs.. can we say sexy! Great with following hospital procedures nicely!! I love it!! Those touches of realism!! I wonder if it was a patterned set of scrubs or if it was the regular green set? I really loved how Inuyasha is putting aside his complaints about Kagome's time in her time of need. That shows more depth to his character. Oh my word!! TOO Cute, Mama giving Inuyasha a kiss on the cheek!! I loved it!! Simply Awesome!! It again goes to show how much he is loved and how little he has received any kind of contact beyond Kagome. For the part with Inuyasha having to wake Kagome and help her with offering his blood to replace hers was it instinctual or was it something Sesshoumaru or Myouga had mentioned? Well it looks like Kagome found something else she enjoys about Inuyasha. His blood. Strange girl, that Kagome. Who would have thought her to be into Vampirism? Lol!! I love all the parts of this story!! So very unique and original!! And I had the same question as Inuyasha what was she thinking!! But so sweet that she asked him to stay with her and keep her warm! Image of Inuyasha in a poofy showercap came to mind and I laughed when I read about the scrubs cap. So sweet and so very Inuyasha to watch over her as Kagome slept. I don't think I can express it properly just had wonderful adn fabulous this story is! I enjoyed how Sesshoumaru in his mind at least acknowledged the strengths and determination of Inuyasha's pack. Liked how Kouga ans Sesshoumaru interacted. That was great!! Darn the Kouga. He won't even give the proper credit to Inuyasha for destroying this Assassin!! YEAH!! Thank you Sesshoumaru for standing up and growling at Kouga for blaming Inuyasha for Kagome's injuries! I was really happy with the way Mama found and took care of the diamonds for Inuyasha and Kagome!! That was really clever!! I really love all these touches of realisms and extra details that you include into your stories!! It just brings it more to life!! Makes it like I am a part of the story and lets be inside/part of each character!! These are marks of a truely gifted writer!! I liked how Kikyou finally arrived at the village, it was timed perfectly!! Shows Kikyou's maturity at understanding that Kohaku needed to stay away from his sister until he is ready to see her but will go see her siste and let them know she is there and both are safe. I loved the maturity and the firmness while remaining diplomatic that Inuyasha displayed at remaining beside Kagome's side for as long as she needed him right beside her.
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: September 08, 2006 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yipeee!! Another Chapter from the Literary Goddess!! Whoot!! Woot!! The beginning; very nicely done! I liked how you took care of Kouga's pack mates so they were not there. That was nice. Noticed that Shippou was curious about Kouga and wondering where Kagome was but he didn't even have a thought about Inuyasha. Hmmm.. think the little Kitsune still has issues about Inuyasha.I really like how you have maintained Shippou as the brat who is still learning throughout the series!! He doesn't just suddenly become the perfect child!! Thank you!! Liked how Shippou was whining and demanding to know why Inuyasha took Kagome home. Very Nice with having Sesshoumaru shutting him up with a look! I giggled a little at that! Very smooth of Miroku cutting in, answering then smoothly deterring the conversation away from Inuyasha and Kagome and the potential blabbing of the Well by Shippou. Great way you had both Sesshoumaru and Kouga give the background history of the assassin and his morals. I really love the plot development that is going on here. Great building of tension!! Oh my… LOL!! The part with Naraku… I know it was meant to be serious but I just can't take him seriously with that laugh and keep a straight face. Though I really do love to hate him. He is such a coward and a jerk. Using others for his dirty deeds. It will all backfire on him!! Cause the others only get stronger, develop more and more powerful with everything Naraku throws at them whereas Naraku remains at the same level. I hope that everyone can keep up the deception on Naraku!! Glares hard at Shippou.. Poor Mama Higurashi, Souta, and Inuyasha! I shuddered at the comment that Kagome said that not so long ago Inuyasha said! Very realistic the way that Mama and Kagome where going about making sure Inuyasha had reverted back into his Hanyou state! Kudos!! That was so funny!! I know it was too was meant to be serious... but all I could see in my mind is Freddy Kreuger when Kagome said it was a guy wearing a glove with knives. Oh Dear!! The police are involved now!! I can see problems in the future for our favourite couple!! Sweet and touching the interaction you had with Souta! I liked it!! Hooray for Souta for jumping in with the police!! But of course they would suspect Inuyasha! Shakes a fist a police.. don't you be saying Inuyasha hurt her! But they are going to keep an eye out on him now aren't they because of her injuries and the vagueness in which they talk about the attack. Poor Inuyasha I can see it now.. the first fight that he gets into with Kagome or the first jealous fit he goes into they will pounce like rabid beasts upon him!! I liked how Souta answered the question on behalf of Inuyasha shows quick thinking!! Thank you!! This is getting better everytime I read it!! And with every new chapter!! Question: will the police notice the difference in stories from Inuyasha and Kagome? The only mistake I found was the mention of the Higurashi Shrine, I thought it was called the Sunset Shrine? Or am I mistaken? Smart to say Inuyasha lived at the Shrine with them. Very smart!! I am hoping that Jii-chan doesn't do or say something to screw up things and cause troubles with this attack and the police. I don't want to say it, but the scene with the police could have been more 'beefed', I guess. I'm really sorry, I don't want to be say anything negative it just is a concern. It was just that one scene. I'm sorry. It seemed like they, the police, were a little passive in the report of the attack and the questioning of suspects.. Perhaps have the police more intense and confrontational, little more sharper with their questions. But maybe they are waiting for Kagome to be released from the hospital or for the incident to get assigned to a detective. Oh!! Maybe they are Youkai/ Hanyou in disguise!! Will we meet Sesshoumaru in the future? Very cool how Sesshoumaru had to go check out the scene of the attack on both Kagome and Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 07, 2006 22:11 EDT
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happy return (isn't always the case to need a few days to recover) poor inuyasha and police officers, he doesn't seem to have a whole lotta luck with them . and naraku is getting all complicated but he didn't do his research it seems. he could have just as easily had another enimy on his hands with the assassin turning on him. he does it to everyone but never seems to expect it from anyone (he's such a control freak, yeah he has it with his minion since he literaly has their hearts, but everyone else is sort of up for grabs. i guess it pays to be lord of the western lands and own modern tokyo, and yasha makes it so easy. anticipation building installment and i'm looking forward to the recovery period. after all kagome can't fight so inuyasha has to take care of her, right? or did the infusion of his blood cause her to heal rapidly and that caused the pain?
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: September 05, 2006 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Had a thought/question...Re-reading the story again..and the scene with the Kongoushouha. Where Kagome comments about the field of Diamonds in her time- is this area where Inuyasha used the attack on or near his Forest? If so... Is Sesshoumaru in the future? And if he is.. will he in the past come across the field and save the land/buy the land in the future making Inuyasha the proud owner of a unique diamond supply? It could be one way for him to provide for Kagome in the future.. Just a thought.. I haven't come across any stories where he is a wealthy person by his own attacks in the future.
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Title: omgosh
Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omgosh... im gettin all into the story since i started readin the 1st yesterday so i continued on cause i enjoyed it... then im gettin all into ready for next chap and it isnt there.... lmao wow i CANT WAIT till next chap... I hope Kagome is ok... update SOON!!!! PLEASE JaNe
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Title: awesomeness
Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 14:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesomenessnessness once again..i love ur writings well....i really hope u update quickly bcuz i want 2 c wat happens 2 Kagome...and Inuyasha with his emotions wen it comes to Kagome's safety...well ....UPDATE BYE!!!
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Title: part two
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie nsi On: August 25, 2006 12:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here comes part two: I love that!! I love stories that do this!! Enjoyed the little tidbit Sesshoumaru threw out there. That Kaede is more powerful than she seems. Thank you!! Thank you!! Thank You!! Too often others have made Kaede into some weak or barely acceptable Miko!! She would have to be strong, people forget her sister is Kikyou and therefore by blood/genetics must be somewhere close to her strength. The scene with Kagome and Inuyasha at the Hotsprings so sweet!! Eepps!! A delicious and heart racing fight scene. Kagome was pretty ticked off when the Tiger Youkai made those accusations and assupmtions about her! lol!! She showed him!! Kagome swore!! Happy dance!! Kagome using her powers outside her arrows!! That Rocks!! But my heart is in my throat!! Kagome is very seriously injured! That demon just said the wrong thing to the wrong hanyou!!! Cheers very loudly for Inuyasha going full youkai and killing the jerk!! Oh dear Kouga smells Kagome's blood. I hope he won't do anything rash..umm.never mind.. will wait for next chapter. Love Inuyasha full youkai! And Sesshoumaru and Kaede's concern! Kagome's family finally got to see Demon Yasha. I loved that Mom and Jii-chan made Souta behave, he was going to be like Shippo. Wonder how they will react and adjust to the knowledge once the crisis is over? All I can't say for the rest of the chapter.. OH MY GOD!OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD!!! My heart is in my throat!! Brillant!! That was awesomee!! Cliffie!!! Passes out... This is Total Righteous!! Great place for Cliffie!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please keep up the most Masterful and Wondrous work!! Loved that Inuyasha maintained control over himself at the Hospital.. other writers would have him going all Monkey butt all ove the place.
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