| "The Greatest Thief Of All" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: GooD!
Reviewed By: Nurse Witch(Not logg in) On: July 14, 2006 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story so far!!Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: xxpatara On: July 14, 2006 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really great, I'd love to see more chapters up soon!
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: Ookami K On: July 13, 2006 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the story outline, it has great promise just some few details needed to be fixed.... On this chapter did you mean for Sesshoumaru to give Kagome the Tenseiga or Tojokin. If it is the pure sword your thinking about it would be Tenseiga which is the fang of life basically. Tojokin is pure evil and threatens to kill those who are considered pure of heart. Sesshoumaru now holds Inu Yasha's sword the Tessiega. so I believe you wanted to give Kagome the Tenseiga and not the Tojokin other than that the story rocks.... Oh a little secret info spoiler if you will..... I had found out a site explaining details about the anime... Did you know Sesshoumru is immune to purification, posions, and from being absorbed.... That's all for now update soon I can't wait.....
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Reviewed By: kagsinred(not login) On: July 13, 2006 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please make a new chapter please i just love this story so very much
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