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| "Dance With Me" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Yaly On: June 25, 2009 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Major tens because I really enjoyed the story a lot and thought that it was really cool. One of the best stories that I have enjoyed in the Cardcaptors section. But this isn't the only masterpiece I've read. Keep on going and maybe you'll be closer to being one of the really awesome story writers.
| Reviewed By: hazu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good! :)
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Reviewed By: Yaly On: November 13, 2008 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa, I really enjoy reading this story and the other story Emerald and Sapphire, I should let you know that my favorite pairing is Sakura and Eriol. They seem to make a better couple than Sakura and Syaoran do, and I have only two things to say, one this is my favorite story and two, you should definitely continue the story, you could put it like Sakura and Eriol have a daughter and that she just loves to dance and she decides to go ask if she can go to a performing arts school and they say yes and while she is there she she meets this boy at a night club, (like Sakura and Eriol) and they dance and then after a while they get to know each other and then she brings him over to her place for one of the holidays (whichever holiday you think about which one) so he could meet her parents and during that time they get to know each other even more. No more from me, I am so full of ideas, I can't just give them all away, how will I then write my own stories when I'm giving them all of my ideas, sorry, I come from a.... not completely 100% normal family, I'm 1% mentally crazy, which is no biggy because other than going crazy about my dream of becoming a writer I am pretty much normal. Again I apologize for my tiny issue, hope you like the idea, (i really do hope, lol) so bye bye for now!
| Reviewed By: anonomous_tenshi On: September 26, 2006 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed your story. It was a ingenious idea to make Eriol a d.j because that gives him a reason to be there without anyone. I found it ufnny that Sakura had such a high alchole tolerany yet meilin had practically none at all. I also liked the fact that you could give the characters a real since of personality even though it was a oneshot, like with sakura learning to tend the bar so quickly. It' would seem that i've run out of complements other then I really enjoyed your story and loved how you handled a bit of there history in there also (sakura and shouran dating) yours truly tenshi
| Reviewed By: Sakuralover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 11:44 CDT
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Hey! I told you I would come over here to reply! So, your first one?! Wow. Omg. I thought that was good. :=] Personally, I can't write that kind of thing, at least not yet. Anyways, grr...it's just the whole T+S...it's just totally wrong in my opinion. xDDDD!!! :=]]] I still love the whole E+S thing though! ^__^;; Well, can't wait to hear from ya soon. Mata neee!
| Reviewed By: Meiling On: July 14, 2006 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! you had an interesting plot, and nicely put together. I'm not used to reading E/S fics, but this was certaining entertaining. For your first Lemon it was pretty good! i'd love to see an Epilogue!
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