| "Naraku's Prisoner" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: NovalisBelle On: December 18, 2007 18:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very good!!! please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next, i just love Naraku/Kagome stories!!!
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 02:01 EST
Comment/Review:
Awww that was a sweet chapter! I think this is one of my favorite stories for the Naraku and Kagome pairings. The preview for the next chapter looks very good as well. As long as you do update; any wait for the next chapter is well worth. Thanks alot for writing such a good story.
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it is nice to see Naraku showing his better side. Now he is the kind of man I would not mind being around. I am looking forward to seeing how Kagome deals with him. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Foxy child On: December 09, 2007 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv it!!! your doing a great job, it was werid cause when i was thinking bout the last chap i was like they should go to dinner and then when you post the 4th chap i was like awww a dream come true.
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 14:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for writing this as I have been looking for a story about this pairing that I have not read yet. It makes me kind of warm inside knowing what his feelings towards Kagome really are and that so far the rest seems to be an act. At least he did have enough compassion to kidnap Shippo as well. Please update soon as I really want to read more.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 01:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well damn I wasn't sure I would ike it but I did so naraku is going to be different in this story huh? I can't wait to see what you do next.
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Reviewed By: Chrystalhearts [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading and can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Lira [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 19:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! This is the first fanfic with Naraku and Kagome that is actually GOOD! Great, even! I know its just the beginning, but the mention of onigumo and the ideas that suggests are excellent!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: korea88 On: December 08, 2006 23:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this was a sweet story overall and this chapter is the best yet keep it coming!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 06:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Title: great
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 16:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote this story great, I hope you post the fourth chapter soon!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: marajsky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 13:11 EST
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wow that was scary! I loved it!!! Keep up the good work. Please post more soon
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Title: Please post more
Reviewed By: marajsky [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 09:58 EST
Comment/Review:
Please post more, I review already, but I can't wait to read more, please :)
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: MissMurder [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic please write more
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Reviewed By: marajsky [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 10:04 EDT
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oh god, you can't stop there!! Please please post more ASAP!! Don't worry about reviews, just finish the story. Good job so far!! PS. You may want to reread this and correct any miss spelled or misplaced words. That's what I do, I reread my chapters to make sure it's ok.
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