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| "'Til The Sun Shines" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] | | Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2009 19:32 CST
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Oh my god, nostalgia much? This... is crazy. I didn't remember half of this story so it was like reAding it for the first time all over again! Ha. But really, I freaking love this fic. These days I'm hanging more around FFnet than here--my username's auPHE--and I'm completely obsessed with KH2. So, uh, yeah...! Drop by if you head over into that fandom, 'mkay?
| Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 21:11 CST
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PS wow, I do ramble. I did want to say thought that I throughly enjoyed your story. I kept on telling my sister what was going on in car rides becuase she is to lazy to read them herself. She likes Naruto ones better. I don't know where she gets it from.
| Reviewed By: Uniasus (not in) On: November 14, 2006 19:27 CST
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Well, I would work on the story but the house got hit by lighting and the computer got fried. TT.TT Sorry. Going as a guy, nice. I was so proud of myself that for halloween I MADE a Jedi costume. It was so sweet. And then at school on of the teachers was like, "You're from Star Trek!" and my band teacher totally thought I was Padme. Old dude. *shakes head* Anywho, so the entire STORY was a dream? No offense but that happens so dang often. Can't you at least say parallel universe? Or mabye an inacted dream or desire?
| Reviewed By: Misa92 On: November 12, 2006 21:55 CST
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double p.s. the movie is soo great haha!!!
| Reviewed By: Misa92 On: November 12, 2006 21:54 CST
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p.s. i only thought last chapter was the end cuz thats wat everybody else said -_-
| Reviewed By: Misa92 On: November 12, 2006 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm.. so lemme see, ed never died? he was in a coma... awesome. but wait... did everything really happen or was it a dream while he was in a coma... hmmmm, this was still like the greatest story ever... so anyways i cant beileve this story is really over... *cries hysterically* i'll be looking forward to your next story... *cries again* ahhhhh... it was so good. i'll probably re-read it soon. then comment again on how frikin awesome this story was. and to Phe... comon... you know you freaked when Ed died.. we all did. and yeah i'll miss the conoversations too... hmm. perhaps will talk again in your next story... or maybe you have msn messenger?? my sn is kagomay1405 (msn) yah i know... i spelled kagome wrong. shut it. lol. *sigh* i dont have skype like phe. pssh... wateva. anyways idk if you'll be able to respond to this... i know! respond in the next story...
| Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix (Not logged in) On: November 12, 2006 12:18 CST
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SEE?! I knew it would be pointless to get all upset that "OMG Ed's dead" and stuffs. But I was rather mad that you made it all a dream. >_> Which I wasn't expecting. Remotely. At ALL. It's like, SOAP OPERA out of the blue. xDD But still good. And what do you mean when you said "it didn't work" about the Toy Boat thing? Like, none of them could say it, or they all could? Oh, wait, you won't have a chance to reply to this... That's sad. ;_; I'll miss our conversations! Actually... Get a Skype name. (www.skype.com) and talk to me on there! Meh username's flame_phoenix_rising! :3 Sh'yeah.
| Reviewed By: Misa92 On: November 09, 2006 17:28 CST
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*looks are the screen blankly* why... *cries* argggghhh... so sad!! when you left the little cliffy, i was like. 'surely edward wont die... probably hoenhiem... alphons? hell, kill off havoc... but edward?!?!?!' *cries hysterically* ahem other that that... i loved this story... is it really over?? thats wat the other comments say... it better not be!!! *sigh* have any other projects in mind?? -bastard- hehe. funny. lol, yeah so guess what... i got the fma movie!!! hehe, its so good, better than watchin in on youtube. thank God for Borders...
| Reviewed By: Tamaria On: November 07, 2006 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My sister randomly introduced it to me, during the short that I got to read it. Even though I was cut off on some parts, I think it was really, really, interesting. Thanks for finally finishing! (I am Mesai's sister, Yay!)
| Reviewed By: Mesai On: November 07, 2006 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, some parts confused me but I got the overall meaning. I think...
| Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 18:29 CST
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Very nicly done, and now its over! TT.TT Since you're no longer distracting me mabye I should go write...Nah, I think I'll go look for another fic to read.
| Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 15:14 CST
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*gack... GACKGACKGACKdead* Yeah... I died... Sorry about that... I had to attend my funeral and such, no time to leave a review for last chapter. Love these chapters! So heart-wrenching, but that's the best part! A-hahahahaa Ed's going to come back alive. Naw, just kidding, I dunno what's happening. Is this the end? Huh. And since... You didn't say anything for me to reply to, I'll talk about fun words to say too. OHMIGAWSH. Try saying "Toy Boat" five times FAST. I have asked this of 20 people, and have proven that it physically impossible to say it correctly more than once. Or at least really really really really really really hard. And it gets annoying! Like, you'd think that you could at least say TOY BOAT correctly, but noooooo. It's always "Toy boat, toy boit, toy boy, AUGHGHGH F***." Yeah. That sums up what comes out of my mouth when I try. xDDD
| Reviewed By: Misa92 On: October 29, 2006 23:19 CST
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the chapters are winding down!! i like the journel entry this chapter... its so true... this chapter was probably the best i'd have to say. well besides the first few that got me hooked in the first place... anyways lol... oh wait!! i forgot... i am angered by the cliff hanger.. well written... but still... i must know what happens!!! i really will kill myself... well not really... i'll just throw a ten-second tantrum like Ed. on the lighter side of things... i really did chuck my ps2... not good at all... it really doesnt help, hmmm the more i think about it i'm kinda like Ed... very impulsive... eh. i forgot but i think i remember seeing a ban on ff.net at my school!! yet they dont ban youtubE??? crazy education systems... *Sigh* they cant protect us from everything. ahahaha! you said bastard... that word entertains me... lmao, i'm weird... ya knw the word jimmy... timmy... and whore entertain me too... well ok... alot of words are cool.. kewl... hehe funny. *two year old moment over* btw i re-read ironic... and i kinda sniffled again... definitely cried the first time... *sigh* such good writers i happen to chance upon.
| Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 09:11 CST
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I think its from read or die. I'm basing this of preview I've read in the back of books or on anime DVD's my friends have. (I don't buy them either). $, I really need some. But since I don't, my friends and I have started monthly trips to borders and we really do just pick up manga from a shelf and read it at the cafe. I always feel kinda bad, so I make sure to buy a cookie or something too. Is this the last one? I can see it being either way, but once again the choice is yours. OH! I was driving home (from a Border's excurstion) and saw a bumber sticker that I thought was the best thing in the world and that you might like to: "Do not meddle in the affirs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup"
| Reviewed By: Uniasus (lazy bum) On: October 25, 2006 20:47 CDT
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A paper master is one who controls the paper of books, shaping it to her will to attack, defend, or if they wanted to, to dance with. I recieved a shiny present today. It was a wand with a sparkly purple stick end and shiny foil pom-pom, center piece, stuff. I'm rather fond of it, and if its possible my fond for shiny has now increased since art... As to Ed's discovery, a valley filled with flowers, another way out, or a stash of philiopher (sp?) stones. Those would be handy.
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