| "There's Something So Special About Her" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 05:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fogot kikyo n kags are sis x_x!! I luv it. Jus when they were 'bout to kiss kikyo comes in!! argh! And she's gonna date kouga...and plz dont tell me he's gonna fire her...no no NO!!! Plz? I luv the update^__^ So.....UPDATE SOON!^__^
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Title: First Things First
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off I hope your stress levels calm down soon and you get some more happiness in your life within your next week! Second I think if you're stressed and produced this many good ideas... makes you such a frigging awesome writer or something like that because the ideas still have me way freaked out! KAGOME SAYING YES? AND TO KOUGA!? KIKYO AND INUYASHA ACTUALLY HAVING A CHANCE TO BE TOGETHER?! Man those two things I never saw coming but I couldn't have been more happy to see them! I'm rather speechless and I can't wait for the next chapter! HAPPY HALLOWEEN! Get enough rest or enjoy all the rest that you can!
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Reviewed By: I hate kikyo On: October 29, 2006 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyo is s bitch, thats al i'm going to asy
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 20:15 CST
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It's getting good! Can't wait for the next update, and I was wondering... I thought Kikyo didn't know who her halfsister was? I mean it's obvious that it was Kagome, but yeah, is that a mistake in the text or something?
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Reviewed By: lil6ter On: October 28, 2006 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I love your story, but your grammar is atrocious. I have been following your other storys as well, but this is the first time that I decided to say anything. As for my critique, all I can say is that I can find lots of sentences that don't make any sense what so ever. And if you would like me to, I would be more then happy to do so, that way you could make your story even better. Let me just say for a start, that it looks like you never re-read what you have written, because then you might find these mistakes. Here is a very minor one that keeps reappearing. You constantly use the word on instead of in. for example, when Inuyasha says, "No more complains! now you three go and clean up the mess on the living room!" in chapter two.(I underlined the mistake) I will stop there because I do not know if you would like for me to continue or not. I will say thought that I am entranced by the story and cant wait to find out what happens next. I hope that in the end Inuyahsa will dump Kikyo for Kagome. Keep writing :)
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAn PLEASE have a Kagome and Kikyo fight, have Kagome give her a punch just for me! lol great job keep it up ^_^
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A cliffy?!? Why oh why oh WHY!!! I think the baby is Naraku's child, right? That kikyou is a evil little bitch! And Inuyasha!! He wants kags n kikyou? I say dump the bitch n take kagome, yea but she kissed kouga. That's more drama. I'll be waiting for an update!! And the for including my fic in your story^__^....
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Title: BANGING Job Anyway!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely adore the major melodrama in this chapter anyway! And is it just me or are teachers everywhere becoming work fanatics at this strange time and causing an overdose of stress on their students...I'm so stressed I had my time of the month TWICE within the same month- really close together too...ugh, oh well, that's the way the cookies crumbles...Karma better bite those teachers back in the ass soon before I do it myself... now for this chapter, KAGOME KISSING KOUGA!?, not original but in this context OH MY WORD!... Hey it's what Inuyasha deserve I guess but Inuyasha needs to know that pushing Kagome away is in no way helping the situation... making her hate him, yes but making her stop loving him... not in this world! Inuyasha should just catch Kikyo and Naraku in bed and dump the B****...lolz, but seriously Inuyasha must be stupid to believe half of those lies that Kikyo made and Kikyo is stupid because she has to keep that suit on until the wedding and in the wedding itself... so in other words she's gonna get caught and screwed over so badly!- CAN'T HARDLY WAIT!... Whenever Sango tells Kagome about Miroku, I'll be here reading and laughing out of my seat about what happened. I think you did a pretty good job even with being stressed...no, a BANGING job! Somehow this chapter has so much drama within it that I couldn't believe it... I wonder when will Rin's wish come true and how long will this story last.... lolz, I don't care if it ends too sooon because it this story went on any longer, the drama would be way too much! Anyway, I'm gonna wrap it up by saying that the song I thought of when reading this is Cinderella's "A DREAM IS A WISH"...lolz... Good job and I can't wait for the next update... as soon as you're relaxed you could get back to it!
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Title: NICE COMEBACK!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the recent chapter so mcuh that I started to jump and dance after reading it and reread it again while dancing to the song, "That Girl" by Frankie J and Mannie Fresh... this song just fits this chapter in such an odd and weird way! I can't wait for the next chapter... it's absolutely addictive reading while I should be doing my homework! lolz... I can't wait for the continuing of Kouga's reaction and the others seeing as Kagome is back...! Great job with this chapt, it definitely a huge comeback to the cliff hangers I'm so used to reading in your writing!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 14:47 CDT
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thanx for the review. I went over n the story n did the spelling n grammar. I kno this might be asking too much of, and i understand if you refuse; but can u pwease inculde my fic to your readers when you update in any of your fics?? I promise i'll do the same for you. Really really promise^_^ Oh, n do you have an account of Youtube? http://www.youtube.com/profile?user=kagome313 that's my profile, if you have a account, leave a comment plz!^^
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story...UPDATE SOON!!=D. And check out my first story plz; you have to go on my profile to see it tho^^ hope to see a review!!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Keep it up! ^_^
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Title: OUCH!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is always portrayed as the one to be overly dramatic...lolz, Will Inuyasha and Kouga actually be fighting for Kagome's love if she does come back? What will happen when Miroku reads Sango letter? So many unanswered questions and much more from just this one chapter! Great ideas though, you put out another heart wrencher and right on time, lolz... As for starting another story- maybe - wouldn't you want to spend your time having more funs with your days, knowing you don't have to try to think of another idea for a story or whatnot... But if you're up to it by all means go right on ahead!... Great job with the latest chapter... I felt sad and lost at how Kagome is going to survive. And also now that Yura and Kagome are friends, would they give each other advice on their love life or is that solely the job of Kagome's other friends... When readint your chapers, a song always play in my head... "Simple and Clean"- Utada Hikaru- awesome song of the year! Can't wait for the next chapter! All these changes from te beginning makes this story thrilling!
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 17:54 CDT
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Oh, sorry, but by the way... wouldn't InuYasha be able to smell whether or not Kikyo is pregnant? Or is he not hanyou in this story? I don't remember... lawls, i need to check!
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! I really HATE Kikyo, what a bitch! I don't know if i have reviewed on this story yet or not... too many stories! Anywho... I love this one and I hope you'll update soon!
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