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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 10:04 CST
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TEASE!!! I know it's NaNo and it's busy, but sheesh! That's just cruel! MORE!!!!! Umm...please?
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 08:08 CST
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Hmph. You see this face?*points at face* This is me pouting at you for giving us another teasing chapter. You're taunting my mind! Though I suppose I haven't exactly been prompt in updating lately...*Pout turns sheepish*
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 11:05 CST
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hee hee hee...
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 11:01 CST
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See? I'm not that far behind. Intriguing!
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Title: More, please
Reviewed By: LilyMoonsAlias [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 14:56 CDT
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More, pretty, I need more. I'm so caught up in this little world. Crawford is so drool worthy I must take a few deep breathes to get to the end. The Aya/Ben interaction is funny. Not too many can get the drop on Aya. I bet it pisses him off to no end.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 12:21 CDT
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What? Like there has to be a reason to restrain Aya? *grin* Another wonderful chapter, love! I'm excited about Yohji's gift! I certainly hope it's something that will be useful to the team! (Of course, I want it to make him live as long as Aya, too...) Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 12:14 CDT
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I love chapters where I get to learn things (besides about the story) and chapter 6 didn't disappoint! One of my absolutely favorite things about your fics is the way that people get to interact with the Dinvine, supernatural, demonic, etc. in a somewhat casual manner. Those exchanges and interactions are among my favorites from both 'Shaman' and now this!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 12:05 CDT
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Love the Edith Wharton quote in chapter 5! It's...fitting. Glad to get a little more information about Aya, though it made me sad. I hope there's a relatively happy ending in there for my boys somehow! And, I simply must agree with Aya's sentiments. We ALL know what needs to be happening with Brad and Schu-bear! Sorry that it's taken so long for me to get to this, but it's certainly an excellent reward for all the work I've been doing!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 22:25 CDT
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Concerned Aya! So Cute! And Yohji has a gift! Yes! Luvluvluvluv!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 14:15 CDT
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aah finally you get to the point (read Yohji and Yohji's gift)...now if there was only some guarantee that the rest of this fic would stick to the point :P
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 09:43 CDT
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Ooooooh! You are too devious! I think I tried to review one of your others fics but it didn't work. Can't remember which one...my memory it like a sieve. I want another chappie! Please?! More, more!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 22:50 CDT
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dv...*hug* haven't done that in a while...thanks for updating
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge nsi On: October 03, 2006 22:52 CDT
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hee hee hee...you just keep coming up with the good stuff! Go, Phoenix! (and write more while you're gone ;)
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 22:12 CDT
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I can't wait to see what happens when Aya gets out there to see what Yohji's up to. That's sad about tha human mate thing...is Aya gonna get angsty now? Ha! I'd be surprised if anyone didn't know what needed to be happening with brad and schu. Make everyone steal their clothes and lock them in a room together with a huge tube of lube...they won't last ten minutes! Mwahahaha!
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Title: first! take that!
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 16:14 CDT
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lol...so smack me and call me immature....there was no yotan...*glares* the next chapter better have yotan...hmmm so aya's gonna out live yohji? please tell me he's not gonna do that honourable self-sacrifice thing...you know that whole it's not worth it...i should free yohji thing...cuz i'll start smacking him from now
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