| "Black Velvet" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Title: chapter 16
Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 17:56 CDT
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Wow! I'm not sure I can handle the thought of Brad in PVC, leather, and a collar. Whew! *mops self off of floor* You really know how to paint a picture, love!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 23:15 CDT
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oh, THAT's who the kids are! O_O
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 21:45 CDT
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wow brad with kids...can't twist my head around that....i was really tempted to ask where's yohji but i'm being good so i'm not
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 21:42 CST
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uh oh, who are the kids???
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 13:41 CST
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hee, they both had the same idea for once! (sex doesn't count, they have THAT same idea all the time...)
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 19:24 CST
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Ahh, a perfect Valentine's Day gift, thank you!
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Title: squeee!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 22:15 CST
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squeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: yes she's back!
Reviewed By: the chibi! On: January 30, 2007 21:15 CST
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ooh so since im back i decided to re-read red shaman....focusing mostly on the A x Y parts of course, lol...you humoured me a lot didn't you? poor dv *hug* that's why i love you....had to stop and catch my breath there when it clicked that ayan could have been pregnant...and he's gonna propose!!!!!!!*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!*...oh and poor brad.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 19:17 CST
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okay, all caught up! Bring on the smut!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Lovely Aya and Aurora moment; Schuldig is chasing Crawford again, who is willing to be caught; and great humor to end the chapter. Who could ask for more, other than to hope for more soon?
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yum, first a possible proposal coming from Aya -- and a shocker if Yohji turns out to be correct, then a Brad acting quite out of character (in a good, and for this story believeable way) possibly moving Schuldig to finally show his appreciation. Loving every minute.
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Reviewed By: LilyMoonsAlias [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 17:03 CST
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Oooooh, this part just melted me and has inspired a bunch of fantasies. Hell, if Schu doesn't jump on him in this get up, he's out of luck, cause I will.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 20:31 CST
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hehe i have to agree w/ KD's comment, it says it all
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Title: I'mmmmm Baaaaaaack!!!
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: January 14, 2007 22:38 CST
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I finally have internet connection again! Hopefully I can get back to everyone's updates now. God, you're being so teasing again! I need to know what is going on with Aya and Yohji! I've been out for a month and I'm in serious withdrawal!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 13:03 CST
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I'm finally caught up again! And, wow! I'm missed a lot. The more I find out about Brad's past, the less I want to know. My kudos to Skye and Star and their expert handling in both the past and present. I'm looking forward to the "conversation" between Brad and Schu! Also, I find the idea of Aya pregnant both hysterically funny and somewhat disturbing. As always, your story is amusing and upsetting in turns. However, it is always engaging and well written! Keep up the great work!
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