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Title: ???! XD
Reviewed By: dramafreak000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was kewl!!!All of them are !!! What will happen when Asuka comes back? Damn cliffhangers!!!!Are u going to conclude where Itachi kills his clan please email me about it...now that I think of it when she comes back shell be 18 so Itachi is already in akatsuki...ASUKA!!!Dont choose Kakashi!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animealover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! poor asuka, she has to go away for 5 years! OMG!!! update!!!:)
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: dramafreak000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter rocked... GEISHA???!!!!Arent they like prostitutes? please email me about it...Poor asuka.. But it seems that she is most likely gonna be with Itachi...GO RAVEN !!! BOO SILVER AND OR WHITE!!!
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Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 10:30 CST
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Gasp! She's leaving?! Damn....this is...surprising...but what about Kakashi? It was a REALLY good chapter!! I'm so excited!
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Title: Ummm...........
Reviewed By: dramafreak000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_o Please reveiew !!!! i really wanna know who Asuka ends up with...I have a very strong feeling its Itachi...Kakashis like 21!! So yeah Im gonna go with the Raven Dude
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Reviewed By: Riahna_x On: December 23, 2006 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:| :o DUN DUN DUNNNN god i love this fanfic Itachi is GOD :p x keep up the good work m'dear always appreciated :D x
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Reviewed By: animealover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh! update soon!!! so kakashi finally pronounced his love! and itachi's so cold? update!love it!
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Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 19:54 CST
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a cliffhanger!! Nooooo...ah, that was a really good chapter! Kakashi's confession, Itachi being a bastard (no offense to him...but he was) neh! I don't know what's going to happen!! ahh! I loved it! Can't wait for the update! -^^-
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Title: OOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: dramafreak000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wait...in the christmas fanfic...itachi kissed asuka but in this one she said her first kiss was with a puppet....urr...I luv this story it rocks!!!I will make a whole new fanfic soon and I u would like u could give me some ideas.... PLZ!!!
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Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 09:00 CST
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ha! Kakashi is jealous...lol. I have a feeling Kakashi and Itachi are going to duke it out...hmmm...how will it turn out? *gasp* -^^- I loved it, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: dramafreak000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a great idea!!!!If you will make just two more chapters....PLZ!!!It will be about Asuka meeting a little girl sasukes cousin...A girl named Uchiha Akira!!! And she will steal Itachis diary and tell Asuka what he feels about!!! Oh!!Another funny idea!!!Sasuke and Akira take a bath with Itachi while your cooking with thier mom...And Sasuke will say Hey niisan?will I get one of those thingied when I get older?And then Akira starts giggling..POKEPOKE...HEY...Itachi says err...Yeah sasuke sure ...I'll explain to u later u guys...
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Reviewed By: animealover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 14:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH sooo sad! is it the end? update soon!
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Title: Zomg!
Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this!! POor Kakashi, he just wants to kiss her...and more 0_o but still, I think Itachi's planning to do what he had done in the series, correct? If so, I'm going to be SOOO pissed off. He and Asuka DO make a cute couple. It was hilarious when Asuka realized her first kiss was with a puppet made of mud! lmao. Anyways, brilliant storyline, I'm definitely adding it to my favorites.
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Reviewed By: animealover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!! now she runs to kakashi!!! what will happen next? UPdate soon!!!
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Reviewed By: 2sexy4u On: December 06, 2006 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would kill them all to if that happened to me! ...............I think........WELL ANYWAYS UPDATE SOON BUDDY!!! ^.^
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