| "The Unexpected" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 02:34 CDT
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Ooh, the suspense! Bravo! I wonder who else left Kagome...good job! Love this chapter. Please update as soon as you can. :)
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Title: cactusflower
Reviewed By: Cactusflower [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 20:26 CDT
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This story is a little different than what I would normally read. But I do like how it is going and would like to see how it ends, so don't stop. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 19:55 CDT
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i can't wait for the next Chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: KAMILLE On: August 13, 2007 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT EVEN THOUGH U KILLED SOUTA .AS ANNOYING AS HE COULD BE HE WAS STILL COOL. SOOO KEEP WRITING BYE
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Title: The Unexpected
Reviewed By: blue wolf On: August 13, 2007 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are doing a great job.i am loving evey min. that i read your story. i can not waet until they get the guy and get every thing in order.
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Reviewed By: viet_X3_kiss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story....i felt like crying when Souta died....you gotta update this story!!!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: December Love 05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Nods.* Yup. Another great chapter by the wonderful kaishy315. I liked ita lot. I would've loved it if you hadn't left that small cliff hanger. I'm an impatient person. SO UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! December Love 05
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 22:37 CDT
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Please continue. Was it Kyoto? I wish you hadn't... Souta hadn't.. yeah.. (in case someone reads this review who doesn't know what happens yet) I would have reacted exactally the same way if I was kag and my dad showed up.. well.. i might have punched him.. but yeah. I really like your story, but i personally thing you should post bc u want to.. not bc people review.. I mean, yes I'm sure it's encouraging and stuff but there are like.. thousands of fanfics out there and no one can read them all and some people who do read them don't like reviewing, ya know? But that's my opinion. Please continue. thanks
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 21:00 CDT
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I just wanted to let you know that your story is awesome and keep up the good work. I can't wait until the next chapter is up to read. Are you going to let Kagome & Inuyasha get close? She really needs someone to lean on now that her brother is gone. I almost cried when i found out that her brother was killed. Oh my, i guess you had to kill him but i love Sota. Well anyway keep up the good work and don't forget that your story is awesome!!
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Title: The Unexpected
Reviewed By: blue wolf On: August 11, 2007 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please keep writing it is getting good.
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Title: The Unexpected
Reviewed By: Lonely Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kaishy315, I am writing in response to your Autho's note. I know that writer's love to hear from ther readers as to how they are doing and that is great. But I am one of those reader who usually will not write a reivew unless the story throws me, gets really bad, or a fablulous writer gets discouraged. That is why I am writing you now. Read and enjoy your reviews. You deserve them greatly. But before you consider giving up on this story or any other story you are writing-look at the number of visits your work is getting. That says more than the reviews could possibly. Most reader don't knwo what the write so they don't, they just keep coming back for more, checking everyday to look for an update. You are a terrific writer. Yes you leave out some words here and there, but they way you write your reader's minds automatically fill in the missing words because the flow is already going. Don't write for other people as much as you write for yourself. If you do then just as soon as someone flames you you will give up on a marvelous talent that you shouldn't waste. Like the movie "Field of Dreams" said "If you build it they will come!" If you write it we will read. If you ever need any encouragement I will be here-lonely lady! WRITE FOR YOU AND YOU WILL BE WRITING FOR US!!! You are good and do not let anyone make you believe anything different!!
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 21:02 CDT
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I like this story. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: InuAngelInuDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 20:07 CDT
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I dont know why people woulnt read this, this is a awesome fanfic and its one of my favorites, the only tip i gotta give you is to change the summary on the preview so that people scanning for fanfictions will be more interested in it more...and besides you are awesome! I'll tell other readers I know to read this and review it, its amazing...^-^...please please continue this fanfic, i love inuyasha and kagome pairing the most...
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Reviewed By: inuluvr09 On: August 08, 2007 13:24 CDT
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I'm really enjoying this story. Much more than I originally thought I would. In your author's note, you asked for what we would like to see happen. Well, I keep thinking Kouga's going to pop into this story at some point. I know he was only mentioned once, but I can't help but think think that maybe he has a bigger part to play. Granted, we don't exactly know who the murderer is yet, who attacked Kisa, or if they are the same person or not. Wow, you still have a lot to accomplish in this story. And for all your reader's know, it could turn out to be Kouga who's behind everything. I think he could be a really cool villain or something. Just something to think about. And I totally get the fact that you don't have perfect grammar and spelling skills. Most of my friends don't either. But have you thought of getting a friend who does to edit your stories just for that kind of stuff. Don't let her change the plot, just the spelling and grammatical issues. On a better note, I absolutely love how you played up Souta in this story. I always hate how most Kagome/Inuyasha fanfictions are just centered around them and we don't see enough of the supporting characters to get attached to. Then one dies and you're like, "Oh well." So, I really liked that. Thank you so much. Please keep writing!!!!!
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Title: PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: Lady Phoenix On: August 07, 2007 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE~ YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING THIS! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS, WHO KILLED SOUTA, WHAT WILL HAPPEN BETWEEN INUYASHA AND KAGOME AND HOW WILL EVERYONE REACT!!! Keep up the good work, I've really enjoyed this and can't wait to read more.
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