| "Kagome Uzumaki, Believe It!" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting but you should really fix those spelling mistakes like, not to be a snob or anything i just wanna help. You put 'Laying' instead of Lieing it think its how it spelt and Tsunade's name was spelt werid all in all it was a very interesting chapter keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!I'm laughing at how funny this story is,and want to read more,so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: DarkestDragon102894 On: September 07, 2006 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE! I really want to know more!:D
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Reviewed By: almirann [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 14:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
well i like it but i really think u shouldnt have made her look really similar to narutoi think u couldve done better with black hair and no wiskers. but i like it
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