| "Rubbing The Lamp" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 10:03 EDT
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PICK THE TWINS!!!! i love the twins they are just so witty...specially with those raspberries ....hot chapter!! want MORE
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 17:16 EDT
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Sure, Haruhi, raspberries cause all your problems. It doesn't have anything to do with the six hot guys who all want to have sex with you. Hahahahahaha! That was such a good chapter. She's finally starting to realize what's going on. I can't wait to see what Mori will wish for, and then the third wishes!!! I'm so excited. I hope you can post the next chapter soon.
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: AviaJade On: July 11, 2007 12:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I waited so long for this update because i am a Hikaru haruhi koaru fan it was awesome my only dissapointment is that it was so short and i want more hhk fluff or lime (lemon >.
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Reviewed By: kitlae On: July 11, 2007 12:29 EDT
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SO SHORT! AH! ;.; More rubbing the lamp, PLEASE? I want to get to the third wishes SO BAD right now >.>
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 05:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What , NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more please thank you.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: plusher [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like the tory. AWESOME WORK! i really want to ee how this turns out. I'm really curious. oh and btw...according to the firt manga volume, epiode three, Mori is the oldest. Hatori made a little mistake and apologized for it....Not that it realy matters. he had explained that she made hunny the oldest in epiode one, but hunny is a pisces and mori is a taurus, soo....she made a tiny mistake.... just saying....but honestly, it doesn't matter.
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Reviewed By: wirtzy On: July 10, 2007 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, I adore your story. I really do (especially Hunni's chapters >.
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Reviewed By: taterbean96 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been reading this since you first started it and all i can do is beg...please let her end up with Kyouya! love this and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: A.N.G.E.L.I.C.A....! On: July 01, 2007 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the only fan fiction that i have ever felt the need to comment on. i love it! i can't wait for the other chapters! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL...ummm...just update soon...PLEASE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shannonigans On: June 27, 2007 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic, it actually got me into ouran! I had never seen it before and I was looking for something good to read, so I clicked on your story... and before I knew it, I was looking up what the characters looked like on wikipedia and watching the episodes! now i absolutely love it and I'm so glad I decided to read your fic... I can't wait for your next chapter! And for me it's Haruhi x Mori all the way! Haha
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 20:35 EDT
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ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!! i loved it...the twin's mom was just one of a kind...I really feel just like her...super funny (my fav pairing up to now )
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Reviewed By: GarnetKoryu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say my words of encouragement for this fic- it's origional and addicting and I can't wait until you update again! Also I want to praise the depth you put into your characters, it's a rare prize to find an author who can stay true to the origional, and let the character "grow" into their own work. =^.^= Kepp writing! You're great! -GK
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Reviewed By: cattiemae On: June 26, 2007 10:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly, I'm amazed by your story. This is simply my 2nd favourite fic out of the thousands that I've read. I haven't seen any story quite like yours, although there are common elements, you've made them entirely yours to manipulate. In this chapter though, did you perhaps rush it? I just wanted to point out that some of your sentences were incomplete, words missing. It gets me frustrated whenever I think of who Haruhi will end up with, if she even ends up with someone (she will though, won't she??). I mean...It's not like all SIX guys can share her...*day-dreams* hmmm, no way! But I do hope she ends up with Kaoru&Hikaru. Too hot for words. *Sigh* I guess, Haruhi is fair game though. Anyway, dude, this fic gets me too excited and pumped up for more. My friends were ashamed to hang around me in the library as I was squealing way too much when I was reading the previous chapter the day after you uploaded it. I really like your dialogue too! It's intelligent, witty, and hilariously embarrassing for Haruhi "...But if it's both, I do want to hear all about the first time you have sex with the two of them together!" Um, awesome anyone? Highlight of the entire chapter. Favourite chapter, I must say, is when Haruhi had massaged Huni. To.Die.For. Eagerly anticipating a.k.a desperately waiting, for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 06:22 EDT
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i love how the twins mom talked to haruhi so funny . lol
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Title: thank you
Reviewed By: envy-chan On: June 26, 2007 04:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading moris first wish and i wanted to thank you for making me hungry for sushi at 4:00 in the morning.lol well your stury is really good and ima going to keep reading. Hmmmmm...i usually dont read these kinda fanfics but yours is so awsome. I never really thought much of more but you made me apreciate him more. wow i really want some salmon right now....lol
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