| "The Golden Knight" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 19:39 CST
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Haro/Mark relization of Shute knowing the truth was touching. It kind of got Lacroa-ish towards the end. Please contiue with this.
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Reviewed By: Shima_Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 15:19 CST
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^_^' update and make the people happy fish girl ^_^ and -_-' you killed RJ haha... you do relise your screwed now right
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Title: *taps foot*
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where's the next chapter? The "Shute" fan branch is starting to get restless. (sees "Shute" fans coming with pitchforks and torches) Hurry!
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 15:31 CST
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Ouch! Shute finds his mother then loses her. Man that hurts. That is a good question, just how do you get back to your dimension. I guess the Zakorello gate and the Gundamusai will be put into play soon. I eagerly await your next chapter Shiva.
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Title: Awww...
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Shute... He finds and loses his mother in the space of five minutes. I feel so sorry for him! Please update soon. ('Shute' fans- Awwww, poor Shute... *sniffle*)
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Title: Welcome!
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome to the SD Gunfans, Shiva! ("Shute" Gunfans- UPDATE, GIRL!) (See? I told you that most of Shute's fans were nutso!)
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Title: Woohoo!
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'ts about time that Shute got to fight! Go get 'im, Shute! The SD Gunfans are cheering for you!
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 15:33 CST
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Why must you contiue with the evil? Yeah come on SHute get the Drak Axis! Please contiue I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Title: You are pure evil...
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
But the story rocks. Oooh, I wonder what Haro/Mark will say when he finds out that Shute knows. Bring on the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 20:19 CST
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Gold is SHute's mother! I know it! You are evil Shiva. But that makes the story all the more interesting. Please continue.
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Sayla Gathermoon On: November 09, 2006 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!! I WANT TO SEE MORE! Nice job so far.
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 18:11 CDT
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Yes very nice. I like that you are putting in more action now. Also the Zakus are Zakos. Other then that everything seemed okay. Nice job once again.
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 23:28 CDT
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So is Gold a she? Let's go with that. Very well done once again. I nevered imange it would be Keiko who would stumble across Gold but hey I like little suprises like that. Please keep going with this.
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: September 29, 2006 17:46 CDT
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Not bad, I like it. But I must point out one error on your part. Bakunetsumaru's homeland Ark is on the planet Soradio Rama, same as Lacroa, Zero's home. other than that, this is a good fic.
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 20:28 CDT
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Very well done nice start. Am I correct to assume that Shute is the Prince? Please contiue with this story.
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