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"The Scent of His Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ]
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 Reviewed By: DemiKusanagi [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2007 18:11 PST
Comment/Review:
wow. . . just WOW I had to read the chapter 4 three times, making sure that I got every detail of this new and exciting development, then I went back and reread the entire story twice. It is going to take days to remove the smile your story has placed on my face. You even went so far as to find the perfect place in the games story line for all of this to occur. Utter and complete perfection. What more can there be said about how much I love your writing. A few have voiced it, many are thinking it, and I will repeat it: Bioxz you are the Master of FFX Yaoi!
 Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2007 11:10 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well that is definately something I will be waiting for. I seriously wanna know how the hell Tidus and Kimahri are going to explain this ones to the guardians. But hey even if this fic only has a few more chapters you could always write a one-shot sequel of when Tidus comes back to Spira he goes to find Kimahri. Kimahri is a little stunned to see him and hot smex ensues as Kimahri re-asserts his dominance over his mate. Always a possibility. I sreiously love this. I hope you manage to update soon. Arie Date.
 Reviewed By: Tasa [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 25, 2007 10:31 PST
Comment/Review:
Just read the story..... and i want more O.O Please!
 Title: MORE!!!
Reviewed By: DemiKusanagi [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2007 16:23 PST
Comment/Review:
*begs* please update soon, i'm will to give my left kidney if you do, okay well maybe not that, you want my 1st born?
 Title: I love it and I want MORE!!
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 19, 2006 03:08 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I seriously do. Though I have to wonder....... WHERE THE HELL DID THIS COME FROM???!! I mean seriously. I never even considered a relationship between Kihmari and Tidus. It just never occured to me that these two could mate at all. It seems so foreign. Like it's all the deranged dream of a mad man. And yet it fits. In the game, right after the events of the Al Behd Home Kimahri's attitude conserning Tidus changes a bit. And for some reason when I read about the interactions between Tidus and Kimahri the scene right after Operation Mi'hen keeps popping into my head. When you actually hear Kimahri's voice for the first time? I keep thinking about that and realize that it IS possible for those 2 to become mates. But I really wanna know what happens with Biran and Yenke and what Kimahri will make them do to apologize to Tidus. SO please will you update soon? Please? I feel that this story has a kinda sad ending coming and I wonder how you'll make Kimahri react when Tidus leaves. And will you ever have them tell the others what happened to them? About their mating? Sorry I'm just a curious person by nature. Feel free to ignore the idiot with insomnia. She reads this fic to keep tabs on them and to relax. UPDATE!! Arie Date.
 Title: Me = Amazed
Reviewed By: Shad-ai [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 24, 2006 01:14 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy... cow. Once again, you've blown me away. There's that term I'd use, but I fear I'm overusing it. =P I read the alternate version of this chapter at Yiffstar, but I was always waiting for the chapter afterwards, where Kimahri's fight would take place. I notice that you changed the way you wrote the chapter, and posted it here. Wonderful story. I can't wait for the next chapter. *does Yevonite prayer*
 Title: Wow
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 19, 2006 15:49 PST
Comment/Review:
the raw, primal, sensual way you have written this fic is very impressive! I only wish there were more authors liek you who could describe passion and emotions with the intensity you do. You were right about your latest chapter, it had way more plot in it than I expected and definitely went into Kimahri's background in detail. Poor Kimahri, and yet he managed to find his mate and find happiness. I only wish that Tidus and Kimahri actually loved one another but hopefully that'll come later. ;) I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. Chapter length was perfect btw. ^^
 Reviewed By: Mr.Christie  On: November 16, 2006 00:50 PST
Comment/Review:
Woot! Another great chapter and the promise of more to come! I hope it comes out soon, cause the cliffhanger is going to kill me. Plus, you write the most wonderful smut. I liked the drama in this chapter and how you show how Tidus is slowly coming to terms with being mated to a Ronso. I could totally see those bastards doing something like that to poor Kimahri, but I'm sure he'll make them wish they were never born. *evil smirk* As always, keep up the good writing and update quick, cause I'm looking forward to it! :)
 Reviewed By: DemiKusanagi [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 22, 2006 07:38 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Once again you've reached above and beyond my exspectations. I was absolutely thrilled throughout the second chapter and had the hardest of times trying to keep myself from scrolling down and seeing just what you would have happen next before even finishing the paragraph before it. If I applauded you before right now I'm giving you a standing ovation ^________^ I an extremely pleased and hope that you would continue this story.
 Reviewed By: Mr.Christie  On: October 15, 2006 02:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for that chapter, it was as good as I hoped it would be. I hope you don't stop there, as I am enjoying your unique pairing and view-points as well as the pleasure of reading a well written story. And remember, you can never post too much at one time! ;D
 Title: ...
Reviewed By: vixie_rose [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2006 20:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
dude...I...I'm like totally speechless...I'm not sure if to like laugh about how funny Tidus is running and the fact that Kimarhi still wants to do him...or to like say this is the freakiest things I have ever read...It was like...so wrong, but I couldn't look away...so...UPDATE SOON!!!!!
 Title: Bioxz... Master of FFX Yaoi
Reviewed By: Shad-ai [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2006 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Once again, you've proven to be better than all the rest. Once I saw Chapter 2 in place, I was anxious to read it, but damn. It blew me away. Once again... ((OVERKILL)) You are the true master.
 Title: Praise Be To Bioxz
Reviewed By: Shad-ai [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2006 00:04 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh. My. Yevon. I loved this fic. I don't see very many Final Fantasy X yaoi fics, and the ones I have seen have been good, but this blew them all away. I really hope you get the next chapter up very soon. I can't wait to see what our beloved Ronso has in store for our Star Player of the Zanarkand Abes. Compared to other FFX fanfics, there is only one way to explain this... ((OVERKILL))
 Reviewed By: DemiKusanagi [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 10, 2006 18:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
I must say that I loved this story and would love it even more if you continued. The ending and the realization was totally unexpected. *applaudes* very well written^^
 Reviewed By: Mr.Christie  On: October 03, 2006 00:15 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A very interesting pairing done in a very unique way, I very much liked this. I found your portrayal of Tidus and Kimahri to be very in-character. I liked the imaginative imagery :) and I especially liked the way Kimahri gave the scent no quarter or mercy. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter, both to see the reactions of everyone else (if they find out), and because I, like most everyone else, am a huge fan of well-written smut! ;D
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