| "The Scent of His Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Title: Me = Amazed
Reviewed By: Shad-ai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 01:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy... cow. Once again, you've blown me away. There's that term I'd use, but I fear I'm overusing it. =P I read the alternate version of this chapter at Yiffstar, but I was always waiting for the chapter afterwards, where Kimahri's fight would take place. I notice that you changed the way you wrote the chapter, and posted it here. Wonderful story. I can't wait for the next chapter. *does Yevonite prayer*
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 15:49 PST
Comment/Review:
the raw, primal, sensual way you have written this fic is very impressive! I only wish there were more authors liek you who could describe passion and emotions with the intensity you do. You were right about your latest chapter, it had way more plot in it than I expected and definitely went into Kimahri's background in detail. Poor Kimahri, and yet he managed to find his mate and find happiness. I only wish that Tidus and Kimahri actually loved one another but hopefully that'll come later. ;) I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. Chapter length was perfect btw. ^^
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Reviewed By: Mr.Christie On: November 16, 2006 00:50 PST
Comment/Review:
Woot! Another great chapter and the promise of more to come! I hope it comes out soon, cause the cliffhanger is going to kill me. Plus, you write the most wonderful smut. I liked the drama in this chapter and how you show how Tidus is slowly coming to terms with being mated to a Ronso. I could totally see those bastards doing something like that to poor Kimahri, but I'm sure he'll make them wish they were never born. *evil smirk* As always, keep up the good writing and update quick, cause I'm looking forward to it! :)
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Reviewed By: DemiKusanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 07:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you've reached above and beyond my exspectations. I was absolutely thrilled throughout the second chapter and had the hardest of times trying to keep myself from scrolling down and seeing just what you would have happen next before even finishing the paragraph before it. If I applauded you before right now I'm giving you a standing ovation ^________^ I an extremely pleased and hope that you would continue this story.
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Reviewed By: Mr.Christie On: October 15, 2006 02:24 PDT
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Thank you for that chapter, it was as good as I hoped it would be. I hope you don't stop there, as I am enjoying your unique pairing and view-points as well as the pleasure of reading a well written story. And remember, you can never post too much at one time! ;D
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: vixie_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 20:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
dude...I...I'm like totally speechless...I'm not sure if to like laugh about how funny Tidus is running and the fact that Kimarhi still wants to do him...or to like say this is the freakiest things I have ever read...It was like...so wrong, but I couldn't look away...so...UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Title: Bioxz... Master of FFX Yaoi
Reviewed By: Shad-ai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you've proven to be better than all the rest. Once I saw Chapter 2 in place, I was anxious to read it, but damn. It blew me away. Once again... ((OVERKILL)) You are the true master.
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Title: Praise Be To Bioxz
Reviewed By: Shad-ai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 00:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. Yevon. I loved this fic. I don't see very many Final Fantasy X yaoi fics, and the ones I have seen have been good, but this blew them all away. I really hope you get the next chapter up very soon. I can't wait to see what our beloved Ronso has in store for our Star Player of the Zanarkand Abes. Compared to other FFX fanfics, there is only one way to explain this... ((OVERKILL))
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Reviewed By: DemiKusanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 18:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
I must say that I loved this story and would love it even more if you continued. The ending and the realization was totally unexpected. *applaudes* very well written^^
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Reviewed By: Mr.Christie On: October 03, 2006 00:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very interesting pairing done in a very unique way, I very much liked this. I found your portrayal of Tidus and Kimahri to be very in-character. I liked the imaginative imagery :) and I especially liked the way Kimahri gave the scent no quarter or mercy. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter, both to see the reactions of everyone else (if they find out), and because I, like most everyone else, am a huge fan of well-written smut! ;D
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