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"Total Knockout" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ]
 Reviewed By: Pinku [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 10, 2008 20:57 CDT
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Ahh! Gotta say, I love rereading this story. I can't put it into words so well, but you're so great at making a lot of, "D:" moments, and they're always so very hilarious!
 Reviewed By: Cynbad146  On: March 05, 2008 20:13 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Ithilwen, I was just hoping two days ago that you would show up with a chapter. Somehow, you must have had some kind of intuition. Your stories are always entertaining, and you really interject the humor at the right times. I am still part of your fan base. Maybe your next story will have a good romance. Your stories are definitely a good setting for it. What ever happen to that futuristic story you were working on? Do not stay away so long next time! Thanks for sharing, Cynbad146
 Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2008 06:30 CST
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What a way to start the day! Im reading this in the morning before I go to work and I laughed out loud--of course, nobody else is home, so it's not so inappropriate. Thanks for the great start to my day!
 Reviewed By: Pinku [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2008 00:21 CST
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Ahh, this was a really refreshing read. XD I'm having a hard time finding things to say because the characterization and imagery is really rich and engaging (so nothing jars the reader out of reading :3). Thank you for always posting fun stories!
 Title: Chuckle
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 10, 2007 10:57 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I've always enjoyed your writing. Came across this little jewel this morning and went from chuckles to belly laughs to snorts and back to chuckles again. Well done! I'm looking forward to the battle between the rivals. iPoe
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 26, 2007 20:48 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Am lmao at the moment, lol. great chap here, and love the commentary on the whole thing, that was great. Some spelling boo-boos, but that's about it tho. Poor Kags, she just didn't think he'd show up? Naa, this is Inu here, of course he will, lol. Great chap and getting better. Update when ya can! ;)
 Reviewed By: Cynbad146  On: September 26, 2007 19:45 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I always have such fun when I read your work, Ithilwen. "Controlled avalanche" was pretty good as a description. I enjoyed every bit of the chapter. It's going to be great to see InuYasha tangle with Hojo. Hojo always seems to be so lucky, that I am sure he will not be a pushover. Kagome's friends are little scarey with the Hojo comments. Great writing, wish I could read you more often. Wish you the best and keep bakin'em! Cynbad146
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2007 23:39 CDT
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I KNOW ONE! I KNOW ONE! # give a man a fire and he's warm for a day... but... set fire to him and he's warm for the rest of his life # >=) . . . some parts of that had me waking people up with my laughter. good chapter, quite entertaining. ciao! ginny
 Reviewed By: YangofYin [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2007 23:27 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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You are too funny. My favorite lines were the part where Inuyasha was remembering the times he shotpunted Shippo into the stratosphere and remembering the lectures. I laughed my butt off. I'm pretty sure I scared my roommate. Thanks. So, how bad will Hojo get his butt kicked? Or will Kagome go and rescue Hojo from Inuyasha? I'm banking on the latter hoping for the former!! ^_^ Cant's wait for the next chapter!!
 Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing(nsi)  On: September 06, 2007 14:11 CDT
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lol @ this chapter. Full of fun lulz. Keep it up!
 Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing(nsi)  On: September 06, 2007 14:11 CDT
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lol @ this chapter. Full of fun lulz. Keep it up!
 Reviewed By: Cynbad146  On: September 06, 2007 06:47 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I love your humor Ithilwen. The story is really good! Cynbad146
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2007 00:45 CDT
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"Do I look like an idiot to you?" i have just hit my wall and i'm going to bed, i just wanted to say goo chapter and good nighht. ~thanks ginny . . . please pretend this was witty and relevent. thanx again
 Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 21, 2007 13:11 CDT
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Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You have a well orgainized and extremely humerous fiction in the workings here. I like the balance you have of Kagome's wishing for a normal life and InuYasha's demand for her to return with him. Neither part is over done. I am enjoying the thought of Inu fighting Hojo immensely. Keep up the writing, you're doing awesome!
 Reviewed By: Cynbad146  On: July 01, 2007 16:10 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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The rep-ar-tee'(with heavy french accent) between InuYasha and the two losers was pretty funny. What will happen when Inu and Kags meet up. Keep going Ithilwen, the suspense is killing me. Cynbad146
 Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2007 04:49 CDT
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I'm really glad you're updating this little jewel again! And the Darcy moments.... *snickers into hand* I sure hope you told Naimh about this, because she'll have a ball with it. I'll be looking forward to your new chapters on this one, Wenwen! I've missed you! Haven't seen you much on Z! recently. ^v^ Pop up there some, ok? I miss getting bawdy with you.
 Title: ch 1 - 2
Reviewed By: Cynbad146  On: March 23, 2007 00:12 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Hey! Let me drag that ole majorette/I mean cheerleading uniform of mine out. I was so glad to see you writing again that I felt like rah-rah-ing. My favorite parts were the funny lines by Souta, regarding the "crazy demon" and the "doll." I know that it will be great when InuYasha meets up with Hojo or Cola boy. Can not wait til you list it here. Missed reading you, Cynbad146
 Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 22, 2007 19:49 CDT
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Haha, very cute. I can't wait for the third chapter. Good luck with life!!
 Title: trinity757575@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: trinity757575 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 27, 2006 01:26 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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LOL This story seems like it's going to be a great laugh-out-loud story! Can't wait to read how Kagome is going to explain Inuyasha to her friends, and her surprise at seeing that he found her. Go Souta, that should teach Kagome of making fun people's little secrets,yeh! Can't wait for the next chappy, intel then I'll be reading yeah,trinity.
 Reviewed By: Cynbad146  On: October 26, 2006 21:10 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I liked the one-shot. The sneaky ending was not expected. Keep up the good work. Cynbad146
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 25, 2006 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Now this is funny, lol. Kagome thinks shes getting a day away from a certain over-possessive Dog-Demon eh? Heh...guess again, lmao. Should be very interesting when he catches up with her. Update when you can. :D
 Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 25, 2006 19:52 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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LOL. Hello Kitty ,huh? ^_^ Please update.
 Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 25, 2006 13:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very amusing opening. Keep up the good work. :)

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